2023-2024学年沪教牛津版英语九年级下册作文专题复习课件

9BU1 话题：探索之旅 【话题分析】 记述某人的探索之旅；谈论对探索之旅的看法。 【实践分析】 假如你对探险很感兴趣，你认为探索未知领域有很多好处。请根据下面内容，发表你的看法。 1、学到书本学不到的知识； 2、了解不同文化、结识各式各样的人； 3、有可能发现一些未知的事物，对人类做贡献； 要求： 1、不得在文中出现学校、老师、同学和本人的真实名字； 2、可适当补充内容，语言连贯，80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 I like adventure. I think ... 一、审题 1、体裁：说明文 2、人称：第一人称为主 3、时态：一般现在时 二、篇章结构 Para. 1: 明确对探索之旅的态度：喜欢 Para. 2: 阐述喜欢探险的原因/探索之旅的好处 Para. 3: 再次明确态度 二、篇章结构 段落 素材 Para. 1: 明确对探索之旅的态度：喜欢 exploring, exploration, interesting, exciting, helpful, meaningful, in my opinion Para. 2:阐述喜欢探险的原因/探索之旅的好处 knowledge, discover, something unknown, learn from, broaden one’s horizon, find out, raise one’s interest in First, ... Second, ... Third, ... Besides, ... What’s more, ... It is a good chance to do sth. Para. 3: 再次明确态度 enjoy doing sth. I hope ... I like adventure. I think going somewhere unknown and exploring something unknown is exciting and helpful. Para. 1: 明确对探索之旅的态度：喜欢 First of all, exploration broadens my horizon. I can find out much new knowledge that I can’t learn from books. Besides, the trip of exploration is a good chance for me to know about different cultures and make friends with different people. What’s more, someday I may discover something unknown that may benefit humans. This always raises my interest in exploration. Para. 2:阐述喜欢探险的原因/探索之旅的好处 I enjoy exploring and I hope I can explore more and more fields in the future. Para. 3: 再次明确态度 9BU2 话题：文化冲击、文化差异 【话题分析】 谈论不同国家之间的文化差异；谈论外来文化对本土文化的影响；探路中国传统文化。 【实践分析】 随着各国交流越来越密切，我们在了解到不同国家文化的同时，也受到外来文化的影响。请根据以下内容，谈谈你了解到的外来文化对我们日常生活的影响。 内容提示： 1、了解到不同国家的文化，有助于结交不同国家的朋友； 2、越来越多年轻人喜欢庆祝外国的节日，如情人节（the Valentine’s Day）、圣诞节（Christmas Day）； 3、......（请补充） 4、你的看法 要求： 1、不得在文中出现学校、老师、同学和本人的真实名字； 2、可适当补充内容，语言连贯，80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 As the exchanges with different countries increase, cultures of foreign countries effect our life in some way. ... 一、审题 1、体裁：说明文 2、人称：（1）讲述影响：第三人称； （2）讲述观点：第一人称 3、时态：一般现在时 二、篇章结构 Para. 1: 指出文化交流、文化冲击这一现象的存在 Para. 2: 介绍文化冲击的具体现象或影响 Para. 3: 表达对此现象的看法 二、篇章结构 段落 素材 Para. 1: 指出文化交流、文化冲击这一现象的存在 cultural exchange, cultural shock, cultural difference, have an effect on As cultural exchanges with different countries increase, ... Para. 2:介绍文化冲击的具体现象或影响 popular, attractive, worship, for example, Western festival, Chinese festival, traditional culture, take part in more ... than ... First, ... Second, ... Third, ... Besides, ... What’s more, ... Last but not least, ... It is adj. for sb. to do sth. 二、篇章结构 段落 素材 Para. 3: 表达对此现象的看法 I agree/disagree that In my opinion, ... As for me, ... I don’t think ... As the exchanges with different countries increase, cultures of foreign countries effect our life in some way. Para. 1: 指出文化交流、文化冲击这一现象的存在 First, cultural exchanges enable us to know more about cultures of different countries. It makes it easier for us to make friends with people from all over the world. Second, some Western festivals,such as the Valentine’s Day and Christmas Day, become more and more popular. It seems that more and more young people would like to celebrate these festivals. Last but not least, some young people may think the culture of some foreign country is more attractive than Chinese traditional culture. Gradually, they begin to worship the foreign culture and forget Chinese culture. I don’t think it is right. Para. 2:介绍文化冲击的具体现象或影响 In my opinion, we should respect different culture of different countries. However, Chinese culture is so attractive that should be always remembered in our minds. Para. 3: 表达对此现象的看法 9BU3 话题：环境保护 【话题分析】 谈论环境污染的问题或其他环境问题；提出保护环境的措施和建议。 