Unit 2 Section Ⅳ Writing—描述未来科技发展的利弊（学生用书）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

UNIT 2 LOOKING INTO THE FUIURE [习作练笔]-补全句子 resisting the temptation of the mental "junk (3)你日常生活中发生的事情会改变你看待世 food" in order to manage our time most effectively. 界和世人的方式。 我们还需要更多地考虑我们的信息消费,抵制 Something that happens in your daily life will 精神上“垃圾食品”的诱惑,以便最有效地管理 change and the 我们的时间。 people in it. [融会练通]-单句语法填空 ③(教材Po)Nevertheless, I will always look on (1)She could hardly resist (cry) the positive side of change and accept it rather when she heard that she hadn't passed the test. thanresistit.尽管如此,我总是会看到变化的积 (2)The no-smoking policy was introduced with 极一面,接受它而不是抵制它。 little (resist) from staff ·resist vi.&vt.抵制:反抗:抵挡 [习作练笔]--一句多译 ①resist doing sth 反对做某事 (3)因为这件外套售价如此便宜,我抵不住诱惑 can't resist (doing) sth 忍不住做某事 (temptation)买了下来。 ②resistance n.抵制;反对;抗拒 ①As the coat was a bargain at such a low price. I ③resistant adi.抵制的;抵抗的 .(resist) be resistant to 抵制......:对......有抵抗力 ②As the coat was a bargain at such a low price, I .(resistant) (2024·1 月浙江)We also need to be more I反情提示完成P。要点自查(四) thoughtful about our information consumption. IV Writing Section 描述未来科技发展的利弊答案精解P.. 本单元的写作任务是“描述未来科技发展的 2.正确使用时态和人称 利弊”,属于阐述自已观点的议论文。议论文是 写作时,主要使用一般现在时。简述两种观 一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的 点时用第三人称,介绍个人看法时用第一人称 文体。议论文的结构一般有引论、本论和结论三 以读促写 部分。引论用来提出论点,即开门见山地描述现 象或表明立场:本论进一步论证阐述论点:结论 跟课文学写作范式 用来表达自己的观点或提出解决问题的办法。 课文范式提炼 写作时一般要注意以下两点: [开为点明文章主题. 如课文第一段:从二个具体 论 提山论点 1.明确观点 故出发,引话题“我们 .如课文第二 写作过程中,常采用集中比较的写作方 议 分析方或反 段:人们& [主相 方观点,并说 .不依赖新技术的情况下也可! 本论 式,把两方面事物加以对比,或者是用一种事 明理由 以自如地生活→衍技术带来 i的各神使利 物来烘托另一种事物,通过两个方面的对比, [结] 如课文第四段:作者提出个 (结 表达自已的观点人观应从积极的度 突出说明其中一个方面的正确性。 待技术革新带来的变化; .37 英语 选择性必修 第一册 同步导学案 )跟课文学亮点表达 地生活;另一方面,科技的发展给人们带来了 ·阅读文章第一自然段,习得以下素养 很多好处。 ★学亮点表达 2.第三段第三句Moreover,the Internet has 1.本段使用恰当的情态动词来表述该话题的支 made it possible for friends and family to keep 持方、反对方和作者本人的观点,如;shou in toucheasily...使用了“make十宾语十宾语 oppose .., could even be dangerous .... should 补足语”结构,且句中it为形式宾语,真正的宾 cease...,wouldbetravelling..等,针对“我们 语是动词不定式短语to keep intouch easily。 是否应该反对无人驾驶汽车”表明不同立场。 [微写作2]--英译汉 2.本段多处使用宾语从句,如:variouspeople (1)On the one hand, I need to switch to another said that .... The newspaper reported that .... job, but on the other hand, I still like my the companystill claimed that..进一步阐述 present one. 不同人群对无人驾驶汽车的态度和看法 [微写作1门--补全句子 (2) Your valuable advice has made it possible for (1)家长应该积极鼓励孩子利用这个机会加入运 me to finish the work on time. 动队。 Parents take advantage of the opportunity to join ★学论证手法 sports teams. 第二、三段采用了对比的论证手法。第二段 (2)越来越多的人声称,燃料价格的上涨肯定会 用阿曼门诺派拒绝现代技术而按照简朴的农耕 解决交通和污染问题 方式生活的例子来论证一种观点,即:人们在不 More and more people 依赖新技术的情况下也可以自如地生活。第三 higher fuel costs would definitely solve the 段则用新技术带来的各种便利论证了另外一种 issues of traffic and pollution 观点,通过对比两种观点为下文审加鲜明地表述 ★学逻辑衔接 作者自己的观点做好烘托。这是正反式观点议 本段从无人驾驶模式下汽车撞车造成伤亡 论文常用的手法。 的事故谈起,引出话题“我们应该反对无人驾戟 ·阅读文章第四自然段,习得以下素养 汽车吗?”,并从三个角度提出论点,展示不同人 ★学亮点表达 群对科技发展的态度。 