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专题18 写作专题技巧讲练一（15篇满分范文） 核心考点聚焦 1 考点一：词汇篇：善用高级词汇，词组优先 1 考点二：活用多种句型 1 考点三：妙用关联词 5 考点四：作文评分标准 6 当堂限时检测 7 课后提升专练 15 核心考点聚焦 考点一：词汇篇：善用高级词汇，词组优先 勤奋的 hard-working—diligent 聪明的clever—intelligent 重要的important—essential 美丽的beautiful—attractive 开心的happy—delightful 有害的bad—be harmful to 有意义的meaningful 独立的independent 有责任的responsible 方便的convenient 有必要的necessary 认为think—hold the viewpoint that 阻止 stop—prevent from doing sth 解决solve—deal with 给give—provide with 提高improve—make progress 期待expect—look forward to doing sth. 尽力try—try one’s best to do 能够can—be able to do sth 满意satisfy—be satisfied with 使用use—make full use of 扮演act—play an important part in 注意focus—pay attention to doing sth 考点二：活用多种句型 一、基本句式：连接各类从句的连接词： 时间状语从句：when, not…until, as soon as 目的状语从句：so that+clause; to do（为了） 结果状语从句：so…that+clause, too…to do（太……以至于……） 条件状语从句：if, unless（除非）, as long as（只要） 让步状语从句：though（尽管，不与but连用）, although（尽管，不与but连用）, even though(即使), even if（即使） no matter what/when/where/who/which/how （无论…） 比较：as…as…, not so…as…, than 二、高级句式： 结尾句式：1. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that …（议论文较多） Accordingly/Consequently/As a result, it is not difficult to draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that... 题： 综上所述，我们可以得出结论电脑的利大于弊 译文1：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that computers do more good than harm 译文2：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the advantages of computers outweigh the disadvantages. 2. In a word/To sum up/ On the whole, we should pay close attention to sth …（议论文） 题：总而言之，我们应该密切关注日常用水问题。 译文1: In a word/To sum up, we should pay close attention to daily water. 3. Only in this way can we (have a bright future). (倒装句型， 可接承句型2） 题1：只有这样，缺水问题才能得到改善 译文：Only in this way, can water shortage be improved. 题2： 只有这样，我们才能提高我们的学习能力。 译文：Only in this way, can we promote our learning ability. 批注：此句型，提醒下学生的语序问题，一般疑问句; 同样如果学生程度还不错，可以导入Only的其他倒装。 4. As long as ...只要 (连词 后接句子 多种文体） 题1：只要我们每天坚持阅读一点点，阅读习惯一定能养成。 译文：As long as we insist on reading a little every day, we are bound to/are sure to get into a good habit of reading. 题2：只要压岁钱使用得当，这个传统可以一直传承下去。 译文：As long as lucky money is used in a proper and wise way, this tradition can continue everlastingly/forever. 三、专题精讲 1. Nothing is 比较级 than doing sth Nobody/No one is 比较级 than sb 例1：再没有比听莫扎特的乐曲更让我高兴的事了 译文：Nothing gives me more pleasure/is more pleasant than listening to Mozart. 批注：此句比Listening to Mozart gives me the most pleasure.更为高档。 例2：周末能睡个大懒觉最让我开心了。 译文：Nothing is more enjoyable than staying in bed late at weekends. 2. Whoever/whatever/whenever/wherever/however 不论是谁/不论什么/不论何时/不论哪里/不论多么 例1：不论是谁违反交通规则都将受惩罚。 译文：Whoever disobeys the traffic rules will be punished. 例2：不论他演什么，Nicolas Cage 总能将观众吸引。 译文：Whatever role he plays, Nicolas Cage has the ability to make the audience attracted. Whatever role he plays, Nicolas Cage always enables to attract the audience. 例3：不论我们多忙，都应该挤出点时间阅读。 译文：However busy we are, we should squeeze out/make some time to read. 3. The trouble/problem is that... The fact is that.... One advantage is that..... Another advantage is that.... One reason is that.... Another reason is that... 例1： 问题是很少有人意识到它的严重性。 译文：The problem is that few people be aware how serious it is. 4. Not only（句子）...but also（完整句子） (半倒装）(not only 一般疑问句语序） 批注：此句型适合程度较好的学生，注意语序问题。 例1：张全蛋不但中文很好，英文口语也很赞。 译文：：Not only is Michael Jack excellent in Chinese, but also he masters/is good at spoken English 例2: 空气污染不但给人们的日常生活带来不便，也给身体健康带来了危害。 译文：Not only does air pollution bring much convenience to people’s daily life, but also it does harm to health. 5.  It’s high time that ... 是.....的时候 . 批注：此句型要提醒学生注意从句的时态为一般过去时 例题：我们是时候采取一些措施结束这种情况。 译文：It is high time that we took measures to put an end to this situation. 6. … in the following ways. …用下列方法。 … for three main reasons. …有三个主要理由。 To …, there are at least three things we can do. 要…¸至少我们可做三件事。 例1：我用下列方法增加信心。 译文：I increase my confidence in the following ways. 例2：人们学外语有三个理由。 译文：People learn a foreign language for three main reasons. 例3：为了保持健康¸我们每天至少可做三件事。 译文：To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day. 考点三：妙用关联词 一、关联词 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor 2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but, however, although\though, after all, anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore, since, for, as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 二、谚语 1. Practice makes perfect. 2. Think twice before you do. 3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 4. Do as the Romans do. 5. The early bird catches the worm. 6. Failure is the mother of success. 