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UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF
ACHIEVEMENT
Writing——人物描写
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
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be known as
a pharmacist
a collection of Chinese herbs
character
call on
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was known as
was born in
which is called
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which includes
finishing the task
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Known as a famous pharmacist in Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.
It took him 27 years to finish the task.
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UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
人物描写属于记叙文的范畴, 它以写人、记事为主, 以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。这种简短的人物传记内容是人物生平最基本的信息和最重要的事迹。时态的选择要视情况而定, 若写人物的过去就用过去时态, 若写人物的现在就用现在时态。一般包括下列内容:
[对应学生用书第22页]
1.人物的基本信息, 如生卒年月、出生地、国籍、职业、家庭背景等;
2.人物的重要事迹(举例说明);
3.人物及其事迹对社会的贡献或影响;
4.对人物的评价。
[基本框架]
1.首段:生平介绍
人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息;介绍生平时要尊重客观事实, 材料要真实。
2.中段:事迹叙述
选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹, 以形成对比, 起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点, 不必面面俱到。
3.尾段:简短的评论
对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。
[常用词语]
1.devote
献身;用心于
2.seek
寻找;探索
3.patience
耐心
4.be curious about…
对……感到好奇
5.lose heart
丧失勇气或信心
6.bring up
抚养;培养;教育
7.take a chance
冒险
8.as for
至于;关于
9.have a gift for
有……天赋
10.make friends with
和……交朋友
11.a lively and smart girl
一个活泼聪明的女孩
12.warmhearted and goodlooking
热心肠而且漂亮
13.be ready to help others
乐于助人
14.learn from each other and help each other
相互帮助相互学习
15.be highly praised by
得到……的高度称赞
[常用语句]
1.Famous as she is, she cares little about fame and money and leads a simple life.
虽然很有名, 但她不计名利, 过着简朴的生活。
2.Born into a poor family, she had little schooling.
她出身贫穷, 只受过很少的教育。
3.She is a woman with great achievements.
她是一位有卓越成就的女性。
4.With great determination and perseverance, she devoted herself to helping the blind and deaf children.
凭着无比的决心和毅力, 她全身心地帮助失聪、失明儿童。
5.Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
她的故事告诉我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的东西, 努力克服生活中的任何困难。
6.He/She is such a learned/strongwilled person that we all admire/respect him/her.
他/她是一个如此博学/意志坚强的人, 以至于我们都钦佩/尊敬他/她。
7.He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.
他/她毕生都致力于这项工作。
8.He/She made great contributions to our country.
他/她对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。
9.He/She was highly thought of by many people.
他/她受到很多人的高度评价。
10.He/She will live in the hearts of us forever.
他/她会永远活在我们心中。
请根据以下材料, 写一篇介绍中国明代医药学家李时珍的文章。
姓名:李时珍
出生年代:1518
著作:《本草纲目》(Compendium of Materia Medica)
内容:中草药(Chinese herbs)总集, 包含近2 000种中草药, 数百万字
写作经历:访民间, 走群山, 尝百草, 亲身做实验
成书时间:1578年, 历时27年
评价:对中国医药学发展做出了重大贡献
注意:词数80左右。
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[审题谋篇]
明确体裁话题——人物描写;李时珍
确定人称时态 以第三人称及一般过去时, 一般现在时为主
布局文章架构 首段:人物概况
中段:事迹, 生平
尾段:评价
列出核心要点
1.李时珍生平
2.《本草纲目》简介及其评价
[词汇推敲]
1.___________
以……著名
2.____________
医药学家
3._____________________________
中草药总集
4._________
汉字
5._______
拜访
[遣词造句]
①Li Shizhen _____________a famous pharmacist in Ming Dynasty.
李时珍是中国明代的一位著名医药学家。
②He ____________1518.
他出生于1518年。
③He wrote a book _______________ Compendium of Materia Medica.
他写了一本叫作《本草纲目》的书。
④Compendium of Materia Medica is a collection of Chinese herbs ______________ over 2,000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters.
《本草纲目》是一本中国中草药总集, 其中包含了2 000多种中草药, 数百万字。
⑤He spent 27 years __________________.
他花费了27年的时间完成了这项任务。
[句式升级]
1.用过去分词短语作状语升级句①和句②
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2.用定语从句、非谓语动词和介词短语升级句③和句④
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3.用it作形式主语改写句⑤
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He wrote a book called Compendium of Materia Medica, which is a collection of Chinese herbs including over 2,000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters.
[妙笔成篇]
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[参考范文]
Known as a famous pharmacist in Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.
He wrote a book called Compendium of Materia Medica, which is a collection of Chinese herbs including over 2,000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters.In order to finish the task, he visited mountains, called on ordinary people, tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.It took him 27 years to finish the task, and his book is considered to be a great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine.
假定你是李华, 请根据下列表格中的内容提示, 为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文, 介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科学家。
姓名
梁建英
出生年份
1972年
职务
中国高铁总设计师
主要经历
(1)1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作
(2)研制出时速300~350千米高速动车组
(3)2015年获奖
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:高速动车组(highspeed EMU)
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[参考范文]
Liang Jianying, general designer of the China high speed EMU, was born in 1972.Since she graduated in 1995, she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China highspeed railway.Afterwards, she invented the 300~350km/h highspeed EMU, making it more convenient for us to get around quickly.It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in highspeed railways all over the world.As a consequence, she was awarded in 2015.However, she never shows any signs of pride.
Liang Jianying has set a good example for us.From her, I realize that we should keep on trying until we realize our dreams.
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