1.第四段第三句使用了whic引导的非限制性 ·阅读文章第二、三自然段,习得以下素养 定语从句,以此来说明生活中“我”对健康检测 ★学亮点表达 器的依赖,从而表达个人的立场。 1.第二段和第三段句首运用标志语Ontheone 2.第四段最后一句使用Nevertheless一词,提示 hand..,On the other hand.分别引l出段落大 读者要关注接下来的支撑性信息。具有类似 意,即:一方面,有些群体保持着古老的生活方 功能的词汇还有:hence,forexample,of 式,不依赖现代科技,愿意在自然状态中简朴 course, personally 等. .38 UNIT 2 LOOKING INTO THE FUIURE [微写作3]-补全句子 well known that the opinions concerning this (1)她和她的家人坚持骑自行车上班,这有助于 hot topic vary from person to person. 他们保持健康。 越来越多的中国学生前往外国留学,这一问题 She and her family insist on cycling to work. 引起了广泛关注。但众所周知,关于这个热门 话题人们的意见各不相同 (2)因此,深入了解它的历史和文化是至关重要的 ②Recently, there is a heated/fierce debate in , it is of vital importance our class on whether middle school students to gain a deep insight into its history and should take up part-time jobs on their weekends. culture. 最近,我们班就中学生是否应该在周末做兼职 ★学逻辑衔接 工作展开了激烈的辩论。 第四段中作者围绕主题句Ihavebenefited ③There is no denying that the environment is quite a lot from technological advances 阐述自己 getting polluted more and more seriously 的观点。作者从个人经历和经验出发,佐证了科 不可否认的是,环境污染越来越严重 技带来的便利,最终有效论证自已的观点。 ④As we all know, science and technology has changed our life in many aspects.我们都知道 素材积累 ) 科学技术在很多方面改变了我们的生活。 (一)输入好词 Such a situation is of great concern. In my 1. acknowledge v.承认 opinion, over-protection and too much care 2. concern n.关心:担心 are extremely bad for children's development 3. conclude u.推断出:得出结论 这样的情况很值得关注,在我看来,过度保护 4. deny v.否认;拒绝承认 和太多照顾对孩子们的发展是极其有害的。 5. phenomenon 1.现象 2.阐述观点与看法 6. opposite adj.相反的;对立的 The development of science and technology 7.as far as I'm concerned 就我个人而言 makes our life more comfortable and convenient. 8. contribute to/result in 导致 科学技术的发展使我们的生活更加舒适和便利。 9. benefit from 从.....获益 When it comes to failure, people have/ take/ 10. in one's opinion 在某人看来 adopt different attitudes towards it/different 11. in favour of 赞成 people hold different attitudes towards it 12. take measures 采取措施 谈到失败,人们的态度各不相同。 (二)输入佳句 ⑧ Different people have different opinions/ views 1.描述现象或表明立场 on this question. Some people believe that ... ①There is a widespread concern over the issue while others argue that... that more and more Chinese students have 对于这个问题,不同的人有不同的看法。有些 gone to foreign countries to study. But it is 人认为.......而另一些人主张..... .39. 英语 选择性必修 第一册 同步导学案 People's views on it/People's attitudes towards It is necessary that effective/ proper action/ it vary from person to person. Some hold that .... steps/measures should be taken to end the However, others believe that ... situation/phenomenon/tendency. 人们对此的观点/态度各不相同。有些人认 有必要采取有效的/恰当的措施结束这种情 为......然而其他人却认为...... 况/现象/趋势。 From my point of view, it is up to us 佳作构建 ourselves to make a reasonable plan for our future.在我看来,该由我们自己为我们的将来 【写作要求】 制订一个合理的计划。 假定你是阳光中学的学生李华,昨天你们班 I'm greatly convinced that "Honesty is the 开了一个班会,同学们就“科技发展给人们带来 best policy" in most situations 的利弊”这一话题展开了激烈的讨论。请你用英 我坚信,在多数情况下“诚实是最好的策略”。 语写一篇短文。要点包括: 3.