7. It is no use crying over spilt milk. 8. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9. All roads lead to Rome. 10. Never too old to learn. 11. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 考点四：作文评分标准 英语作文分为三大部分进行评分：内容8分，语言8分，组织结构分4分。 　　（一）内容： 　　7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。 　　5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。 　　2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。 　　0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。 　　（二）语言： 　　①词数：每少5个字扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。 　　②拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。 　　③语法：同② 　　④标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。 （三）组织结构： 　　①内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给4-3分。 　　②内容充实、不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。 　　③一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。 　　④内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。 　　⑤通篇句型、句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。 （四）词数： ①词数不足30个者，给分以8分为限； ②词数不足40个者，给分以11分为限； ③词数不足50个者，给分以14分为限；(以上3点应结合内容和语言各项综合考虑。) ④词数在50－59个之间者，每少5个扣0.5分； ⑤只写出个别单词、词不成句者，则给0分。 （五）划分等级： ①优秀学生作文：结构清晰、开头语与结尾语短小精悍、能使用精彩句或词语,这是平时训练有素之结果，即为A类作文。 ②中等偏上学生作文：结构蛮清晰，但是句子中出现少许语法错误，即为B类作文。 ③中等学生作文：结构上稍有欠缺，句中有少许语法错误，即为C类作文。 ④中等偏下学生作文：从结构上来说，阅卷者能看到学生所要表述的内容，但是语法错误铺天盖地，此类作文为D类作文。 ⑤学困生作文：这些学生对于作文来说，一是看不懂，则无从下手，所以只能抄个题目，然后或是空着，或是写个拼音等等敷衍了事；二是有一部分学生纯粹是抄阅读理解中的句子，结果可想而知，只能以0分收场。此类0到4分作文为E类作文。 当堂限时检测 1．随着互联网的发展和普及，网上购物在我们的生活中变得越来越普遍了。请你以“Shopping Online”为题谈一下网上购物的利与弊，告诫人们理智网购。 提示： （1）优点：在家“逛商店”，不受时间限制；容易找到自己要买的东西；有的东西便宜、省钱； （2）缺点：不能亲眼看到商品，质量难以保证；不能享受上街购物的乐趣。 要求：（1）提示中的各点都必须在文中体现，可适当发挥； （2）语句通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； （3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名，否则此题一律不得分。 Shopping Online Shopping online is a new way of shopping. It has a lot of advantages. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字） 学校的漫画社（Cartoon Club）、信息技术社（IT Club）、茶艺社（Tea-making Club）和阅读社（Reading Club）正在招募社长（club secretary）。假设你是吴磊，结合你的特长与爱好，给负责社团工作的王老师（Mr Wang）写一份自我介绍，参与其中一个社团社长的竞选。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，校英语报正在举行主题为“To Be a Better Self”的征文活动，请根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括导图所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数 80-100，标题已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．随着人们生活水平的提高，中学生的零花钱也越来越多了。同学们，你们都有零花钱吧，你的零花钱来自哪里？平时是怎样经营的？怎样花零花钱更加有意义？请结合以上内容谈谈自己零花钱的几种用法。以My pocket money为题写一篇英语作文。 注意： 1. 行文连贯，时态正确，书写工整。 2. 词数不少于80词。 2. 文中不得出现与本人相关的真实姓名、校名及其它相关信息。 提示词:  manage 经营    meaningful 有意义的 My pocket money 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5．随着互联网的发展和普及，越来越多的同学选择网购。上周，你们班进行了一次购物习惯的调查，请按下表统计结果，写一份调查报告，并谈谈你的观点。 调查结果 理由 30%的学生更愿意在商店购物 1. 和好友一起外出购物 2.（请合理发挥1-2点） 70%的学生更喜欢网购 1. 更方便 2.（请合理发挥1-2点） 你的观点：（请合理发挥1-2点） 注意： 1. 词数：70词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Last week, we did a survey about shopping habits in our class. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．我国的传统节日源远流长，越来越多的外国人开始热衷于了解中华传统节日。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展中国传统节日的线上国际交流活动。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一个中国的传统节日，包括时间、庆祝方式 (活动及食物)、节日的意义及你的感受等。 要求： 1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据提示内容适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。 My Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 课后提升专练 7．假设你是李明，你的外国网友Eric在网上看到几幅中国剪纸，他对此很感兴趣，并且给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请你给他回复邮件，至少从历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术。 要求： 1. 涵盖所有要点，并做适当补充。 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 8．假如你是Linlin，请依据以下思维导图，向你的英国朋友Sandro介绍一下中国的地理位置以及传统文化。可以适当补充，不少于70字。 Dear Sandro, I’m happy to hear from you. Let me introduce China to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linlin 9．假如你是李华，你的朋友张芸来信询问你最喜欢的动物，请你用英文给她写一封来信，谈谈你最喜欢的动物。 提示： 1. What kind of animals do you like? 2. Where are they from? 3. What are the animals like? 4. What do you think of them? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．“汉语桥”中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友 Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。 中华武术 (Chinese martial arts) 京剧 (Peking Opera) 中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy) 中文歌曲 (Chinese songs) 中华美食 (Chinese food)   中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Say goodbye to ______”（根据提示，以“对______的告别”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 提示：生命中有许多遇见，许多期待，也终究有许多告别。我们会告别一段美好的时光，一份亲密的关系，一个难缠的坏习惯……告别意味着终将离去的珍惜，也可能是饱含期待的成长。