Unit 1 Section Ⅳ Writing—写一篇人物简介（学生用书）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

UNIT I PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Section IV Writing 写一篇人物简介 答案精解P 本单元的写作任务是“介绍你钦佩的人”，属 [微写作1门—补全句子 于记叙文的写作范畴。写作时要围绕人物组织 (1)外公在那个偏僻的农场孜孜不倦地干活，他 材料，通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、性 教导我应该随遇而安，知足常乐一不论拥 有的是多是少。 格特点、教育背景、工作经历、专业、爱好和主要 my grandfather 事迹等。所选材料要注意客观真实性，不要言过 taught me that we should accept and be 其实。描写人物的外貌，性格和爱好等常用一般 grateful for what we have-whether it be 现在时，而介绍人物的出生时间及地点，教育背 much or little. 景、工作经历和主要事迹则常用一般过去时 (2)凭借着勤奋和决心，海伦最终战胜了命运。 There 以读促写 > Helen obtained a great triumph(胜利)in the war with her destiny and misfortune. 》跟课文学写作范式 (3)这些电影不仅赚钱，而且被视为具有原创性。 (一)课文范式提炼 they 开买 简婴如课文第一酸：简耍说可了爱因斯所 介细州的杰！成就和突出责献 were perceived to be original. ★学逻辑衔接 具休 如课文第二不上段：接时问顺序介 本段对爱因斯坦对世界作出的贡献以及个 描述 绍了爱因斯坦的生平，包拆他的教 育背景、工作绘历、成就以及个性 人的性格作了简要的介绍，使读者对其有了大概 的 绌尼 作四 如课文第六段：说爱闲斯坦的去 的认识，为下文具体闸释做好了铺垫。 评价世世界的损 。阅读文章第二至四自然段，习得以下素养 二)常用范式推荐 ★学修辞手法 开头 别人物简要介绍 第三段第四句采用了类比的修辞手法，借助 (beginning) 如生平，事件、职业等 类似事物的特征刻画突出本体事物特征，更浅显 桃人物一小：中比较重费的事迹 形象地加深对本体事物的理解，如本句把爱因斯 人 主体 进行描写 物 lody】 装尽可能详如，岗为这影哨人 坦比作新的艾萨克·牛顿，形象地描述出他的伟 们对他的禁体评价 介 大成就 钻尾 对人物客税泮价 (endiugl [微写作2]—英汉互译 包括人格、贡献以及闪光点 (1)Writing a book of poetry is like dropping a )》跟课文学亮点表达 rose petal down the Grand Canyon and waiting 。阅读文章第一自然段，习得以下素养 for the echo. ★学亮点表达 1.本段第二句使用了独立主格结构(the most (2)Reading is to the mind what food is to the body. well-known being the general theory of relativity (3) (正如达 and the famous formula E=mc),突出了爱因 尔文发现了自然法则)，Marx discovered the 斯坦对世界所作出的贡献。 law of development of human history 2.本段第三句使用了分号，表示递进。本句也可 (4)Appropriate praise to a child is what 以换为not only.but also…结构。 (阳光对于花朵). ·17 英语选择性必修第一册同步导学案 ★学写作手法 素材积累 第二至四段按照时间的顺序详细介绍了爱 因斯坦的生平、受教育情况、职业变化以及成就。 (一)输入好词 这也是写人物介绍类文章时常用的写作手法。 1.aggressive 好斗的 2.ambitious 有雄心的 。阅读文章第五、六自然段，习得以下素养 3.aspiring 有志气的，有抱负的 ★学亮点表达 4.attractive 有魅力的 1.第五段第一，二句采用了外貌描写，使用了a 5.brilliant 有才气的 slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man, 6.considerate 体贴的 a thick moustache,long white hair等词生动 7.depressed 意志消沉的 形象地描述了爱因斯坦的外表。 8.determined 坚决的 2.第五段第二句采用了比喻的修辞手法，形容他 9.diligent 勤奋的 的白发挺立的样子，使描写生动形象，引发读 10.easy-going 随和的 者联想，给读者以鲜明深刻的印象，并使语言 11.enthusiastic 热情的：热烈的 文采斐然，富有很强的感染力。 12.generous 大方的：宽宏大量的 [微写作3]—补全句子 13.learned 有学问的：博学的 14.outgoing 外向的 (1)她是个善良、可爱的小姑娘，有着圆圆的脸 15.reliable 可靠的 大大的眼睛、雪白的牙齿，还留着波浪般的 16.understanding 理解人的 长发。 17.strong-willed 意志坚强的 She is a kind and lovely girl, 18.warm-hearted 热心的 and long wavy hair. (二)输入佳句 (2)这个流浪汉，一个贫穷、无家可归的人，留着胡 1,介绍人物的出生时间及地点、出身、外貌特征 子，穿着大裤子、破鞋，戴着一顶小圆黑帽子。 和生平经历 The tramp,a poor,homeless man DAbraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. worn-out shoes and a small round black hat. 