2024年中考英语书面写作之写作技巧训练课件

Grade 9 English Writing Beautify your compositions “美”化作文 Tip 1 妙用关联词 Connection words 第一 第二 第三 另外 然而 例如 实际上 总而言之 不仅，而且 结果 一方面，另一方面 Connection words（关联词） 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what's more ， not only…but also, neither…nor,furthermore 2.表示选择: or, either…or, neither…nor 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示看法: in my opinion, as far as I am concerned 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, in a word, in short, in general Tip 2 善用高级词汇、句型 Phrases & Drills Writing skills 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach. 我们应该保持安静，不应该大声说话。 A We should keep quiet, we shouldn't speak loudly. B We should keep quiet instead of speaking loudly. Which is better？ 我希望你能帮助我。 他们做了很多事情。 A They did many things. B They did as much as they could. A I wish you can help me. B I'm looking forward to your help. Writing skills A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English . 我认为学英语很有趣。 我们应该保护环境。 A We should protect the environment. B It's our duty to protect the environment. Writing skills Tip 3 活用例子，适当扩展 Examples & Explanations 在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。 Tip 3 活用例子 I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding clothes, taking out the trash and so on. 青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。 Tip 3 活用例子 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy. How to make full use of our lucky money? To start with, it is wise for us to buy something about study like exercise books, pens or other study tools. Second, keeping reading can help us a lot in learning, so buy some books that you really need. Good books can help you explore the world and gain a lot of new knowledge. What's more, we are supposed to save part of lucky money, maybe we can spend the rest of them when we grow up. Remember whatever we do, do it in a right and proper way. Let's take action to save money and do meaningful things! Tip 3 适当扩展 结尾：提出倡议或号召 Let's take action to do ...... Do it now ! / Don't do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves. Don't wait. Join us now! Start to join us now! Don't put it off! Become a volunteer today! How amazing! I can't wait! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! Don't hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun! Tip 4 巧用谚语 Proverbs 加谚语(Proverb) 可用于”beginning”和”ending” 1、锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to exercise… As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to exercise. 劳逸不结合，聪明也变傻。 2、我们应该集中注意力于学习上。 We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies. 3、加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法 Joining the English club is a good way to learn English. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English. 不劳无获 熟能生巧 Enjoy some proverbs 三思而后行。 独木不成林。 有志者事竟成。 失败是成功之母。 1.One tree doesn't make a forest. 2.Think twice before you do. 3.Where there is a will, there is a way. 4.A friend in need is a friend in deed.. 5.Failure is the mother of success. 6.Never too old to learn. 7.Safety comes first./ Health comes first. 8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 活到老，学到老。 一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。 患难见真情。 安全第一/健康第一。 It is+形容词 for sb. to do   … so … that …       … too … to do  The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子   It is said that + 句子    It is reported that + 句子  In my opinion, as far as I'm concerned , There is no doubt that + 句子    There is no need to do        sb. find it +形容词 to do… had better (not) do  how about / what about doing  be supposed to/ be expected to I suggest that you should do； I advise you to do... If I were you, I would do…    It's best to do     Why not do / why don't you do…?    prefer to do A rather than do B  try one's best to do=make efforts to do   spare no effort to do 新时代背景下的劳动教育(Labor Education)已经成为大家关注的热点，劳动教育能提升责任意识、锻炼合作能力、增强个人自信心；劳动教育也能表达对身边的人的关心和感恩。请你结合以下要点，写一篇倡议书，100词左右，开头已给出，文章不出现真实学校和姓名。 1、你对劳动教育的看法； 2、你对为社会、学校、家庭做的劳动内容或形式有哪些建议； 3、呼吁同学们重视劳动。 Dear classmates, Nowadays, more and more people pay attention to Labor Education . We students also need to play a part. _________________________________________ 看法 建议 呼吁 D档（4-5分）：尚能围绕话题进行表述，语言错误较多，影响意思表达。 C档（6-7分）：能够基本围绕话题进行表述，语言表达有些错误，行文很不连贯，但不影响句意理解。 B档（8-9分）：能够围绕话题进行表述，语言有少量错误，表达基本连贯、清楚。 A档（10-12分）：能够围绕话题进行表述，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 小组讨论：找出文章的“美”与“不足” 1、Labour breeds our body, learning breeds our soul. 劳动教养了身体，学习教养了心灵。 2、Knowledge comes from labor. 知识是从劳动中得来。 3、Labor can make the body rest, and work can make the spirit rest. 劳动可以使身体得到休息，劳动可以使精神得到休息。 4、Labor itself is a pleasure. 劳动本身就是一种享乐。 5、Labor is the most honorable. 劳动最光荣。 What have we learned today? Connection words Advanced phrases and drills Examples & Explanations Proverbs Beautify compositions Basic steps(基本写作步骤) Search (审) List (列) Add (加) Connect (连) How to beautify your compositions Beautify (美) 我希望你能帮助我。 他们做了很多事情。 A They did many things. B They did as much as they could. A I wish you can help me. B I'm looking forward to your help. Writing skills A I think learning English is interesting. 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