（注意：不得出现考生姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇不得分。） Say goodbye to ______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．为全面贯彻党的教育方针，厚植爱党、爱国、爱人民、爱社会主义的情感，努力培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。我县近期将举行英语征文比赛，假如你是某学校九年级的学生李华，请根据以下要点、提示和要求，以“How to be a good student in the new era”为题写一篇参赛稿。 要点： 品德 学业 生活 热爱祖国 诚实友善 勤奋学习 合作互助 增强体质 勤劳自立 提示：the new era 新时代 要求：不得出现所在学校的校名和师生名等相关信息，80词左右。 How to be a good student in the new era _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．动物是我们人类的朋友，请你以“My favourite animal”为题，写一篇短文，80词左右。 写作要点： 1. What does it look like? 2. What’s its lifestyle? 3. Why do you love it? 4. … 注意事项： 1. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥。 My favourite animal _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．以“我最喜欢的中国传统技能”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评价。 The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考） 1. What is your favourite Chinese traditional skills?(Paper Cutting; Clay Sculpture泥塑; Shadow Play皮影戏; Lion Dance舞狮) 2. Why do you like it?(introduce it) 3. What will you do to carry on and develop it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．Read the given quote from Steve Jobs and write at least 60 words to explain how you understand it. （读所给引自乔布斯的一句话，用至少 60 词谈谈你对这句话的理解和观点。） Your time is limited, so don’t waste it living someone else’s life.              —Steve Jobs （注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题18 写作专题技巧讲练一（15篇满分范文） 核心考点聚焦 1 考点一：词汇篇：善用高级词汇，词组优先 1 考点二：活用多种句型 1 考点三：妙用关联词 5 考点四：作文评分标准 6 当堂限时检测 7 课后提升专练 15 核心考点聚焦 考点一：词汇篇：善用高级词汇，词组优先 勤奋的 hard-working—diligent 聪明的clever—intelligent 重要的important—essential 美丽的beautiful—attractive 开心的happy—delightful 有害的bad—be harmful to 有意义的meaningful 独立的independent 有责任的responsible 方便的convenient 有必要的necessary 认为think—hold the viewpoint that 阻止 stop—prevent from doing sth 解决solve—deal with 给give—provide with 提高improve—make progress 期待expect—look forward to doing sth. 尽力try—try one’s best to do 能够can—be able to do sth 满意satisfy—be satisfied with 使用use—make full use of 扮演act—play an important part in 注意focus—pay attention to doing sth 考点二：活用多种句型 一、基本句式：连接各类从句的连接词： 时间状语从句：when, not…until, as soon as 目的状语从句：so that+clause; to do（为了） 结果状语从句：so…that+clause, too…to do（太……以至于……） 条件状语从句：if, unless（除非）, as long as（只要） 让步状语从句：though（尽管，不与but连用）, although（尽管，不与but连用）, even though(即使), even if（即使） no matter what/when/where/who/which/how （无论…） 比较：as…as…, not so…as…, than 二、高级句式： 结尾句式：1. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that …（议论文较多） Accordingly/Consequently/As a result, it is not difficult to draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that... 题： 综上所述，我们可以得出结论电脑的利大于弊 译文1：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that computers do more good than harm 译文2：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the advantages of computers outweigh the disadvantages. 2. In a word/To sum up/ On the whole, we should pay close attention to sth …（议论文） 题：总而言之，我们应该密切关注日常用水问题。 译文1: In a word/To sum up, we should pay close attention to daily water. 3. Only in this way can we (have a bright future). (倒装句型， 可接承句型2） 题1：只有这样，缺水问题才能得到改善 译文：Only in this way, can water shortage be improved. 题2： 只有这样，我们才能提高我们的学习能力。 译文：Only in this way, can we promote our learning ability. 批注：此句型，提醒下学生的语序问题，一般疑问句; 同样如果学生程度还不错，可以导入Only的其他倒装。 4. As long as ...只要 (连词 后接句子 多种文体） 题1：只要我们每天坚持阅读一点点，阅读习惯一定能养成。 译文：As long as we insist on reading a little every day, we are bound to/are sure to get into a good habit of reading. 题2：只要压岁钱使用得当，这个传统可以一直传承下去。 译文：As long as lucky money is used in a proper and wise way, this tradition can continue everlastingly/forever. 三、专题精讲 1. Nothing is 比较级 than doing sth Nobody/No one is 比较级 than sb 例1：再没有比听莫扎特的乐曲更让我高兴的事了 译文：Nothing gives me more pleasure/is more pleasant than listening to Mozart. 批注：此句比Listening to Mozart gives me the most pleasure.更为高档。 例2：周末能睡个大懒觉最让我开心了。 译文：Nothing is more enjoyable than staying in bed late at weekends. 2. Whoever/whatever/whenever/wherever/however 不论是谁/不论什么/不论何时/不论哪里/不论多么 例1：不论是谁违反交通规则都将受惩罚。 译文：Whoever disobeys the traffic rules will be punished. 例2：不论他演什么，Nicolas Cage 总能将观众吸引。 译文：Whatever role he plays, Nicolas Cage has the ability to make the audience attracted. Whatever role he plays, Nicolas Cage always enables to attract the audience. 例3：不论我们多忙，都应该挤出点时间阅读。 译文：However busy we are, we should squeeze out/make some time to read. 3. The trouble/problem is that... The fact is that.... One advantage is that..... Another advantage is that.... One reason is that.... Another reason is that... 