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Unit 3 The Internet
Reading for Writing
How to write a blog post
Blog is a series of posts on a website arranged in reverse chronological order.
博客是网站上按时间倒序排列的一系列帖子。
Blogger is the person who writes something on the blog.
Blog post is the article that people write on the blog.
navigation bar导航条
title
body
ending
introduction
comment area
主页
页数
分类
图片(库)
联系
A Blog Post
(structure)
navigation bar导航条
1.Where is the blog post from?
Internet.
2.What parts does the blog post include?
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Comment area
?
What's the main idea of the blog post?
How do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet?
Online Safety
Title?
Tip 1: Use as few words as possible to catch the attention of the readers.
How to stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet
Title
What information about the author can we get?
He/She is not an _____, but an experienced _______.
expert
blogger
being a blogger for many years
Para. 1
有经验的;熟练的
Tick what the writer tells the reader in Para. 1.
Para. 1
Tip 2: Ask a question to introduce the topic.
Introduction
definition of online safety
background information
the writer's knowledge
the topic of the post
“How do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet?”
How?
√
√
√
√
Para. 2
How does the author answer the question?
by ___________________
giving 3 golden rules
guidelines
Body
Para. 2
What are the guidelines?
Tip3:Use imperative sentences(祈使句) to make the language powerful.
dos(要) don'ts(不要)
leave the site immediately
protect your privacy
be polite
post comments/click on anything
give out your address/phone number
similarity(相似)?
Third rule in Para.2: be polite
don't be rude
don't be a troll
don't ...
don't be a cyberbully
don't stir up trouble
don't be mean to others
don't post embarrassing photos and information
The more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked.
Para. 2
How are the guidelines connected?
First of all
Second
Third
Tip4:Use linking words to express ideas clearly and coherently (连贯地).
Para. 2
How can we explain new words or key terms in Para.2?
Identity Theft
A Troll
A Cyberbully
It is a problem...steal your identity.
A troll is a person ... stir up trouble online.
Like a troll, a cyberbully will use ... .
explanation
definition
comparison
Tip 5: Add details and use skills such as explanation, definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
“Have you had any bad experience online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe? Post your comments below!”
Para. 3
What does the author ask the readers to do?
make comments
language points
首先
黄金法则
点击(用鼠标)
保护某人的隐私
泄露
不是...的借口
...的目标/对象
惹事
针对...
adj. 粗鲁的,无礼的,粗糙的,原始的
近义词 impolite /ˌɪmpəˈlaɪt/ adj. 无礼的
假名字
false a.假的,错误的
对某人刻薄
mean adj.(人或其行为)不善良的,刻薄的
近义词:specific adj. 具体的,特定的,特有的
adj. 尴尬的,难堪的
教会我一两件事/略知一二
n. rudeness 无礼,粗蛮
privacy n. 隐私,私密
private adj.私人的;秘密的
在网上保持安全
troll n.发挑衅帖子的人
cyberbully n. 网霸
make fun of 取笑
制造麻烦
如何写博客
本单元的写作任务是博客写作(blog post),博文就是网络日志中的短小美文。必须具备以下要求:
1.标题引人注目;
2.内容新颖;
3.短小精悍;
4.融思想性、知识性、趣味性、艺术性于一体。
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Let's write.
请根据以下要点以“ Online Shopping Safety”为题写一篇关于如何安全地网上购物的帖子并发表在你的博客上。词数100左右。
1.挑选你熟悉的购物网站;
2.使用较为复杂的密码;
3.勿使用公共网络购物……
explain the rules
ask others to give comments
others' comments
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Comments
tell the main idea
introduce a topic and introduce oneself
structure
Tip3:Use linking words to express ideas clearly and coherently (连贯地).
Tip4:Use imperative sentences(祈使句) to make the language powerful.
Tip 5: Add details and use skills such as explanation、definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Comments
Tip 1: Use as few words as possible to catch the attention of the readers.
Tip 2: Ask a question to introduce the topic.
skills
当谈及网上购物安全,作为一个有经验的网民,我确信对此我还是略知一二的。
Para1: introduction
When it comes to online shopping safety, as an experienced netizen, I am sure that I know one thing or two.
随着网络的快速发展,在过去几年里网上购物也大幅度地增长。但网上购物真的安全吗?当然不!
With the rapid development of the Internet, online shopping has greatly grown in the past few years. However, is online shopping really safe? Of course not!
虽然网上购物给我们带来极大的便利,但也有着很多不安全的隐患。我们要如何使网上购物更加安全呢?
Although online shopping brings us great convenience, there are many insecure risks. How should we make online shopping safer?
