Unit 3-4 写作专训课件 2024-2025学年人教版九年级英语全册 （河南地区）

写作专训　Section B 3a～3b Unit 3　Could you please tell me where the restrooms are？ [经典例题] 假设你是刘彬，你的外国朋友Paul想到你们学校参观，请根据所给 地图，用英语写一篇短文，告诉他去你们学校的路线。 要求：词数100左右。 返回目录 [高分范文] Dear Paul， ① I’m excited to hear that you’re coming to our school. Let me tell you how to get to it. ② When you get off the train， please walk out of the railway station and go along North Street until you see the roundabout ahead. Go around the roundabout into East Street. Walk on， and turn right at the corner. ③ Then walk straight down South Street and soon you will see a hospital on your right. Walk on till you reach the end of the street. You’ll find our school on your left. You won’t miss it. 返回目录 Welcome to our school！ ④ I’m looking forward to seeing you. Yours， Liu Bin [名师点评] 短文阐述了去刘彬所在学校的具体路线，路线描述清晰，使Paul能 够顺利到达该学校。 ① 开篇点明刘彬听到Paul要来的兴奋心情。 ② 使用连词When、 until具体描述行走路线。 ③ 句中并列句的恰当运用体现了作者熟练应用复杂句式的写作 功底。 ④ 句中写出了刘彬对朋友到来的期盼之情。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. I’m excited to hear that you’re arriving at our town. 2. Could you please tell me how to get to the library？ [中间句] 1. The supermarket is between the flower store and the bookstore. 2. Turn right at the traffic lights and the bank is on your left. [结尾句] 1. Welcome to our city！ 2. I’m looking forward to your reply. 返回目录 [名言警句] 1. More haste， less speed. 欲速则不达。 2. Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. 生活没有目标， 就像航海没有罗盘。 返回目录 [小试身手] 假设你是苗慧，今年暑假，你想参加英语夏令营。请根据以下要点 用英语写一封信，向负责人马先生咨询一些信息。 要点：1. 介绍自己的一些基本信息；2. 礼貌地询问相关信息；3. 表 达感激之情。 要求：1. 语句通顺，行文流畅；2. 词数100左右。可适当发挥。 返回目录 [思路点拨] ① 时态：一般现在时；② 人称：第一人称和第二人称；③ 写作 时：第一段介绍自己的基本信息，第二段详细询问关于夏令营的信息， 最后一段表达自己的感激之情。 返回目录 [写作提纲] 返回目录 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　I’m Miao Hui， a Grade Nine student at Yangguang Middle School. I love English and I hope to improve my English. So I’d like to go to the English Summer Camp. I’m writing to know more information about the summer camp.　 [妙笔生花] Dear Mr.Ma， 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　Could you please tell me when the summer camp will begin and how long it will last？ I also want to know what we will do during the summer camp. Will it be fun？ And could you please tell me where we will stay？ I’m wondering if the hotel is clean and comfortable. What’s more， I wonder how much it will cost and what I need to take， please.　 ⁠ ⁠ Yours， Miao Hui 　I would appreciate it if you help me and I’m looking forward to your reply.　 返回目录 Unit 4　I used to be afraid of the dark [经典例题] （2024·驻马店确山县期中）现如今，随着国家全面小康社会的建 成和乡村振兴计划的开展，各地都发生了很大变化。请根据自己看到的 实际情况，以“Changes in my hometown”为题，并根据要点和要求用 英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己家乡的变化。 要点：1. 家乡的过去；2. 家乡的现在；3. 变化的原因： the government’s good policy（政策）， hard-working people 返回目录 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、地名和学校名称；2. 词数 100左右。 [高分范文] Changes in my hometown ① In the past， my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was serious， and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic wasn’t convenient， so few visitors came here. 返回目录 ② Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The government has made good policy and the hard-working people live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. More and more people have bought their own computers， mobile phones and private cars！ The environment has been more beautiful. ③ Every year， thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my hometown. ④ I feel satisfied with the life in my hometown. I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future. 返回目录 [名师点评] 短文阐述了作者家乡的巨大变化，加深了大家对国家乡村振兴计划 的全面认识。 ① 开篇点题，说明作者家乡过去的情况。 ② 用现在完成时态概括说明家乡的变化。 ③ 句中短语thousands of people from all over the world的恰当运用体 现了作者扎实的写作功底。 ④ 句中作者对家乡变化的总结体现了作者的综合归纳、总结能 力。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Great changes have taken place in our country in recent years. 2. How times flies！ I’ve changed a lot during these years. [中间句] 1. I used to be shy but now I become more and more outgoing. 2. Instead of giving up， I chose to change. 返回目录 [结尾句] 1. All in all/In short/In a word， I’m proud of the changes in my hometown. 2. Thanks to the teachers and classmates， I’ve learned so much！ [名言警句] 1. A fall into the pit， a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。 2. Habit is a second nature. 习惯成自然。 返回目录 [小试身手] 我们的每次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“The biggest personal change I’ve ever made”为题，根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1. 变化是什么；2. 变化是如何发生的；3. 变化后有何感受。 要求：1. 语句通顺，行文流畅；2. 词数100左右。 返回目录 [思路点拨] ① 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；② 人称：第一人称；③ 写作 时：第一段点明自己最大的变化是什么，第二段详述这种变化是如何发 生的，最后一段简述自己变化后的感受。 返回目录 [写作提纲] 返回目录 The biggest personal change I’ve ever made ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　The biggest personal change I have ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.　 　When I was a child， I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later， my mother always read stories to me and bought me books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading， I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to kill my free time.　 Books are my friends. And reading will benefit me a lot.　 [妙笔生花] 返回目录 $$