How to make dialogue vivid in Continuation Writing 课件-2024届高考英语一轮复习

How to make dialogue vivid in Continuation Writing --Celine Lead-in 1.“Nobody could understand me!” , she sobbed. 2.“Nobody could understand me!” , she sobbed, burying her face in her hands. 一.对话标签＋___________________________________ (1) “I would love to,” said Alice in a pleasant tone. Skills to make dialogue vivid (2) “Then go ahead!” I said in an encouraging voice. (3) The father picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice, “It’s yours now.” 语气/嗓音（in a /an ...tone/voice） Practice 1.　“I didn’t mean to,” she murmured _________________(低声说) 2.“I don't want to.” said Emily _______________________（以不耐烦的语气）. 3.He called out ________________(大声地) . 4.　“You must be Annie,”he said__________________(以友好的语气). in a low voice. in an impatient tone in a loud voice in a friendly tone 二. 对话标签＋________________________ (1) “I…I…don’t think I’m right for the part,” I replied with embarrassment. (2) “I hate you !”she screamed in anger. 介词短语(with/in+n.) in: in surprise/shock/sorrow/horror/anger with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride /caution/care/patience/certainty/amazement Skills to make dialogue vivid Practice 1.　“I've been waiting for you,”she said ________________(带着笑). 2. “Is it true ?”he whispered _____________________________(惊讶地). 3. “I made it, ”I exclaimed _____________.(高兴地) 4. “What can I do?” he said _____________(难过地) with a smile with amazement/in surprise with delight in sorrow 三. 对话标签＋____________________________ (1) “I will never do that again,” he said firmly. (2) “You don’t have to rush. Just take your time,” I said gently. 副词 firmly/excitedly/gratefully/seriously/sincerely/regretfully /bitterly/impatiently/rudely/breathlessly... Skills to make dialogue vivid Practice 1.“Thank you, sir,” whispered Paul __________.(感激地) 2. “I will never do that again ,” I answered ___________.(坚定地) 3. “Congratulations,”he said ______________.(真诚地) 4. “I’m afraid not,”he said _____________.(遗憾地) 5. “It’s unfair!”he complained____________.(心酸地) 6. “Hurry up! ”she shouted _____________.(不耐烦地) 7. “Wait for me!” he yelled _____________.(上气不接下气地) 8. “You should seize this chance.” he said ____________.(严肃地) gratefully firmly sincerely regetfully bitterly impatiently breathlessly seriously 四. 对话标签＋______________ (1) “He turned me out of the room this morning,” said James, stamping his foot in anger. (2) “Very clever,” said the teacher, nodding his head . (3) “We don’t do any harm,” said the boy, evidently frightened by my words. 现在分词或过去分词 Skills to make dialogue vivid Practice 1.“You will make it,”she said with a smile,__________________________________(给了我一个鼓励的眼神)。 2.“What should we do then?”Arthur asked,________________. (看上去很焦虑) 3.“Catch the robber,”the boy shouted, _____________________________________(指着戴黑帽子的男的) 4.“I’m really proud of you.”Mom said ,_______________________________.(拍着我的肩膀) giving me an encouraging look looking anxious pointing at the man in a black hat patting on my shoulder Summary 对话标签+ 1.语气/嗓音（in a/an... tone/voice） 2.介词短语（in/with+n.） 3.副词 4.现在分词/过去分词 Group work 1.我带着困惑的语气问道: “你为什么对我充满信心？”看着我的眼睛，他真诚地解释道:“你有写作的天赋。继续写作吧!”（2023新高考全国I卷） 2.我温柔而平静地说: “没有人能改变你的想法，除了你自己。”他静静地坐着，深吸了一口气。“你在比赛前做了充分准备。要相信你自己！”，我真诚地补充道。（2022新高考全国I卷） 3. 突然，我意识到我应该做什么。我走上前，说 :“这是我存的钱。希望有用。”爸爸被我的话深深打动了，紧紧地抱着我。（2021年6月浙江卷） 4.他把我叫到他身边，安慰我说：“你做得很好。我相信你可以自己完成。”此刻，我甚至可以在他眼中看到星星。（2022年1月浙江卷） 5.“我该付多少钱?”她边问边伸手去拿钱包。“不要钱，”我笑了笑，答道。 她好像不敢相信我说的话，睁大眼睛看着我。（2022年广州二模） 6.“妈妈，对不起。不是猫打碎的花瓶，是我。”他结结巴巴地说出了真相，不敢正视母亲的眼睛。“如果是这样，那我就得收回这些巧克力了。”母亲严肃地说道。