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有着以下几点简单的建议,你可以愉快地享受网上购物的便利。
Para1: introduction
With these following simple tips, you can enjoy the convenience of online shopping with much pleasure.
当你在网上购物时,这些简单的建议能够帮助你避免一些糟糕的购物体验。
When you shop online, these simple suggestions can help avoid some terrible experiences.
建议当你在网上购物前,有必要阅读以下几点建议,这会使网上购物毫无风险。
It is recommended that it is neccessary to read the following advice before shopping online, which makes your online shopping risk-free.
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首先,挑选熟悉的购物网站。最好在你了解且信任的网站上购物,它会保护好你的隐私。如果你很需要从不知名的网址购买商品,在购买前先试着去浏览一下网站的其他评价。
Para2: rules/ advice
First of all, choose the website you are familiar with. It’s best to shop from the website you know and trust, because it can protect your privacy. If you feel the need to shop from an unknown website, try to go through others’ reviews on it.
linking words+imperative sentences
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其次,使用较为复杂的密码。只有几个数字或字母的简单的密码很容易被入侵(hack)。为了安全起见,更加推荐使用较为复杂的密码。而且,不要轻易泄露你的密码。
Para2: rules/ advice
Second, use a strong password. A simple password with only few numbers or letters is easily hacked. For better safety, a strong password is highly recommended. Plus, don’t give out your password.
linking words+imperative sentences
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最后,勿使用公共网络购物。使用公共网络购物有着巨大的风险。你可以使用手机热点(hotspot)去购物,而不是公共网络。或者,可以将你想要购买的商品加入购物车,直到回家后再使用安全网络去购买。
Para2: rules/ advice
Third, don’t shop on public network. Shopping on public Wifi is a huge risk. (You can) use your phone as a hotspot instead of public Wifi. Or, add those items that you want to buy into your shopping cart and shop until you are at home and on your safe network.
linking words+imperative sentences
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你有什么关于安全网上购物的建议吗?欢迎在下方评论!
Para3: Ending (ask others to give comments)
Do you have any good tip about shopping online safely? Your ideas are welcomed below!
欢迎大家分享自己的故事和发表任何与安全网上购物的评论!
You are welcomed to share your stories and make any comment on online shopping safety!
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□1. Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic?
□2. Are the tips and suggestions well organized?
□3. Has the writer defined the new words?
□4. Does the author include examples, comparisons, or explanations?
□5. Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions?
□6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes?
Let's polish the passage.
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Sample writing
Online Shopping Safety
When it comes to shopping online safety, I’m sure that I know one thing or two. My net age is 10 years. Here are some tips for you.
First, use the shopping websites you are familiar with. Download familiar app or software like taobao. Second, when registering a shopping website, use a strong password and keep it well. Third, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers. Last, install a firewall to watch over your information. A firewall is a kind of software to protect your using Internet.
Have you any good tips about shopping online safely?Your ideas are welcomed below!
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谋篇布局
就本单元的写作任务而言,可以分为三部分:
第一部分:提出话题—网络安全的重要性;
第二部分:主体—对网络安全的建议;
第三部分:结尾—征求读者意见并欢迎留言。
1. 发表关于...的博客_____________
2. 网上购物安全___________________
3. 略知一二______________________
4.对....熟悉__________________
5. 这是一个好的选择________________
6.避免使用这个密码_________________________
7. 越复杂,越安全_____________________________
8. 在公共场所__________________ 9.在家购物__________________
know a thing or two
It's a good choice
avoid using this password
be familiar with
the more difficult.... the safer...
shop at home
blog about ....
online shopping safety
in public places
1. Today, I want to blog ______ online shopping safety, which has caused __________________ (广泛的关注) nowadays.
2. Many years ______(作为一名) an online shopper have taught me _______________ (略知一二) about this topic .
3. Use the website you are _________ _____ (熟悉的).
4. Shopping at a familiar website is _______________(好的选择)
5. _______, _____ ______(此外,避免使用) your birthday and phone number as your password.
a thing or two
a good choice
Besides avoid using
familiar with
about
as
a wide attention
6. It's better ________(use) a mix of numbers and letters as your password.
7. __________difficult the password is , ________________.(密码越复杂,你就越安全)
8. Some people shop online at public places , _______can make them become the ______ (目标) of hackers.
9. It is much safer to _____________.(在家网购)
10.Do you have some good _______________(好的建议分享?)
the safer you are
The more
shop at home
which
advice to share
target
to use
Homework
Check and revise your draft blog post and exchange it with your deskmate to find any spelling or grammar mistakes.
Thank
you!
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