【实践分析】 假如你是学校的环保宣传大使之一，请根据以下内容，写一篇英文宣讲稿，呼吁大家保护环境。 1、环境问题：空气污染、水污染、森林减少、全球气候变暖等； 2、保护环境的措施： （1）低碳出行； （2）不乱扔垃圾，避免污染土地和水资源； （3）多种树木，保护绿植； （4）请补充...... 3、重要性：地球是我们共同的家，保护环境是我们的责任. 要求： 1、不得在文中出现学校、老师、同学和本人的真实名字； 2、可适当补充内容，语言连贯，80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 Hello, boys and girls. Nowadays, the society develops faster and faster, while the environment becomes worse and worse. ... 一、审题 1、体裁：应用文（演讲稿） 2、人称：（1）描述环境问题，第三人称； （2）提建议，第一人称 3、时态：一般现在时 二、篇章结构 Para. 1: 介绍目前面临的环境问题 Para. 2: 提出保护环境的措施和建议 Para. 3: 呼吁保护环境 段落 素材 Para. 1: 介绍目前面临的环境问题 face, serious, pollution, environmental problem, global warming, such as ... and so on Para. 2:提出保护环境的措施和建议 plant trees, as ... as possible, in order to, stop doing sth., save energy First, ... Second, ... Third, ... Besides, ... What’s more, ... We’d better ... It’s better to ... Para. 3: 呼吁保护环境 It’s our duty to ... We have to take actions to protect the Earth. Hello, boys and girls. Nowadays, the society develops faster and faster, while the environment becomes worse and worse. We are facing many serious environmental problems, such as air pollution, water pollution, the decrease of forests, global warming and so on. Para. 1: 介绍目前面临的环境问题 It’s time for us to keep the environment clean and green, and protect the Earth. First, in order to reduce air pollution, we’d better go somewhere by bike, by bus or on foot. Besides, we must stop throwing rubbish everywhere on the land or into the sea. Moreover, we should plant as many trees as we can, and protect plants. Last but not least, it’s necessary to save water and electricity in our daily life. Para. 2:提出保护环境的措施和建议 The Earth is our home. Let’s take actions to protect it. Para. 3: 呼吁保护环境 9BU4 话题：自然灾害 【话题分析】 谈论自然灾害的危害和预防措施；科普如何应对自然灾害。 【实践分析】 每年夏天，中国南部沿海地区常常经受洪涝灾害，造成人身和财产损失。请根据以下内容，说说当遇到洪涝灾害时，该如何应对。 内容提示： 1、往高处走，保持冷静，等待救援； 2、在洪水中行走时，要注意水下的坑和障碍物，避免绊倒； 3、远离电线、高压线。 要求： 1、不得在文中出现学校、老师、同学和本人的真实名字； 2、可适当补充内容，语言连贯，80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 In summer, flood often happens in Southern China. ... 一、审题 1、体裁：说明文 2、人称：第二人称为主 3、时态：一般现在时 二、篇章结构 Para. 1: 提出假设，说明写作目的 Para. 2: 提出应对措施 Para. 3: 再次提醒 段落 素材 Para. 1: 提出假设，说明写作目的 keep yourselves safe Once ... Here are some advice. Para. 2:提出应对措施 drowned, rescue, stay high, calm down, remember to, pay attention to, be careful, electric wire, high voltage wire, as soon as possible First, ... Second, ... Third, ... Besides, ... What’s more, ... If ... When ... Para. 3: 再次提醒 It’s necessary to learn more about flood. Don’t be afraid of it. In summer, flood often happens in Southern China. Once flood happens, you have to take actions to save yourselves. Here are some advice. Para. 1: 提出假设，说明写作目的 First of all, stay high and be calm. When water flows into the house, you need to go somewhere high to make sure you won’t be drowned. Then, calm down and wait for rescue. Second, pay attention to the traps under the flood water. When you walk in the water, be careful about holes, stones and other dangers you can’t see. What’s more, keep away from high voltage wires and electric wires. Once the wires fall into the water, you will probably get an electric shock. Para. 2:提出应对措施 In a word, it’s necessary to learn more about flood. You can’t be more careful when you face flood. Para. 3: 再次提醒 9BU5 话题：运动与健康 【话题分析】 介绍最喜欢的运动；谈论运动与健康。 