5.话题3 经历与感受（课件PPT）-【卓文中考·加速度】2024年云南中考英语复习

1 话题3 经历与感受 1 2 3 教材单元链接 四步进阶式学作文 模拟实战预测 3 教材单元链接 册次 对应教材单元 功能 七年级（下） Unit 6 I’m watching TV. Unit 11 How was your school trip? Unit 12 What did you do last weekend? 谈论经历与感受 八年级（上） Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation? Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time! 谈论经历与感受 八年级（下） Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came? Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet? Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum? 谈论经历与感受 九年级（全） Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. 谈论经历与感受 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 4 四步进阶式学作文 第一步 素材积累打基础 ▶类型1 经历 1.activity n. 活动 2.experience n. 经历；经验 v. 经历 3.work n. & v. 工作 4.race n. 竞赛 5.fish v. 钓鱼 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 5 6.climb v. 爬 7.travel v. 旅行 8.visit v. 拜访；参观 9.raise v. 募集；征集 10.organize v. 组织；筹备 11.shop v. 购物 12.sweep v. 打扫 13.camp v. 扎营；搭帐篷 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 6 ▶类型2 情感与情绪 1.pride n. 自豪 2.expression n. 表情；表示；表达方式 3.feeling n. 感触；感觉 4.pleasure n. 高兴；愉快 5.worry n. & v. 担心；担忧 6.pity n. 怜悯；遗憾 v. 同情；怜悯 7.fear n. & v. 害怕；惧怕 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 7 8.regret v. 后悔 9.trouble v. 使苦恼；使忧虑；使麻烦 n. 烦恼；麻烦 10.express v. 表达；表示 11.sense v. 感觉到；意识到 n. 感觉；意识 12.love v. & n. 爱；喜爱 13.surprise v. 使惊奇；使诧异 n. 惊奇；诧异 14.cheer v. 欢呼；喝彩 15.nice adj. 令人愉快的；宜人的 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 8 16.excited adj. 兴奋的 17.glad adj. 高兴的；乐意的 18.happy adj. 幸福的；开心的 19.tired adj. 累的 20.nervous adj. 紧张不安的 21.afraid adj. 害怕的；担心的 22.angry adj. 生气的；愤怒的 23.mad adj. 发疯的；生气的 24.alone adv. 独自；单独 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 9 1.cheer up 使振奋起来 2.to one’s surprise 令某人惊讶的是 3.take pride in = be proud of 为……感到骄傲 4.worry about 担心 5.have trouble （in） doing sth. 做某事有困难 6.be angry with sb. 生某人的气 7.take part in 参加 8.clean the room 打扫房间 9.take/go on a trip 去旅行 10.show sb. around 带某人参观 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 10 ▶开头句 1.The next day, Peter went to soccer practice with courage rather than fear in his heart.[人教九全Unit 11 P86] 2.I had so much fun playing with my classmates at the party last weekend. 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 11 ▶中间句 3.The rooms were really dark and it was difficult to take photos, so I didn’t take any.[人教七下Unit 11 P65] 4.I just stayed at home most of the time to read and relax.[人教八上 Unit 1 P2] 5.Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour （in） walking or jogging in the park. 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 12 ▶结尾句 6.I finally understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.[人教八下Unit 3 P19] 7.Through two months’ study, I got to know how to cooperate with others and learn to be independent. 8.I like this voluntary activity. I think it is very meaningful for us. 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 13 第二步 审题立意定基调 【典例剖析】[2022省卷] I Learned How to__________ 提示：人生是一个不断学习、进步的过程。通过学习，你掌握了某种技能， 明白了某些道理……请以“I Learned How to . .”为题，用英语写一 篇短文，叙述你的一次学习经历，并谈谈你的感受。 人称：第一人称 时态：一般过去时 文体：记叙文 主题：介绍自己的一次学习经历及感受 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 14 要求：1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 15 第三步 谋篇构思成框架 【提纲指导】 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 16 第四步 分阶对比成佳作 普通范文 优秀范文 I Learned How to Swim When I was a child, I always dreamed to swim in the sea happily. But unfortunately, I was afraid of water, so each time our family went to picnic on the beach, I could just sit there and watch them joining the swimming or surfing. I Learned How to Swim When I was a child, I always dreamed to swim in the sea happily. But unfortunately, I was afraid of water when I was born, so each time our family went to picnic on the beach, I could just sit there and watch them joining the swimming or surfing. 使用when引导的时间状语从句，丰富了作 者的人物形象，并与下文的学习经历形成鲜明 的对比，突出表现学习的经历与感受。 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 17 普通范文 优秀范文 One day, my father took me to the swimming pool and started to teach me how to swim. He suddenly captured my head into the water, I felt that I was almost dying, but I was continuous soaking into the water, I felt better and adapted to the water that I was surrounded. My dad began to teach me the skills of swimming step by step. One day, my father took me to the swimming pool and started to teach me how to swim. Then he suddenly captured my head into the water, at that time I felt that I was almost dying, but after that I was continuous soaking into the water, I felt better and adapted to the water that I was surrounded. Then, my dad began to teach me the skills of swimming step by step. 连接副词及时间状语的使用，生动表现了作者 学习游泳的循序渐进的过程，使文章更具条理性和 逻辑性。 续表 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 18 普通范文 优秀范文 Since then, I have learned how to swim. I was very happy. It was really an unforgettable experience. Since then, I have learned how to swim. How happy I was! It was really an unforgettable experience. 感叹句的使用，为文章增添了一定的 感情色彩，突出表现了作者对于此次经历 的感受。 续表 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 19 ◆写作范例赏析 The Greatest Help from My Father I have got lots of help, but my father gives me the greatest help of all.[点明 主题，介绍经历的关键人物] Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me. He always pushes me to study hard and tries to find mistakes in everything I do. Because of him, I always do well in my study. He leads me to read plenty of books. He says, “The more books you read, the better person you will be.” Thanks to him, I am not afraid of writing any more. He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody. So I am asked to do lots of exercise. As a result, I seldom feel sick.[通过具体的事例呈现经历，丰富了人物形象，并点明主题] He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper. He makes a big difference in my life.[表达感受，升华主题] 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 20 模拟实战预测 第一篇[2022新疆改编] An Unforgettable Memory in 提示：初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活， 一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆。请以“An Unforgettable Memory in. .”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次最难忘的经历及感受。 要求：1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 21 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ An Unforgettable Memory in Junior High School Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories. Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself. What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely. 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 22 第二篇 Happiness from Hard Work 提示：幸福的生活离不开人们的努力工作。请以“Happiness from Hard Work”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你生活或学习中所经历的一件令 你感到幸福快乐的事，并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 23 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Happiness from Hard Work Our life is full of happiness. My happiness comes from hard work. I can get happiness every time I work hard. Last term, I was chosen to take part in the English Speech Contest. I was nervous when I heard the news, because I was always afraid of speaking in public. I wondered if I could succeed and I wanted to give up. My English teacher noticed that. She had a long talk with me and encouraged me to challenge myself. After that I kept practicing every day. When I got first prize in the contest, I felt very happy from my deep heart. My happiness is from the success through my hard work. The harder I work, the more happiness I will get. 话题3 经历与感受 卓文中考.加速度 英语 2023云南中考 24 $$