例1： 问题是很少有人意识到它的严重性。 译文：The problem is that few people be aware how serious it is. 4. Not only（句子）...but also（完整句子） (半倒装）(not only 一般疑问句语序） 批注：此句型适合程度较好的学生，注意语序问题。 例1：张全蛋不但中文很好，英文口语也很赞。 译文：：Not only is Michael Jack excellent in Chinese, but also he masters/is good at spoken English 例2: 空气污染不但给人们的日常生活带来不便，也给身体健康带来了危害。 译文：Not only does air pollution bring much convenience to people’s daily life, but also it does harm to health. 5.  It’s high time that ... 是.....的时候 . 批注：此句型要提醒学生注意从句的时态为一般过去时 例题：我们是时候采取一些措施结束这种情况。 译文：It is high time that we took measures to put an end to this situation. 6. … in the following ways. …用下列方法。 … for three main reasons. …有三个主要理由。 To …, there are at least three things we can do. 要…¸至少我们可做三件事。 例1：我用下列方法增加信心。 译文：I increase my confidence in the following ways. 例2：人们学外语有三个理由。 译文：People learn a foreign language for three main reasons. 例3：为了保持健康¸我们每天至少可做三件事。 译文：To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day. 考点三：妙用关联词 一、关联词 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor 2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but, however, although\though, after all, anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore, since, for, as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 二、谚语 1. Practice makes perfect. 2. Think twice before you do. 3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 4. Do as the Romans do. 5. The early bird catches the worm. 6. Failure is the mother of success. 7. It is no use crying over spilt milk. 8. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9. All roads lead to Rome. 10. Never too old to learn. 11. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 考点四：作文评分标准 英语作文分为三大部分进行评分：内容8分，语言8分，组织结构分4分。 　　（一）内容： 　　7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。 　　5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。 　　2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。 　　0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。 　　（二）语言： 　　①词数：每少5个字扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。 　　②拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。 　　③语法：同② 　　④标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。 （三）组织结构： 　　①内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给4-3分。 　　②内容充实、不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。 　　③一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。 　　④内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。 　　⑤通篇句型、句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。 （四）词数： ①词数不足30个者，给分以8分为限； ②词数不足40个者，给分以11分为限； ③词数不足50个者，给分以14分为限；(以上3点应结合内容和语言各项综合考虑。) ④词数在50－59个之间者，每少5个扣0.5分； ⑤只写出个别单词、词不成句者，则给0分。 （五）划分等级： ①优秀学生作文：结构清晰、开头语与结尾语短小精悍、能使用精彩句或词语,这是平时训练有素之结果，即为A类作文。 ②中等偏上学生作文：结构蛮清晰，但是句子中出现少许语法错误，即为B类作文。 ③中等学生作文：结构上稍有欠缺，句中有少许语法错误，即为C类作文。 ④中等偏下学生作文：从结构上来说，阅卷者能看到学生所要表述的内容，但是语法错误铺天盖地，此类作文为D类作文。 ⑤学困生作文：这些学生对于作文来说，一是看不懂，则无从下手，所以只能抄个题目，然后或是空着，或是写个拼音等等敷衍了事；二是有一部分学生纯粹是抄阅读理解中的句子，结果可想而知，只能以0分收场。此类0到4分作文为E类作文。 当堂限时检测 1．随着互联网的发展和普及，网上购物在我们的生活中变得越来越普遍了。请你以“Shopping Online”为题谈一下网上购物的利与弊，告诫人们理智网购。 提示： （1）优点：在家“逛商店”，不受时间限制；容易找到自己要买的东西；有的东西便宜、省钱； （2）缺点：不能亲眼看到商品，质量难以保证；不能享受上街购物的乐趣。 要求：（1）提示中的各点都必须在文中体现，可适当发挥； （2）语句通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； （3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名，否则此题一律不得分。 Shopping Online Shopping online is a new way of shopping. It has a lot of advantages. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Shopping Online Shopping online is a new way of shopping. It has a lot of advantages. First, you don’t need to go out to shop. And you can shop whenever you like as online shops are open 24 hours a day. Second, if you want to buy something, it is very easy to find them. Third, it is often cheap to buy something on the Internet. But there are also some disadvantages. You can’t see the things, so you don’t know whether they are good or not. Also, you can’t enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends when shopping. All in all, we should think twice before shopping. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍网购的利弊”；以及“号召理性购物”等要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍网购的优势。 第二步，介绍网购的劣势。 第三步，收尾并号召大家理智购物。 [亮点词汇] ①go out外出 ②talk with与……交谈 [高分句型] ①Third, it is often cheap to buy something on the Internet.（it is adj to do sth句型） ②You can’t see the things, so you don’t know whether they are good or not.（so连接的并列句） 2．Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字） 学校的漫画社（Cartoon Club）、信息技术社（IT Club）、茶艺社（Tea-making Club）和阅读社（Reading Club）正在招募社长（club secretary）。假设你是吴磊，结合你的特长与爱好，给负责社团工作的王老师（Mr Wang）写一份自我介绍，参与其中一个社团社长的竞选。