（2021年广州一模） Group work 1.我带着困惑的语气问道: “你为什么对我充满信心？”看着我的眼睛，他真诚地解释道:“你有写作的天赋。继续写作吧!”（2023新高考全国I卷） 2.我温柔而平静地说: “没有人能改变你的想法，除了你自己。”他静静地坐着，深吸了一口气。“你在比赛前做了充分准备。要相信你自己！”，我真诚地补充道。（2022新高考全国I卷） 3. 突然，我意识到我应该做什么。我走上前，说 :“这是我存的钱。希望有用。”爸爸被我的话深深打动了，紧紧地抱着我。（2021年6月浙江卷） 4.他把我叫到他身边，安慰我说：“你做得很好。我相信你可以自己完成。”此刻，我甚至可以在他眼中看到星星。（2022年1月浙江卷） 5.“我该付多少钱?”她边问边伸手去拿钱包。“不要钱，”我笑了笑，答道。 她好像不敢相信我说的话，睁大眼睛看着我。（2022年广州二模） Homework 运用所学对话描写技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。（2021 全国新高考 1 卷） As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of the mess and the kids‘ gloomy faces,he immediately realized what they were up to.“Need any help?” 1 （爸爸微笑着温柔地问）,who felt discouraged at being found screwing things up. Jeff 2. _ （结巴地说出)their failed plan, 3 _________________________________（他尴尬地羞红了脸）. "That's a great idea. May I join you?" At this the twins cheered up and rolled up their sleeves to clean the stove before they learned to fry the bread following their father's instructions. Soon came the delicious smell of French toast and chicken porridge,at which the twins felt a great sense of achievement. With everything settled,father left the kitchen,4 （承诺道）to keep their secret. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Sitting up in confusion, mother was greeted with the kids' smiling eyes and happy giggles. Before she could realize what was going on, the twins presented the breakfast tray,5 ____________ （大声喊道）,"Happy Mother's Day!” 6 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________（惊讶地盯着精心准备的食物，妈妈饱含深情地说）, "Thank you，darling.That's the biggest surprise I've ever had!” It was then that father entered, 7 （回应） mother “That must be the best breakfast ever!” Mother bit into a piece of toast，nodding her head approvingly with great satisfaction. Exchanging glances, father and the twins beamed brightly with pleasure. Homework Homework 运用所学对话描写技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。（2021 全国新高考 1 卷） As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of the mess and the kids‘ gloomy faces,he immediately realized what they were up to.“Need any help?” 1 _______ __________（爸爸微笑着温柔地问）,who felt discouraged at being found screwing things up. Jeff 2. ______________（结巴地说出)their failed plan, 3 _________________________________（他尴尬地羞红了脸）. "That's a great idea. May I join you?" At this the twins cheered up and rolled up their sleeves to clean the stove before they learned to fry the bread following their father's instructions. Soon came the delicious smell of French toast and chicken porridge,at which the twins felt a great sense of achievement. With everything settled,father left the kitchen,4 ___ （承诺道）to keep their secret. father gently inquired with a smile， stammered out his face flushing with embarrassment promising The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Sitting up in confusion, mother was greeted with the kids' smiling eyes and happy giggles. Before she could realize what was going on, the twins presented the breakfast tray,5 ____________ （大声喊道）,"Happy Mother's Day!” 6 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________（惊讶地盯着精心准备的食物，妈妈饱含深情地说）, "Thank you，darling.That's the biggest surprise I've ever had!” It was then that father entered, 7 _________ （回应） mother “That must be the best breakfast ever!” Mother bit into a piece of toast，nodding her head approvingly with great satisfaction. Exchanging glances, father and the twins beamed brightly with pleasure. responding exclaiming Staring at the carefully-prepared food in wide-eyed surprise，mother said affectionately Homework $$