2023-2024学年外研版英语七年级下册书面表达学案：框架与衔接

狮山镇英才学校 2023-2024 学年第二学期七年级英语强基训练 ——书面表达：框架与衔接 出卷人：Ailsa 班级：__________ 姓名：__________ 学号：__________ 学习目标 1.书面表达的最新评分标准； 2.书面表达的常用表达（连贯类）； 3.书面表达的高分技巧。 Lead-in: Think and fill in the blanks. 书面表达（总分_____）得分细化 _____分 _____分 内容 语言 连贯 1、 书面表达的最新评分标准分析 1.内容（_____分）：写出题目要求的所有的点，少一处点则每一处扣_____分； 2.语言连贯（_____分）： （1）有属于自己独一无二的_________________________万金油库存； （2）不使用单一句式，如在使用简单句之后还能使用一两处_________________________；或者能使用_________________________做主语的句子，使得句子构成不是一成不变，也是体现自我语法素养的一种表现； （3）字迹不能太丑，_________________________。中考作文划一处绝对没有满分。字数超太多绝对没有满分； 2、 书面表达的常用表达（连贯类） 1.逻辑清晰：句与句之间一般要用_________________________连接 （1）常见用语： 结果 原因 并列 转折 让步/条件 时间 目的 举例 2.层次分明：_________________________等观点性内容中一般要使用分点词句 （1）适用于三点 青铜 白银 黄金 王者 1.首先： 2.其次： 3.最后： （2）适用于两点 青铜 First, ... Last, ... 王者 1.一方面： 2.另一方面： 3.首尾呼应：末段一般需要总结性用语表达_________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 （1）常用总结 _________________________ =_________________________ =_________________________ （2）议论总结 _________________________ =________________________ （3）高级句子：Finally, what I want to say is that + 总结句子. 3、 书面表达的高分技巧（三步法） 1.第一步：______ （1）从_____________中领悟书面表达主题 Exercise 1 Read and answer A．回答问题 请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。 Bookstores are second homes for readers. Although many people can now buy books online, many readers still like staying in bookstores. They can touch the books and smell the fragrance(芳香)of them. ◆Bookstores in China◆ • Sanlian Taofen Bookstore became the first 24-hour bookstore in Beijing on April 18th, 2014． • Popular Holdings in Shanghai is a film-themed bookstore. It has film books and posters. • Eslite Bookstore in Taiwan often has some activities like talking with famous writers to attract readers. ◆Bookstores outside China◆ At the same time, foreign bookstores can be very colorful, too. • Scarthin Books is a small bookstore in the UK. It sells both new and second-hand books. There are more than 100, 000 books lying on the shelves of the store’s 12 rooms. • Bart’s Books in the US is a good place to enjoy the sunshine while reading. It’s an outdoor bookstore. Bookshelves are on the street. When the store is closed, people can still buy boos. They just put money into the coin box at the door. • Where can you find a café(咖啡馆), a bar and a bookstore in just one place? The answer is probably El Pendulo Bookstore in Mexico. The walls of the store are made of books. On the second floor, visitors can order everyday meals in the café and drink in the bar. In order to keep cool, there are green plants and trees inside. Does it look like a park? 1.When did the first 24-hour bookstore appear in Beijing? ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.Where is the Eslite Bookstore? ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.How many books are there in the Scarthin Books? ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.What can people do while reading at Bart’s Books? ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.Which bookstore looks like a park? ____________________________________________________________________________ （2）从书面表达的题目中确定_____________、_____________ Exercise 2 Writing design Think：According to the passage, how will you set a writing task? Topic：七下M1-6 Tense：Present simple、Future simple Tips：根据真题题型，联系本篇回答问题、学生实际生活，结合以下提示完成学案的思维导图。 （23-24七上期末真题回顾） 假如你是李华，你们学习每年都举办“佛山美食节（Foshan Food Festival）”。你打算邀请外教Tony参加今年的美食节，请你根据以下的思维导图用英文写一封邀请函，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 （Work in groups） B.书面表达 假如你是李华，在读完上面这篇文章后，你对国内外的书店都很感兴趣，并准备参加4月23日世界读书日（World Book Day）的全球读书分享活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇主题为“I Like Reading”的演讲，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 (1)Your design (2)Ailsa’s design B.书面表达 假如你是李华，在读完上面这篇文章后，你对国内外的书店都很感兴趣，并准备参加4月23日世界读书日（World Book Day）的全球读书分享活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇主题为“I Like Reading”的演讲，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 I Like Reading By Li Hua I love reading. Luckily, there are many bookstore all over the world so that I can enjoy my reading time everywhere. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.第二步：______ （1）Start: Lead to the topic “I Like Reading” → 一般已给出（Think: How to make a connecting link?） （2）Main body (two paragraphs): Write some phrases Para 1. 介绍文中最想去的书店 1.信息： 2.理由： Para 2. 分享读书日常及计划 1.频率： 2.计划： （3）End (one paragraph): Para 3. 对世界读书日的期待 1.希望： 2.期待： 3.第三步：______ （1）Simple sentences A.方位介绍： ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ B.理由阐述： ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ C.表达希望/期待： ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ D.做某事： ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2）Complex sentences (You should use them properly according to the main body.) A.表达____________例句： There are many reasons why we choose to shop on the Internet.（引出下文） On the one hand, most of us don’t like going outside because it is easy to be tired after walking for a long time.(一方面) On the other hand, shopping online is more convenient to compare the prices of the same products.(另一方面) B.表达____________例句： I have many plans for the coming summer holiday.(引出下文) At the beginning, I will finish homework earlier so that I can spend more time reading books. Moreover, I decide to take a trip to Shanghai to enjoy its beautiful scenes(风景) at night. Last but not least, I will share the housework because my parents are busy working. $$