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, my name is Wu Lei. My hobby is reading. Since I was a child, I’ve been reading. And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club. In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better. I really hope that I can get the chance to be the leader. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为竞选文稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。结合特长与爱好，写出竞选理由； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① choose to do选择做 ② in addition另外 ③ get the chance to do得到做某事的机会 [高分句型] ① Since I was a child, I’ve been reading.（since引导的时间状语从句） ② And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club.（why引导的定语从句） ③ In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句） 3．假如你是李华，校英语报正在举行主题为“To Be a Better Self”的征文活动，请根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括导图所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数 80-100，标题已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To Be a Better Self In the pursuit of personal growth, it is essential to focus on various aspects of our lives. Here are some ways. Firstly, we should strive to improve study. We can plan to develop a more effective study routine by setting specific goals. Secondly, I believe that improving relationships with others is vital. To achieve this, we should make an effort to listen more actively, communicate effectively, and show empathy towards others. Thirdly, improving the environment or society is an important aspect. We can engage in community service, whether it’s helping the elderly or organizing charity events, to make a positive impact on society. Lastly, I believe that we should focus on maintaining a healthy lifestyle by exercising regularly and eating a balanced diet. In conclusion, becoming a better self is a continuous journey that requires effort and dedication. Let us all strive to be better selves. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，根据导图提示，介绍如何做更好的自己； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in the pursuit of 追求 ②focus on 专注于 ③strive to 努力 ④show empathy towards sb.对某人表示同情 ⑤engage in参与 [高分句型] In conclusion, becoming a better self is a continuous journey that requires effort and dedication. (that引导定语从句) 4．随着人们生活水平的提高，中学生的零花钱也越来越多了。同学们，你们都有零花钱吧，你的零花钱来自哪里？平时是怎样经营的？怎样花零花钱更加有意义？请结合以上内容谈谈自己零花钱的几种用法。以My pocket money为题写一篇英语作文。 注意： 1. 行文连贯，时态正确，书写工整。 2. 词数不少于80词。 2. 文中不得出现与本人相关的真实姓名、校名及其它相关信息。 提示词:  manage 经营    meaningful 有意义的 My pocket money __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My pocket money My pocket money mainly comes from my parents. Sometimes my grandparents give me some. I often use it to buy some school things, like pens, exercise books and rulers. Once or twice, I buy some snacks. I think I have spent a lot on some unnecessary things these years, so I decide to manage my pocket money better. I will divide my pocket money into three parts. The first part will be for my daily life. The second part will be used for the gifts to my parents, teachers and friends. It can be quite useful on the festivals. I will use the third part to support further study, so I will save it in the bank. I’m sure my future life will be more meaningful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：根据题干介绍自己零花钱的用法，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍零花钱来自哪里； 第二步，介绍平时是怎么经营零花钱的； 第三步，表达自己将怎样更加有意义地花零花钱。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②divide sth into把……分成 ③be used for被用做 [高分句型] I think I have spent a lot on some unnecessary things these years, so I decide to manage my pocket money better. (think后跟宾语从句；so连接的并列句) 5．随着互联网的发展和普及，越来越多的同学选择网购。上周，你们班进行了一次购物习惯的调查，请按下表统计结果，写一份调查报告，并谈谈你的观点。 调查结果 理由 30%的学生更愿意在商店购物 1. 和好友一起外出购物 2.（请合理发挥1-2点） 70%的学生更喜欢网购 1. 更方便 2.（请合理发挥1-2点） 你的观点：（请合理发挥1-2点） 注意： 1. 词数：70词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Last week, we did a survey about shopping habits in our class. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last week, we did a survey about shopping habits in our class. Here’s the result. 30% of the students are more willing to shop in stores. Because they like going out and shopping with friends. They can also see the actual object. If they buy clothes, they can also try them on. However, 70% of the students prefer to shop on the Internet. They think it’s more convenient. Just by a click of the mouse, they can buy what they’ve interested in without going outdoors. What’s more, nearly all goods can be found online. I like online shopping because I don’t have much space and time. At the same time, I can find better prices on the Internet. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为调查报告； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意补充学生选择某种购物方式的理由和自己的观点，并适当添加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍关于学生购物习惯的调查结果； 第二步，逐点阐述，介绍学生选择商店购物或网购的理由是什么； 第三步，阐述自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be willing to do sth愿意做某事 ②try on试穿 ③prefer to do sth更喜欢做某事 ④be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①If they buy clothes, they can also try them on.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②Just by a click of the mouse, they can buy what they’ve interested in without going outdoors.（what引导的宾语从句） ③I like online shopping because I don’t have much space and time.（because引导的原因状语从句） 6．我国的传统节日源远流长，越来越多的外国人开始热衷于了解中华传统节日。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展中国传统节日的线上国际交流活动。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一个中国的传统节日，包括时间、庆祝方式 (活动及食物)、节日的意义及你的感受等。 要求： 1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据提示内容适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。 My Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival At my school, we are talking about how to introduce our traditional festival to the foreigners. My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival . The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone. I’m always happy at the Spring Festival. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：应用“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章围绕作者喜爱春节的原因展开，描述了春节期间的活动和欢乐氛围，要点清晰。考生应适当添加更多细节，如春节的特色装饰、与家人互动的具体场景等，突出对春节的喜爱。写作时注意语言表达的流畅性和准确性。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开篇点明最喜欢的中国传统节日是春节；   第二步，详细描述春节期间的各种活动，如家庭团聚、享用大餐、收红包、购物、看电视、读书、电话问候等； 第三步，总结表达在春节总是很开心。 [亮点词汇]   ①popular受欢迎的   ②get together团聚   ③delicious美味的   [高分句型] ① My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival. (because引导原因状语从句)   ② My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. (and表并列) 课后提升专练 7．假设你是李明，你的外国网友Eric在网上看到几幅中国剪纸，他对此很感兴趣，并且给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请你给他回复邮件，至少从历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术。 要求： 1. 涵盖所有要点，并做适当补充。 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Eric, You wanted to know about the Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it. Chinese paper cutting is one of the most popular Chinese traditional art forms. It has a long history of over 1,500 years. It is usually made of red paper. It sounds easy but difficult to do it. First, the red paper is usually folded several times. Then, it is cut into different shapes with scissors. It can be like birds, flowers, Chinese characters and so on. I think Chinese paper cutting is not only beautiful but also very useful. People usually put them on doors or windows to decorate houses. They are always seen as symbols of good wishes and a happy new year. More and more people are interested in it. I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cutting one day. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出写作目的是为了讲述一些有关中国剪纸的信息； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义”等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……制成 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③know about了解 [高分句型] ①People usually put them on doors or windows to decorate houses. (不定式作目的状语) ②I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cutting one day. (宾语从句) 8．假如你是Linlin，请依据以下思维导图，向你的英国朋友Sandro介绍一下中国的地理位置以及传统文化。可以适当补充，不少于70字。 Dear Sandro, I’m happy to hear from you. Let me introduce China to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linlin 【答案】例文 Dear Sandro, I’m happy to hear from you. Let me introduce China to you. First, China is in East Asia. It is a wonderful and safe country. People speak Chinese and English. The temperature is different. It is cold in winter and hot in summer. Pandas are our typical animals. They are a symbol of China now. Next, there are many great interests in China. The Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Terracotta Army and so on. Millions of tourists come here to have a visit every year. And we have lots of beautiful nature, and the Yangtze River is the longest river in China. It is amazing. Then, our people have lots of good virtues. We are friendly, helpful and hard-working. Many volunteers offer help to others. They volunteer to clean up the city parks, cheer up the sick students. We always help our parents and the old to do chores in and out our home. Last but not least, there are many great classics and stories in our country. Journey to the west is famous all over the world. I love the Monkey King, because he keeps helping the weak and never gives up. Welcome to visit China. