期末复习书面表达训练：框架与衔接课件2023-2024学年外研版英语七年级下册

Lesson type: Writing Topic: Structure and coherence Step 0 Lead-in Think and fill in the blanks. 书面表达（总分_____）得分细化 _____分 _____分 内容 语言 连贯 15 6 9 Step 0 Lead-in 书面表达的最新评分标准分析 1.内容（_____分）： 写出题目要求的所有的点，错/少一处点则每一处扣_____分； 6 1 Step 0 Lead-in 书面表达的最新评分标准分析 2.语言连贯（_____分）： （1）有属于自己独一无二的__________________万金油库存； 8 短语或句子 Step 0 Lead-in 书面表达的最新评分标准分析 2.语言连贯（_____分）： （2）句式多样，如______________________________________。 8 各类从句、V-ing作主语的句子等 Step 0 Lead-in 书面表达的最新评分标准分析 2.语言连贯（_____分）： （3）字迹不能太丑，_________________________。 中考作文划一处绝对没有满分。字数超太多绝对没有满分； 字丑必扣分/降档次 8 Step 1 Pre-writing 书面表达的常用表达（Coherence） 1.Clear logic: Use __________________________________. connecting words or phrases Step 1 Pre-writing 书面表达的常用表达（Coherence） 1.Clear logic: Use __________________________________. (1)常见用语 connecting words or phrases 结果 原因 并列 转折 让步/条件 时间 so .../ that’s why .../ As a result, ... because .../ that’s because .../ because of+n. and (then) .../ also, .../ as well as ... but .../ However, .../ Although ...=Though ... if .../ as long as ...(只要) when .../ before .../ after ... Step 1 Pre-writing 书面表达的常用表达（Coherence） 1.Clear logic: Use __________________________________. (1)常见用语 connecting words or phrases 目的 举例 so that .../ in order to .../ To do sth, ... such as .../ For example, ... Step 1 Pre-writing 书面表达的常用表达（Coherence） 2.Coherent structure: Use ______________________________. progressive words or phrases 1. Advice 2. Steps 3. Ways 4. Plans Topic: Step 1 Pre-writing 书面表达的常用表达（Coherence） 2.Coherent structure: Use ______________________________. (1)For three points： progressive words or phrases 青铜 白银 黄金 王者 First(ly), .../ Second(ly), .../ Third(ly), ... At first, .../ Next, .../ Finally, ...=At last, ... First of all, .../ And then, .../ In the end, ... 首先 At the (very) beginning, ...= Above all, ... 其次 What’s more, ...=Besides, ...=Moreover, ...=In addition, ... 最后 Last but not least, ... Step 1 Pre-writing 书面表达的常用表达（Coherence） 2.Coherent structure: Use ______________________________. (1)For two points： 青铜 王者 1.一方面： 2.另一方面： progressive words or phrases First(ly), .../ Second(ly), ... On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ... Step 1 Pre-writing 书面表达的常用表达（Coherence） 3.Ending summary: Use ______________________________. conclusive words or phrases （1）常用总结 _________________________=_________________________=_________________________ （2）议论总结 ________________________=________________________ → to express your hope/ feeling/ appeal/ invitation/ ... In a word, ... All in all, ... Generally speaking, ... (3)高级句： To sum up, ... In conclusion, ... Finally, what I want to say is that + 总结句. Step 1 Pre-writing Bookstores are second homes for readers. Although many people can now buy books online, many readers still like staying in bookstores. They can touch the books and smell the fragrance(芳香)of them. ◆Bookstores in China◆ • Sanlian Taofen Bookstore became the first 24-hour bookstore in Beijing on April 18th, 2014． • Popular Holdings in Shanghai is a film-themed bookstore. It has film books and posters. • Eslite Bookstore in Taiwan often has some activities like talking with famous writers to attract readers. ◆Bookstores outside China◆ At the same time, foreign bookstores can be very colorful, too. • Scarthin Books is a small bookstore in the UK. It sells both new and second-hand books. There are more than 100，000 books lying on the shelves of the store’s 12 rooms. • Bart’s Books in the US is a good place