【实践分析】 众所周知，锻炼很重要，为此，你们班级开展了一次有关本班学生锻炼情况的问卷调查。请你根据以下数据，用英文写一篇调查报告。 内容提示： 1、调查数据：（1）32%的同学每天锻炼1个小时以上；（2）46%的同学不常锻炼是因为作业多，29%的同学是因为不擅长；其余同学对锻炼不感兴趣。 2、锻炼的意义：有益身体健康；保持思维敏锐；变得自信快乐。 3、如何更好地锻炼：......（请补充）。 要求： 1、不得在文中出现学校、老师、同学和本人的真实名字； 2、可适当补充内容，语言连贯，80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, ... 一、审题 1、体裁：调查报告 2、人称：（1）汇报调查结果：第三人称； （2）陈述个人观点：第一人称 3、时态：一般现在时 二、篇章结构 Para. 1: 介绍调查目的和主题，汇报相关数据 Para. 2: 分析运动的意义和好处 Para. 3: 提出开展锻炼的建议 段落 素材 Para. 1: 介绍调查目的和主题，汇报相关数据 exercising, take exercise, spend ...(time) doing ..., be busy (in) doing, be good at, be interested in, too ... to ..., so ... that ... ..., while ... Para. 2:分析运动的意义和好处 health, confident, keep fit, be good for Besides, ... What’s more, ... Para. 3: 提出开展锻炼的建议 keep a balance, in my opinion, the+比较级, the+比较级. We should ... We’d better ... Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. Here are the reasons. Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they are too busy studying to have time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good at exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in exercising. Para. 1: 介绍调查目的和主题，汇报相关数据 As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our mind clear and makes us confident and happy. Para. 2:分析运动的意义和好处 In my opinion, we should keep a balance between study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. Para. 3: 提出开展锻炼的建议 9BU6 话题：健康 【话题分析】 谈论对健康的看法；提出保持健康的建议。 【实践分析】 健康是绝大部分人关注的话题，保持身心健康很重要，某英语报举办一次英语征文，主题为“Health is important!”，请根据以下内容，写一篇短文投稿。 内容提示： 1、健康包括身体健康和心理健康； 2、保持身体健康的建议：运动；早睡早起；请补充。 3、保持心理健康的建议：保持心情愉悦；培养兴趣爱好；请补充。 要求： 1、不得在文中出现学校、老师、同学和本人的真实名字； 2、可适当补充内容，语言连贯，80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 As we all know, Health is very important. ... 一、审题 1、体裁：说明文 2、人称：第一人称为主 3、时态：一般现在时 二、篇章结构 Para. 1: 总述观点 Para. 2: 提出保持健康的建议 Para. 3: 重申观点，提出希望 段落 素材 Para. 1: 总述观点 Physical and mental health， keep healthy/fit, not only ..., but also ... Para. 2:提出保持健康的建议 build up, grow strong, keep a balanced diet, relax, talk with, communicate with, lonely, upset, anxious, pick up, ask for help, can’t help doing Here are some advice of ... It’s important to do ... Besides, ... Last but not least, ... Para. 3: 重申观点，提出希望 live a ... life I hope ... As we all know, Health is very important. Health means physical and psychological health. We should not only keep our bodies fit, but also keep our minds healthy. Para. 1: 总述观点 Here are some advice of building up our bodies. First, exercising is the best choice to keep fit. Second, a habit of going to sleep early and getting up early helps us grow strong. Third, we should keep a balanced diet. It’s also important to develop psychological health. To be mentally healthy, we should stay relaxed. We can talk with families and friends when we feel lonely and sad. Besides, picking up a good hobby makes your life richer. Last but not least, we must ask doctors for help once we can’t help being upset and anxious. Para. 2:提出保持健康的建议 We have to pay attention to our health. I hope we can always be happy and live a healthy life. Para. 3: 重申观点，提出希望 $$