作出总结 1.60%的同学认为利大于弊; In general, we should help people of the 2.40%的同学认为弊大于利; inferior group. But we should remain sensible 3.你的观点。 when giving money. 注意:1.词数80左右; 总的来说,我们应该帮助弱势群体(的人)。但 2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 【四步成文】 是我们在给钱的时候应该保持理智。 As far as I am concerned, what matters 第一步:审题谋篇 most is that we should make good use of science 明确体话题 议论文,科技发展给人们带来的利弊 andtechnology.在我看来,最重要的是我们应 1 确定时态人称 般现在时,第人称 该好好运用科技。 第段:引人话题 __._.. ④ The problem is becoming more and more 布局文章架构第二段:不同人持有的观点; :第二段:表达个人观点。 serious and it's time for us to do something to 1.科技发展的利弊,不同的人有不同 changethesituation.问题越来越严重,是我们 !的观点; 例核心要点 12. 些同学认为科技与我们日常生活 采取措施改变局面的时候了。 密不可分: 13.另一些同学认为科技使人际关系疏 In conclusion, the most important is to raise 远:带米康问题。 people's awareness of... 第二步:由词扩句 总之,最重要的是提高人们对.....的意识。 1.昨天我们班开了一个班会。 Only in this way can we... Our class yesterday. 只有这样,我们才能..... 2.就科技给人们带来的利弊问题,不同的人持有 It is urgent that immediate measures should 不同的观点。 be takentostopthe situation.应立即采取措 Different people 施阻止这一事态的发展,这是迫在眉睫的。 science and technology. .40· UNT2 LOOKING INTO THE FUTURE 3.60%的同学认为我们的日常生活离不开科技。 60% of the students science and technology. 4.地球变“小”了,我们通过手机可以足不出户看 世界美景。 实战演练 假如你是李华,最近你班同学就“太空探索 without leaving home 是否值得”这一话题展开了讨论。请你根据下表 through our mobile phones. 提供的信息,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文介 5.40%的同学认为科技使人们的关系变得疏远。 绍讨论的情况。 40% of the students 30%的同学认为 70%的同学认为 because of 1.不值得探索: 1.值得探索 science and technology. 2.离我们及我们的日常生活 2.已使用卫星通信、传送 6.每天使用电子产品,人们的身体出现了一系列 太遥远,不能解决实际问题; 数据、预报天气; 的问题。 3.浪费时间,金钱。这些 3.有望通过移居其他星 金钱本可用来解决地球上 every day, so 球解决地球人口问题和 的饥饿、污染等问题。 地球能源短缺问题。 their bodies have a series of problems 7. 只要我们好好运用科技,它就会更好地服务于人类 science and technology, it will better serve mankind. 第三步:句式升级 8.用非谓语动词作状语改写句( 第四步:连句成篇 完成P.课时作业(六) 完成P.UNIT2 单元回扣 完成P.UNIT2 单元验收评价跟踪检测 2.(1)一方面，我需要换份工作：但是另一方面，我还喜欢现在 【,单句语法填空 的工作 1.will be taking 2.will be having 3.will be playing (2)你宝贵的建议使得我有可能按时完成这项工作。 4.will tell 5.is going to rain 6.will go 7.will be teaching 3.(1)which helps them keep fit (2)Hence 8.will be flying 9.will help 10.will be celebrating 佳作构建 Ⅱ，语法与写作 第二步：由词扩句 1.will be sitting there 2.will be watching TV 1.held a class meeting 3.shall be visiting my grandmother 2.hold different views on the advantages and disadvantages 4.I'll be having a meeting brought by 5.be playing on the beach 3.think that our daily life cannot be separated from 6.will be telling you the news 4.The Earth is getting smaller,and we can see the beautiful world Ⅲ，语境综合应用 5.think that the relationship between people becomes not as 1.will be arriving 2.will be coming 3.will be meeting close as before 4.will be singing 5.will be staying 6.will be trying 6.People use electronic products 语基输入·助力语言输出 7.As long as we make good use of 1.(1)combined (2)combination (3)When you combine work and pleasure 第三步：句式升级 2.