to enjoy the sunshine while reading. It’s an outdoor bookstore. Bookshelves are on the street. When the store is closed, people can still buy boos. They just put money into the coin box at the door. • Where can you find a café(咖啡馆)，a bar and a bookstore in just one place? The answer is probably El Pendulo Bookstore in Mexico. The walls of the store are made of books. On the second floor, visitors can order everyday meals in the café and drink in the bar. In order to keep cool, there are green plants and trees inside. Does it look like a park? A．回答问题 请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。 Step 1 Pre-writing A．回答问题 请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。 1.When did the first 24-hour bookstore appear in Beijing? ______________________________________ 2.Where is the Eslite Bookstore? ______________________________________ 3.How many books are there in the Scarthin Books? ______________________________________ 4.What can people do while reading at Bart’s Books? ______________________________________ 5.Which bookstore looks like a park? ______________________________________ It appeared on April 18th, 2014 in Beijing. 　 Reading tips: 1. Read questions. 2. Circle key words. 3. Find out answers. It is in Taiwan. There are more than 100, 000 books. 　　 They can enjoy the sunshine. 　 El Pendulo Bookstore in Mexico looks like a park. 　 Step 1 Pre-writing 思考：如果让你根据这篇回答问题来出书面表达的具体内容，你会怎么出？ 话题范围：M1-6 时态范围：一般现在时、一般将来时 温馨提示：根据真题题型，联系本篇回答问题、学生实际生活，结合以下提示完成学案的思维导图。 B.书面表达 假如你是李华，在读完上面这篇文章后，你对国内外的书店都很感兴趣，并准备参加4月23日世界读书日（World Book Day）的全球读书分享活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇主题为“I Like Reading”的演讲，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 Step 1 Pre-writing B.书面表达（23-24七上期末真题回顾） 假如你是李华，你们学习每年都举办“佛山美食节（Foshan Food Festival）”。你打算邀请外教Tony参加今年的美食节，请你根据以下的思维导图用英文写一封邀请函，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 美食节邀请函 美食节安排 1.时间，地点 2.…… 佛山美食介绍 1.你喜欢的一种佛山美食的名字 2.喜欢该美食的理由 邀请外教参与 Step 1 Pre-writing B.书面表达 假如你是李华，在读完上面这篇文章后，你对国内外的书店都很感兴趣，并准备参加4月23日世界读书日（World Book Day）的全球读书分享活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇主题为“I Like Reading”的演讲，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 ________ (小主题联系回答问题) _______________________ _______________________ ________ (小主题联系生活实际) _______________________ _______________________ ________ (结尾表达) _______________________ _______________________ World Book Day Step 2 While-writing B.书面表达 假如你是李华，在读完上面这篇文章后，你对国内外的书店都很感兴趣，并准备参加4月23日世界读书日（World Book Day）的全球读书分享活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇主题为“I Like Reading”的演讲，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 我爱读书 介绍文中最想去的书店 1.书店名字及地点 2.参观的理由 分享读书日常及计划 1.日常看书频率 2.计划读…… 对世界读书日的期待 1.希望更多人热爱读书 2.期待明年…… Step 3 Post-writing I love reading. Luckily, there are many bookstore all over the world so that I can enjoy my reading time everywhere. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Of all the bookstores mentioned in a passage, I would like to visit Popular Holdings in Shanghai best because it has film books and posters. So when I am reading books, I can enjoy the films and collect posters at the same time. I usually go to the library to read books at weekends. I will read Chinese and foreign novels this year, because they can not only teach me a lot but also develop my skills of writing. In order to make ourselves better, I hope more and more people enjoy reading. Last but not least, I am looking forward to the World Book Day next year. $$