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours, Linlin 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体介绍中国的地理位置、语言、气温以及典型动物； 第二步，介绍中国的名胜和自然情况； 第三步，介绍中国人民的美德； 第四步，介绍中国伟大的经典和故事； 第五步，表示欢迎和期待。 [亮点词汇] ① a symbol of……的象征 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ look forward to doing sth期待做某事 [高分句型] I love the Monkey King, because he keeps helping the weak and never gives up.（原因状语从句） 9．假如你是李华，你的朋友张芸来信询问你最喜欢的动物，请你用英文给她写一封来信，谈谈你最喜欢的动物。 提示： 1. What kind of animals do you like? 2. Where are they from? 3. What are the animals like? 4. What do you think of them? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear Zhang Yun,     I like animals very much and I can see many animals in my life. My favorite animals are pandas because they are very cute and nice. They come from Sichuan, China. They are black and white. They look fat and walk slowly. They like to eat bamboo. Most of the time, they’re eating. Pandas are the symbol of China. Now they are loved by people all over the world. I hope we all can protect pandas.     What’s your favorite animal? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文一封书信； ②时态：应使用一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点包括动物的种类、来源、特性和个人对动物的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。可以简单介绍自己对动物的喜爱，引出最喜欢的动物； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从动物的种类、来源、特性等方面详细描述最喜欢的动物； 第三步，书写结语。表达对动物的喜爱和希望与朋友分享这份喜爱的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①cute可爱的 ②symbol象征 ③look forward to doing期待做某事 [高分句型] ①My favorite animals are pandas because they are very cute and nice. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I hope we can all protect pandas. (I hope接宾语从句) 10．“汉语桥”中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友 Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。 中华武术 (Chinese martial arts) 京剧 (Peking Opera) 中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy) 中文歌曲 (Chinese songs) 中华美食 (Chinese food)   中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter,      I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting.     It has a history of more than 5,000 years. It is easily made. You only need some paper and a pair of scissors. You can change the paper into some different shapes, such as animals, flowers and so on. When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. It is a symbol of good luck. You can learn how to make Chinese paper-cutting by watching videos.     We also have other traditional culture. If you want to learn more, please tell me. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍剪纸是中国传统文化之一； 第二步，介绍剪纸的相关情况，包括它的历史，制作以及代表的意义。 第三步，表示自己希望得到对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②more than多于 ③change into把……变成…… ④and so on等等 ⑤a symbol of……的象征 ⑥look forward to期盼 [高分句型] ① I know you are interested in Chinese culture. (省略了that的宾语从句) ②Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting. (let引导的祈使句) ③When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. (when引导的时间状语从句) ④ If you want to learn more, please tell me. (if引导的条件状语从句) 11．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Say goodbye to ______”（根据提示，以“对______的告别”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 提示：生命中有许多遇见，许多期待，也终究有许多告别。我们会告别一段美好的时光，一份亲密的关系，一个难缠的坏习惯……告别意味着终将离去的珍惜，也可能是饱含期待的成长。（注意：不得出现考生姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇不得分。） Say goodbye to ______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Say Goodbye to a Bad Habit Today, I say goodbye to a troublesome bad habit that has been a constant companion in my life—my uncontrollable love for sweets. I used to snack on candies, chocolate, and other sugary treats all day long, without realizing the harm it was doing to my health. But now, I’ve decided to make a change. Goodbye, sugary snacks! Hello, healthy fruits and vegetables. I’m excited to embark on this new journey of healthier eating habits and feel better about myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕“对……的告别”进行展开，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，指明要告别的人或事物； 第二步，简单描写要告别的人或事物； 第三步，展望未来。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth.过去常常做某事 ②embark on着手，开始做某事 ③eating habits饮食习惯 [高分句型] I say goodbye to a troublesome bad habit that has been a constant companion in my life…（that引导的定语从句） 12．为全面贯彻党的教育方针，厚植爱党、爱国、爱人民、爱社会主义的情感，努力培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。我县近期将举行英语征文比赛，假如你是某学校九年级的学生李华，请根据以下要点、提示和要求，以“How to be a good student in the new era”为题写一篇参赛稿。 