(1)eating (3)(to)clean 8.Using electronic products every day,people's bodies have a series of problems. SectionⅢ Using Language 第四步：连句成篇 课文研读·发展思维品质 One possible version: I.1~4 CCAC Our class held a class meeting yesterday.Different people II.1.developing 2.in 3.who 4.emphasis 5.polluted hold different views on the advantages and disadvantages 6.has provided 7.to keep 8.easier 9.Personally 10.the brought by science and technology. 语基输入·助力语言输出 60%of the students think that our daily life cannot be 1.(1)predictions (2)about (3)unpredictable separated from science and technology.For example,the Earth (4)It is predicted that the number of people who can benefit is getting smaller.and we can see the beautiful world without from his research (5)are predicted to disappear 2.(1)were occupied (2)occupation (3)with leaving home through our mobile phones.But 40%of the (4)Occupied in preparing the College Entrance Examination: students think that the relationship between people becomes not Occupying myself in preparing the College Entrance Examination as close as before because of science and technology.And using 3.(1)staying (2)to (3)opposite (4)opposed to electronic products every day.people's bodies have a series of problems. (5)With all of my friends opposed to my plan In my opinion.as long as we make good use of science and 4.(1)absence (2)from (3)OI had been absent from school technology,it will better serve mankind. for a long time 2my long absence from school 实战演练 5.(1)an (2)rewarding (3)(should)be banned One possible version: (4)Ddoing our part to protect the environment we (should)do our part to protect the environment Recently.students in our class have had a discussion on 6.(1)to adjust (2)quarrelling (3)that (4)to adapt herself to whether space is worth exploring. (5)making it possible for them to understand 30%of the students think space exploration is not (6)have been out of touch:get in touch with each other worthwhile.They think space is too far away from us and our (7)lose touch with their language and culture daily life to solve practical problems.Meanwhile,it is a waste of (8)After getting in touch with his childhood friend Jack money exploring space.The money spent on space exploration 7.(1)that (2)that/which can be used to solve the Earth's problems such as starvation and (3)the way (that/in which)you look at the world pollution. 8.(1)erying (2)resistance (3)Dcouldn't resist the temptation On the other hand,70%think space is worth exploring. to buy it wasn't resistant to the temptation to buy it from which we have benefited a lot,such as using satellites for Section M Writing一描述未来科技发展的利弊 communication,transmitting data,and forecasting weather. 以读促写 What's more,not only may we solve the population problem by [微写作门 moving to other planets one day with further space research.but 1.(1)should actively encourage their children to also space research will enable us to find new resources to solve (2)claimed/claim that the problem of energy shortages on the Earth. 174·