Unit4 Period Ⅳ Writing-【精彩三年】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册课程探究与巩固教师用书配套课件PPT（人教版）

Period Ⅳ　Writing ——如何写关于人物故事的短评 Unit 4　Adversity and Courage Out of adversity comes opportunity. 机会从逆境中来。 目录 CONTENTS 写作指导•演练提素养 01 写作指导•演练提素养 01 通技法——学写作规范 本单元的写作任务是根据所给的故事写一篇短评。短评，顾名思义，“短”是指它篇幅短小，“评”是指在文体上属于议论文的范畴。它短小精悍，言简意赅，涉及的内容非常广泛，包括社会短评、文学短评、艺术短评，其中文学短评是对作家、作品和其他文学现象进行评论而篇幅相对短小的一类文章，主要是分析作品的思想内容，人物性格，评论作家创作的得失和艺术特色等。此类写作一般采用三段式： Paragraphs Contents Details Paragraph 1 A brief summary of the story who/what/when/where/why/how Paragraph 2 The qualities of the characters discipline，team spirit, endurance, optimism, faith and perseverance Paragraph 3 Your overall impressions of the story The endurance, optimism and perseverance of Shackleton and his crew members make a deep impression on me... 积“黄金”词句，写高分文章 一、话题词汇 1．be keen on... 喜欢…… 2．adapt oneself to... 使自己适应…… 3．have difficulty/trouble(in) doing sth 做某事有困难 4．be eager/dying to do sth渴望做某事 5．be faced with adversity面对逆境 6．succeed in doing sth/manage to do sth成功做某事 7．make great contributions to... 对……作出巨大贡献 8．gain a reputation as... 获得……名誉 9．have a talent/gift for... 有……天赋 10．devote oneself/one’s life to doing sth献身于/专心于做某事 11．commit oneself to (doing) sth致力于(做)某事 12．think highly/well of... 对……高度评价 13．sing sb’s praises高度赞扬某人 二、话题句式 1．He is outgoing in character and a man with a real sense of commitment to almost everything. 他性格外向，且又是一个几乎对一切有着奉献精神的人。 2．He was regarded as an early farmer pioneer and he wrote down his advice in a book called Qi Min Yao Shu which was considered an important summary of the knowledge of farming. 他被认为是早期的农民先驱，他把自己的建议写在一本叫作《齐民要术》的书中，这本书被认为是对农业知识的重要总结。 3．He was indeed a man who continuously searches for practical solutions to improve the quality of everybody’s life. 他确实是一个不断寻找切实可行的解决方案来提高每个人的生活质量的人。 4．Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist on account of what she did. 她不仅为科学界作出了巨大贡献，而且因为她的所作所为，她被认为是最伟大的女科学家。 5．Such was Albert Einstein, a simple man with great achievements.His modesty leaves a deep impression on us.People all think highly of him. 这就是阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦，一位有着巨大成就的平凡人。他的谦逊给我们留下了深刻印象。所有人都高度评价他。 【典题示例】 请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短评。 1．故事梗概： 这个故事是关于在1914－1917年由欧内斯特·沙克尔顿(Ernest Shackleton)带领的南极探险。欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的28名船员们一起登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。途中大船被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了象岛。沙克尔顿和他的五名手下冒险去了1 300多公里外的地方寻找帮助。最后，尽管困难重重，船员们还是活了下来。 2．在困难面前，船员们一直保持积极的心态。他们之间真诚关心、相互关爱，相互鼓舞；在困难面前表现出极大的忍耐力和毅力。 3．沙克尔顿的南极探险是一次伟大的探险，他是一位有爱心、有责任感和有着坚强意志的伟大领袖。从这个故事中我学到：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！ 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 【思路点拨】 Ⅰ.布局谋篇 体裁 议论文 时态 以一般现在时为主 主题 短评一个故事 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：故事梗概：简要介绍故事发生的时间、地点、人物；事件发生的起因、经过和结果； 第二段：对故事中的人物性格进行评论； 第三段：阐述你从这个故事中学到的经验和教训。 Ⅱ.遣词造句 一、对接单元词汇 1．南极洲的探险 an ______________ to Antarctica 2．上船 ______________________ 3．被困在…… be ________________________ in... 4．弃船 ___________ the ship 5．寻求帮助 _________________ expedition go aboard the ship stuck/caught/trapped abandon seek for help 6．尽管困难重重 _________________________________ 7．设法做成某事 __________ to do sth 8．保持积极的心态 remain ____________ 9．忍耐力和毅力 endurance and ________________ 10．一位有爱心、有责任感和有着钢铁般的意志的伟大领袖 a great leader with ________________________________________ in spite of all the hardships manage positive perseverance love, responsibility and steely will 二、巧用单元句式、语法 完成句子 (1)这个故事是关于在1914－1917年由欧内斯特·沙克尔顿(Ernest Shackleton)带领的南极探险。 This story is about the expedition to Antarctica __________ Ernest Shackleton in 1914—1917. led by (2)欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的28名船员们一起登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。 Ernest Shackleton went __________ the ship Endurance with the 28­man crew. (3)不幸的是，途中大船被冰山困住，迫使大家弃船后逃到了象岛。 _________________， on the way, the ship ________________ the ice, _________ them to __________ the ship and escape to Elephant Island. aboard Unfortunately got stuck in forcing abandon (4)沙克尔顿和他的5名手下冒险去了1 300多公里外的地方寻找帮助。 Shackleton ventured more than 1，300 kilometres with five of his men to _________________． (5)尽管困难重重，船员们还是活了下来。 In spite of all the hardships，the crew ______________________. (6)在所有的困难面前，船员们一直保持积极的心态。 _________ with all the difficulties, the crew _____________________ . seek for help managed to survive Faced remained positive (7)沙克尔顿的南极探险是一次伟大的探险，他是一位有爱心、有责任感和有着钢铁般的意志的伟大领袖。 Shackleton’s expedition to Antarctica is a great one, and he is a great leader with love, __________________________________ . responsibility and steely will 【连句成篇】 This story is about the expedition to Antarctica led by Ernest Shackleton in 1914—1917. For this task he went aboard the ship Endurance with the 28­man crew. Unfortunately, on the way, the ship got stuck in the ice, forcing them to abandon the ship and escape to Elephant Island. Shackleton ventured more than 1，300 kilometres with five of his men to seek for help. In spite of all the hardships，the crew managed to survive. Faced with all the difficulties, the crew remained positive. I was deeply moved by the genuine concern and love they shared with each other. In addition, I’m also inspired by their endurance and perseverance as they must have struggled greatly in such a position of adversity. Though it failed to achieve its goal, I think of Shackleton’s expedition to Antarctica as a great one, and he is a great leader with love, responsibility and steely will. The most important lesson I have learnt is that one shall never give up easily in the face of difficulties. 课后请完成高效作业19 感谢聆听，再见！ $$