内容正文:
I like music that I can dance to.
Section B Writing
I like music that I can dance to.
Unit9
Unit9
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Writing
Section B 3a-3b
某英文网站正在举办”My favorite Movie”的征文比赛,请你写一篇英文短文参
加此次活动。
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英语写作六字诀
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审体裁、人称、时态
审
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抓住要点
抓
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扩展要点
扩
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用过渡词(句)连接句子和段落
连
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查单词拼写、时态、主谓一致等
查
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誊写
抄
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Favorite kind of music/movie
Why I like this kind of music/movie
Favorite song/movie
Why I like this song/movie(原因)
How this song/movie makes me feel(感受)
Why I think others should listen to/watch this song/movie(推荐理由)
What kind of music or movies do you like best? Make notes in the chart by yourselves.
While-writing
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Favorite kind of music
Why I like this kind of music
Favorite song
Favorite kind of movie
Why I like this kind of movie
Favorite movie
pop music
I prefer pop music that has great lyrics.
where the time has gone
Kind
country music
jazz
rock
classical music
folk music
I prefer that/which
原因
1.我可以跟着唱
2.我可以随着舞蹈
3.让我兴奋
4.让我放松
5.不太吵
Historical drama
Kind
cartoons
action movies
dramas
documentaries
scary movies
原因
1.有有趣的对话和美满的结局
2.让我兴奋的
3.有感人的故事
4.就一个明确话题提供大量的信息
5. 吓人但刺激的
Gone with the Wind
I prefer movies that make me know some important historical events.
3a
What kind of music or movies do you like best?
What is your favorite song/ movie? Make notes in the chart below.
Favorite kind of movie
Why I like this kind of movie
Favorite movie
Why I like this movie
How this movie makes me feel
Why I think others should watch this movie
Historical drama
makes me aware of some important historical events and how they affected people’s lives
Gone with the Wind
It has a very interesting storyline and an excellent cast.
Deeply moved—sad about the effects of war, but has hope in the human spirit
One of the best movies that I have ever seen
Brainstorm
内容:介绍你最喜欢的
一部电影
文体:说明文
人称:介绍电影相关内容
(如故事情节等)时
用第三人称,表达
观点时用第一人称。
时态: 介绍电影内容和
发表评论时可用一般现在时
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介绍电影名及导演
介绍主要
故事情节
说明喜欢的原因
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Beginning
Development
Ending
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
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【谋篇布局】
My favorite movie 名称及导演 ...is my favorite movie. It was directed by...He is...
故事
梗概 ·The movie is set in...
·The movie tells the story of...
观影
感受+
推荐
理由 ·Every time I watch the movie,I feel...
·The movie shows us...
推荐
理由 I think you should watch it because it is...movie that I have ever watched.
提供素材
类型:science fiction movie, action movie,
cartoon, scary movie,(1) (喜剧),
(2) (纪录片),(3) (剧情片)
人物: ( 导演), leading actor
/actress, supporting actor/actress, role,
character, (3) (电影明星);
内容: story, scene, plot, start/beginning, climax(高潮), (4) (结局)
ending
documentary
drama
comedy
director
movie star
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提供素材
观点:
形容词:fantastic, educational, thought-provoking(引人深思的),serious,(5) (令人感动的),boring, funny, (6) (受欢迎的),
短语:be full of energy, make sb. happy/relaxed/
excited,inspire(激励) sb. to move on, cheer sb. up,
(7) (给予某人希望), encourage sb. to face/get over/overcome(克服)…, be moved to tears, remind sb. of happy moments/times in the past, touch one’s heart, make sb. recall sth.
moving
popular
give sb. hope
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影片
简介
常用句型
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The movie is directed(导演) by sb.
The story is based on(根据)….
The movie is adapted (改编)from….
The film is set/shot in(设置于+时间/地点)….
The film tells a story about….
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影片
评论/推荐
常用句型
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It’s …that interests
us most.
…gives an amazing performance in the film.
The dialogs are touching/boring
The film is a must-see.
All in all, it’s worth seeing.
This movie is highly recommended(推荐).
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My favorite movie is .
It’s a movie directed by .
Beginning
I prefer movies that . So my favorite movie is . It’s a movie that was directed by .
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This film is set in . It tells the story .
Development
This film is set in 设置(时间/地点). It tells the story ./The story is based on(根据) /The movie is adapted (改编)from .
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What touches my heart most is At the beginning, .
My favorite scene is .
This film tells us .
Ending
What touches my heart most is At the beginning, . My favorite scene is . This film tells us .
I think you should watch it./The film is a must-see./It’s worth seeing./This movie is highly recommended(推荐).
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My favorite movie is The King’s Speech- a drama.
It’s a British movie directed by Tom Hooper.
This film is set in London. It tells the story of Prince Albert, the second son of King George V, who fails to give a fluent speech because of his stammer(口吃). However, in the end, he gets over this problem with the help of his friend, whose job is to help people with speech problems.
What touches my heart most is the moment Prince Albert pluck up his courage to face his difficulty. At the beginning, his friends encourage him to trust himself. Under the inspiration of his friends, Prince Albert begins to face the fear inside. My favorite scene is when he finally gives a fluent speech. This film tells us nothing is impossible if we have the courage to overcome difficulties.
I think that the film is a must-see if you have spare time.
电影名及导演
主要故事情节
说明喜欢的原因
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电影名: 中国机长(The Captain)
导演: 于勇敢(Yu Yonggan)
主演: 张涵予(Zhang hanyu)
类型: 剧情片(drama)
该影片根据真实事件改编。
内容简介:机组执行航班任务(flying mission)时,在高空突遇驾驶舱
(cockpit)玻璃爆裂脱落, 气压(air pressure)急剧下降的
危情,最后,机长成功降落,确保了机上全部人员的生命安全。创造了世界民航史上的奇迹(miracle)。
观影感受:感人
推荐理由:1. 工作人员(the crew)团结一致的精神让人感动;
2.机长遇事临危不惧(be brave in a dangerous situation)的态度让人敬佩。
practice
要求:1. 至少出现2个定语从句;
2. 结构清楚,条理清晰,要点齐全,语言流畅,字迹工整,卷面整洁。
3. 不少于80词。
飞机在高空飞行时,驾驶舱的玻璃突然破了,导致飞机里的气压下降。飞机失控,所有人都很害怕,但在最后,机长成功降落,拯救了所有人。
分析长句:
1. 机组执行航班任务(flying mission)时,在高空突遇驾驶舱(cockpit)玻璃爆裂脱落, 气压(air pressure)急剧下降的危情。
主语 谓语 宾语
when the plane carried out a flying mission, it met a dangerous situation in the sky. The windows of cockpit suddenly broke and fell off , then the air pressure quickly dropped.
2. 最后,机长成功降落,确保了机上全部人员的生命安全。
Finally,the captain landed successfully and made sure all of people’s safety on the plane/saved their lives.
THANKS FOR WATCHING
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