亚伯拉罕·林肯于1809年2月12日出生在 (3)她朴素的衣着、文雅的举止、甜美的笑容和温 背塔基州的一个穷苦家庭。 柔的声音打动了我们。 Glorfindel was tall and straight;his hair was of shining gold,his face fair and young Her simple dress, and fearless and full of joy:his eyes were bright and keen,and his voice like music;on ★学逻辑衔接 his brow sat wisdom,and in his hand was l.第五段运用Although,But,After等衔接词， strength.格洛芬德尔身材高大挺拔，他有一头 使句子之间衔接紧密，行文流畅。 灿烂的金发，脸庞年轻俊美，大胆无畏，洋溢着 2.全文最后一句话表达了人们对爱因斯坦的崇 欢欣。双眸锐利明亮，声音悦耳动听，眉宇间 敬与爱戴，呼应了第一段的内容。 存驻智慧，双手中蕴握力量。 ·18 UNIT I PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 3He had a gift for writing and made up his (1875一1907)是第一位领导反清武装起义的 mind to become a novelist when he grew up. 女性，她因此被捕并被杀害。 他有写作天赋，并决心长大后成为一名小说家。 3.介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价 He/She studied at a local high school and Her story tells us that we should value what graduated from Peking University.他/她曾就 we have and try our best to overcome any 读于当地的一所高中，毕业于北京大学。 difficulty in life.她的故事告诉我们，我们应该 After graduating from the University of 珍惜我们所拥有的，并尽我们最大的努力去克 Hong Kong,he obtained a doctor's degree in 服生活中的任何困难。 computer science.从香港大学毕业后，他获得 BSuch is Wang Xiaoping,a simple man who 了计算机科博士学位。 has made great achievements in the field of 2.介绍人物的事迹、成就或取得的成绩 medicine,.这就是王小平，一个在医学领域取得 6Sun Jiadong made great contributions toward 巨大成就的普通人。 developing Chinese satellite technology and She had become the strong woman,hard space exploration.孙家栋为发展中国卫星技 and rough,of a poor household. 术和太空探索作出了巨大贡献。 她变成了一个坚强的女人，过着艰难劳累的生 DDuring her career life,she obtained many 活，固守着这个贫穷的家庭。 championships,including four Oympic championships. It was Madame Forester,still young.still 在她的职业生涯中，她获得了许多冠军，包括 beautiful and still attractive,那是福斯特夫人， 四次奥运会冠军。 仍然年轻，仍然漂亮，仍然很有魅力。 BHe got an award in 1998 for having played an vital part in scientific research.由于在科学 佳作构建 研究中发挥了重要作用，他于1998年获奖。 【写作要求】 Madame Curie made great contributions to 请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学 the development of science,which paved the way for further research. 家钱学森。 居里夫人对科学的发展作出了巨大的贡献，这 1.1911年出生于上海，1935年赴美留学，成 为进一步的研究铺平了道路。 绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯·卡门(Von He was twice awarded the title of Combat Karman)的赞誉； Hero.In 1955,he volunteered to work in a remote 2.1938年在美国获航空、数学博士学位： county in Hubei province and has been helping 3.1950年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美 poor people there ever since.他两次被授予“战 国政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国： 斗英雄”称号。1955年，他自愿到湖北省的一 4.1958年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为 个偏远县城工作，并一直帮助那里的穷人。 新中国的航天事业作出巨大贡献，被誉为“新中 ①“Chinese Joan of Arc,”Qiu Jin(1875-1907), 国航天之父”： was the first woman to lead an armed uprising 5.2009年于北京去世。 