内容正文:
Period Ⅳ Writing(见学生用书P20)
——关于艺术展览的通知
A picture is a poem without words.一幅画是一首没有文字的诗歌。
通技法——学写作规范
标题正中写Notice→通知的具体内容(目的、对象、事由、时间、地点)→活动意义→注意事项→署名。
积“黄金”词句,写高分文章
话题句式
开头(口头通知)
1.May I have your attention, please?
请大家听我说,好吗?
2.Attention, please, everybody!I have an announcement to make.
请大家注意。我要宣布一件事。
正文(书面通知不需要称呼和提醒语)
1.In order to improve our English, an English Evening is going to be held in our school meeting hall from 8:00 p.m. to 10:00 p.m. next Friday.
为了提高我们的英语水平,英语之夜将于下周五晚上8点到10点在学校会议厅举行。
2.Aimed at arousing students’ enthusiasm for the traditional Chinese culture, a Chinese Poetry Competition is scheduled in our school hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on May 30th.
为了激发学生对中国传统文化的热情,中文诗歌比赛定于5月30日下午3点到5点在我校礼堂举行。
3.To enrich our school life and provide a platform for students to display talents, our school intends to hold...
为了丰富我们的校园生活,为学生提供一个展示才华的平台,我们学校计划举办……
4.There will be a lecture on pollution given by Professor Wang from Peking University in the Science Palace at 10:00 a.m. on February 6th.
来自北京大学的王教授将于2月6日上午10点在科学宫举行关于污染问题的讲座。
5.Anyone who shows interest is welcome to take an active part in it/get actively involved in it.
欢迎任何有兴趣的人积极参与其中。
6.Those who want to attend/take part in it should enter your names/sign up for it at the Students’ Union/the Service Desk on the first floor.
想参加的人请到一楼学生会/服务台报名。
结尾
1.Please come and join in it. Everyone is welcome to attend it.
请快来加入吧。欢迎大家参加。
2.Please be there on time and don’t be late.
请准时到达,不要迟到。
3.If you have any further questions, don’t hesitate to contact Li Hua at 12345678.
如果你们还有任何问题,不要犹豫,拨打12345678与李华联系。
4.Please pass on this message to those who are not here today.I hope/am sure that you will have a nice time there/then.
请把这个消息转达给今天没来的人。我希望/确定你们能在那里/到时候过得愉快。
【典题示例】
假设你是红星中学的校学生会主席李华。为纪念莎士比亚,你校拟举办“莎士比亚戏剧日(Shakespeare Drama Day)”活动。请用英语给你校国际部留学生写一则口头通知,内容包括:
1.说明戏剧日的时间和地点;
2.介绍相关活动;
3.欢迎他们参加。
要求:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【思路点拨】
Ⅰ.布局谋篇
体裁
应用文
时态
以一般现在时为主
主题
莎士比亚戏剧日
人称
以第三人称为主
结构
第一段:点明主题,包括事件、时间及地点
第二段:具体信息、注意事项以及亮点
第三段:欢迎参加、表示感谢
Ⅱ.遣词造句
一、对接单元词汇
1.为了纪念 in memory of...
2.各种各样的活动 a variety of activities
3.一场视觉和听觉的盛宴 a feast for the eyes and ears
4.探索魔法和魅力的世界 explore the world of magic and charm
5.文坛巨人 a literary giant
二、巧用单元句式、语法
1.完成句子
(1)为了纪念莎士比亚,学生会计划于本周六举办“莎士比亚戏剧日”。
In memory of Shakespeare, the Students’ Union plans to hold “Shakespeare Drama Day” this Saturday.
(2)为了这个特别的场合,我们设计了各种各样的活动。
A variety of activities have been designed by us for this special occasion.
(3)上午9点到11点,操场上将有一个名为“关于莎士比亚”的展览。 你可以了解这位伟大作家的生活和他的杰作背后的故事。
From 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m., there will be an exhibition named “About Shakespeare” on the playground. You can learn about the great writer’s life and the stories behind his masterpieces .
(4)下午2点,戏剧俱乐部将为你带来莎士比亚的经典作品之一《第十二夜》,这一定会是一场视觉和听觉的盛宴。
At 2:00 in the afternoon, the drama club will bring you one of Shakespeare’s classics , Twelfth Night. It will surely be a feast for the eyes and ears .
(5)欢迎大家参加我们的活动。让我们一起探索这位文学巨匠创造的魔法与魅力的世界吧!
All of you are welcome to join us in this activity. Let’s explore together the world of magic and charm created by the literary giant !
2.句式升级
分别用定语从句升级上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。
(1)From 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m., there will be an exhibition named “About Shakespeare” on the playground, where you can learn about the great writer’s life and the stories behind his masterpieces.
(2) At 2:00 in the afternoon, the drama club will bring you one of Shakespeare’s classics, Twelfth Night, which will surely be a feast for the eyes and ears.
【连句成篇】
Hello, everybody! May I have your attention, please?
In memory of Shakespeare, the Students’ Union plans to hold “Shakespeare Drama Day” this Saturday.
A variety of activities have been designed by us for this special occasion. From 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m., there will be an exhibition named“About Shakespeare” on the playground, where you can learn about the great writer’s life and the stories behind his masterpieces. At 2:00 in the afternoon, the drama club will bring you one of Shakespeare’s classics, Twelfth Night, which will surely be a feast for the eyes and ears.
All of you are welcome to join us in this activity. Let’s explore together the world of magic and charm created by the literary giant! We’ll see you there! That’s all. Thank you!
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