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Reading for writing I
Unit 4 Space Exploration
Learning objectives
reflect on the question of whether exploring space is worth the money and effort;
analyse the organisation and language features of an argumentative essay;
write about your opinion on space exploration.
In this class, you will be able to
Lead-in
Look at the picture and answer:
What can you see in the picture?
There is a powerful cyclone(气旋) called Typhoon Goni.
Where do you think the picture was taken?
It was taken from the space by NASA satellite.
Why do people take such pictures from space?
It can help predict the weather, protecting lives and reducing losses.
Lead-in
Look at the title and predict:
What kind of text is it?
An argumentative essay.
Argument essays seek to state a position on an issue and give several reasons, supported by evidence, for agreeing with that position.
Lead-in
Free talk: what’s your opinion?
Yes
No
Why do human explore the space?
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Exploring space can help us a lot...
We should feed the world’s poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal disease.
养活穷人
绝症
Read for opinions
What’s the author’s point of view on this issue?
The author doesn’t think exploring space is a waste of time and money.
Underline the sentence that states the author’s opinion in Paragraph 1.
a view without serious thought
肤浅的观点、没有深思熟虑的观点
Read for structure
How does author prove his/her argument?
Divide the whole passage into several parts.
part 1(para1)
Introduction
part 2 (para 2-4) Body
part 3 (para 5) Conclusion
Read for structure and features
part 1(para1)
Introduction
Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and lots of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away. Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. Instead, we should feed the world's poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fail to realise how exploring space helps us.
Background
The thesis statement
论点
Different viewpoints
Some people argue that... However, others....
Read for structure
How many arguments does the author use to support his thesis statement? What are they?
Linking words: firstly, secondly, finally
They are also the topic sentence of each paragraph.
Read for structure
What’s the content of the rest part of each paragraph?
topic sentence
It’s the evidence证据 that supports the arguments.
Read for structure and features
part 2-para2 Body
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger.It has directly resuted in the mamy satelites that now orbit Earth. A number of the satellites record data on land and weather patterns. Then the data is transmitted to scientists on Earth. After careful analysis, the scientists can provide useful recommendations and advice for farmers. As a result, space-based science (太空科学) has helped farming in its efforts to grow enough food to feed Earth's increasing population.
Argument 1
How does it work to fight against world hunger?
Result
Facts
Read for structure and features
How does it help fight against world hunger?
satellites orbit Earth
record data on land and weather pattern
transmit data to Earth
analyse data
provide recommendation and advice
卫星环绕地球
记录土地和天气模式的数据
传送数据回地球
(专家)分析数据
(专家)提供建议
Read for structure and features
Secondly, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all. High-end products around the world are made to a higher standard now because of advanced technology which was first created to meet the requirements for space exploration. For example, space technologies have helped the research and development of different types of new material. They have also helped companies make better heart monitors and other machines that doctors regularly use. Today,space technologies are widely used in all kinds of industries, and everyday products such as GPS, memory foam pillows,and smartphone cameras are changing our lives.
Argument 2
Simpler words
Examples
technological improvements
high-end products
Read for structure and features
3 Examples
have helped the research
and development of different types of new material
曾帮助研发过不同类型的新材料
have also helped companies make better heart monitors and other machines that doctors regularly use.
也帮助公司制造更好的心脏监测器和其他医生经常使用的机器。
are widely used in all kinds of industries, and everyday products ...
specific industries - all kinds of industries
memory foam pillows
记忆泡沫枕头
smartphone cameras
智能手机摄像头
Read for structure and features
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world's problems and even to find ways to solve them. Seeing pictures of our planet as an island in a black sea made people realise that our planet's resources are limited. In order to provide for such a rapidly increasing population, scientists are trying to find other planets that could one day be our new home. The greatest attention at present is on Mars because it is closer to Earth.In the future, humans may live on both planets.
Argument 3
Examples
Think about problems and find solutions
Read for structure and features
Examples
Seeing pictures of our planet
as an island in a black sea
看到我们的星球像黑海中的一个岛屿的图片
A rapidly increasing population
急剧增长的人口
realise problems - find solutions
find other planets that could one day be our new home.
limited resources
有限的资源
even worse
Mars
Read for structure and features
In closing, exploring space provides the world with many different benefits. Therefore, it should continue so as to provide new and better solutions to people's short-term and long-term problems.
Conclusion
part 3 (para 5) Conclusion
Underline the sentence that repeats the writer’s opinion.
repeats the writer’s opinion
Task 3: Are these arguments for or against exploring space? Put them in the table below.
A. There are a lot of unsolved mysteries on Earth. So why are we going into space to explore?
B. It is necessary to find a new home for people in space, as the resources on Earth will run out.
C. I cannot understand spending all this money on expensive research and experiments when so many people need food.
D. Exploring space encourages scientists to improve technology that can help people in other ways, too.
For space exploration
Against space exploration
B D
A C
Discussion
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The steps of writing an argument
1. Put forward the topic
2.Take a position.
3. Gather evidence
4.Present arguments logically
5. Make a conclusion
Review for structure
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Review for structure
The thesis statement
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space.
However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realise how exploring space helps us.
Different viewpoints
Review for structure
record data on weather pattern
transmit data to earth
analyse data
provide recommendation and advice
The thesis statement
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Different viewpoints
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger.
Evidence
Argument 1
Review for structure
The thesis statement
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Different viewpoints
Evidence
Argument 1
Secondly, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all.
new material
better heart monitors and other machines
GPS, memory foam pillows
samrtphone cameras
Evidence
Argument 2
Review for structure
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world’s problems and even to find ways to solve them.
limited resources
finding other planet to live on
Evidence
Argument 3
The thesis statement
Different viewpoints
Evidence
Argument 1
Evidence
Argument 2
Review for structure
The thesis statement
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Different viewpoints
Evidence
Argument 1
Evidence
Argument 2
Evidence
Argument 3
In closing, exploring space provides the world with many different benefits.
Review for structure
An
argumentative
essay
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 5
Different viewpoints
Evidence
Argument 1
Evidence
Argument 2
Argument 3
Rephrasing the thesis statement
Body
Introduction
Conclusion
The thesis statement
Review for structure
Thanks!
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