要点： 品德 学业 生活 热爱祖国 诚实友善 勤奋学习 合作互助 增强体质 勤劳自立 提示：the new era 新时代 要求：不得出现所在学校的校名和师生名等相关信息，80词左右。 How to be a good student in the new era _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to be a good student in the new era The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. First, we should have good qualities, such as loving our motherland and being honest and kind to others. Second, we should study hard and work as a team. We should also help each other. Last but not least, we should take exercise to build up our strength and be independent in our life. All in all, we should try our best to be good students to help make our country more powerful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇参赛稿，为材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍如何成为新时代的好学生，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍新时代的好学生应该具备什么样的品质； 第二步，介绍应该如何做才能成为好学生； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①last but not least最后但同样重要的是 ②be kind to对……友好 ③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 [高分句型] ①All in all, we should try our best to be good students to help make our country more powerful.(动词不定式作目的状语) ②It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era.(it作形式主语) 13．动物是我们人类的朋友，请你以“My favourite animal”为题，写一篇短文，80词左右。 写作要点： 1. What does it look like? 2. What’s its lifestyle? 3. Why do you love it? 4. … 注意事项： 1. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥。 My favourite animal _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite animal I am Li Hua. I study at Hong Xing Middle School. I want to introduce my favourite animal to you. My favourite animals are dogs. I have a lovely dog. Its name is Wangwang. It is a yellow one. It is tall and strong. It likes sleeping and eating bones. Last Sunday, I went to the park with it. We had a good time near the lake. When I decided to go home, I couldn’t find my key. I was very worried. At last, my dog helped me find the key. What a helpful dog! 【总体分析】题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My favourite animal”这一话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点阐述清楚它的可爱之处； 第三步，书写结语。表达对它的喜爱。 【亮点词汇】had a good time玩得很开心 introduce ... to sb.向某人介绍 decided to do sth.决定做某事 【高分句型】When I decided to go home, I couldn’t find my key. （When引导时间状语从句） What a helpful dog!（感叹句） 14．以“我最喜欢的中国传统技能”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评价。 The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考） 1. What is your favourite Chinese traditional skills?(Paper Cutting; Clay Sculpture泥塑; Shadow Play皮影戏; Lion Dance舞狮) 2. Why do you like it?(introduce it) 3. What will you do to carry on and develop it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite Chinese traditional skill is lion dance. Lion dance is a traditional performance. It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music. Lion Dance is to celebrate a festive day or moment. I like it because I think the lion dance can bring me happiness and drive away bad luck. But this traditional performance is less and less now. I think I should protect the traditional skill. I will learn more about it through books and TV. And I will spread it all over the world to let people know about Chinese culture. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最喜欢的中国传统技能； 第二步，介绍你喜欢的原因； 第三步，最后介绍你将如何继承和发展它。 [亮点词汇] ①combine...and...把……联合起来 ②drive away驱走 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music.（that引导的定语从句） ②I like it because I think the lion dance can bring me happiness and drive away bad luck.（because引导的原因状语从句） 15．Read the given quote from Steve Jobs and write at least 60 words to explain how you understand it. （读所给引自乔布斯的一句话，用至少 60 词谈谈你对这句话的理解和观点。） Your time is limited, so don’t waste it living someone else’s life.              —Steve Jobs （注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Because of the limited time, people get truly happy and successful only by trying to be themselves. We shouldn’t let the noise of other opinions drown out our own inner voice. We should find out what we really have a passion for. And then we should break out of our comfort zone to pursue what we want. I think it is what Steve Jobs said. 【详解】[整体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，属于话题作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述自己对这句话的理解和观点； 第二步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①drown out淹没 ②have a passion for热爱 ③find out弄清楚 [高分句型] ①We should find out what we really have a passion for.（宾语从句） ②And then we should break out of our comfort zone to pursue what we want.（宾语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$