against the Qing Dynasty,for which she was 参考词汇：航空航天科学技术aerospace science arrested and killed.“中国圣女贞德”秋瑾 and technology 19 英语选择性必修第一册同步导学案 【四步成文】 7.2009年他于北京去世。 第一步：审题谋篇 In 2009,he 明优体栽话陶记叙文：人物荷介 第三步：句式升级 8.用过去分词短语将句1和句6合并为一句 侖定时态人称 一眼过去时为主：第人称 官先：介绍钱学森的个人4平 布局文位架构 其次：介绍钱学森的触历、半迹利成就 成行：对钱学森的评价 第四步：连句成篇 1饯学森1911什山生丁上海，1935牛赴美留学， 成锁优异.受到当时的著名科学家码·卡 「J(下n Kurman)的赞誉：1938年在关回扶航 空、效学博1学位： 列出核心婆点 !2.1950牛热悉新中国成立的消息，克服了关 州攻府的百股阻，于195S年回到胡4： 3.1958外起长期扭仁航空航天研究作，为 新中回的航人半业作出尸人贡碱。被誉为 “纸中国航大之父”：29年丁北京去世： 第二步：由词扩句 1.他1911年出生于上海。 实战演练 >》 He in Shanghai. 假定英语课上，老师让同学们写一篇80词 2.1935年钱学森赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时 左右的英语短文来介绍曾经获两次诺贝尔奖的 的著名科学家冯·卡门的赞誉。 物理学家—居里夫人。内容包括： In 1935,Qian went to America for further 1.出生于波兰，1891年进人巴黎大学，学习 study and by Von 刻苦： Karman because of his excellent mark. 2.与皮埃尔·居里结婚后，开始与丈夫共同 3.1938年他在美国获航空、数学博士学位。 研究放射性物质(radioactive substance): In 1938,he in 3.1898年，他们成功发现了两种放射性物 aerospace science and mathematics in the US. 质一钋和镭(polonium and radium):她和丈夫 4.1950年他获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国 被授予诺贝尔物理学奖： 政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国。 4.因为巨大成就，居里夫人荣获诺贝尔化学奖： In 1950,he heard New China had been founded 5.世界上第一位两次获得诺贝尔奖的女科学家。 and his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. 5.1958年以来，他致力于航空航天科学技术，为 新中国的航天事业作出巨大贡献。 Since 1958 he aerospace science and technology and to the cause of China's aerospace. 6.他被誉为“新中国航天之父” 完成P6课时作业（三） He the“Father 完成Pios UNIT1单元回扣 提 of Chinese Aerospace” 完成Pis UNIT I单元验收评价 ·207.(1)To sum up/In conclusion/In short/In a word UNIT 2 LOOKING INTO THE FUTURE (2)a large sum of money Section N Writing—一写一篇人物简介 Section I Reading and Thinking 以读促写 课文研读·发展思维品质 [微写作] Step One I.CⅡ.Paras.1~5 ECABD 1.(1)Working tirelessly on that isolated/distant farm Step Two 1~4 ACDA Step Three I,1.定语：时间状语2，条件状语；并列：并列 (2)being her diligence/hard-working and determination II,1.will use 2.to live 3.integrated 4.making 5.so (3)These movies were not only making money 6.commands 7.what 8.be programmed 9.potentially 2.(1)写一本诗集就像把玫瑰花瓣扔进大峡谷，等待回音。 10.t0 (2)读书之于心如食物之于身。 语基输入·助力语言输出 (3)As Darwin discovered the law of nature 1.(1)to buy;of;being persuaded;to persuade:into (4)the sun is to a flower (2)advised:persuade 3.(1)with a round face,big eyes,white teeth (3)I didn't think it was possible to persuade him into accepting (2)with a moustache:wore large trousers my views/persuade him to accept my views (3)good manners.sweet smile and gentle voice struck us 2.(1)distant (2)distance 佳作构建 (3)In the distance,elephants were eating grass 第二步：由词扩句 (4)at a distance of (5)kept me at a distance (6)off (7)on 1.was born in 1911 2.was highly thought of (8)have switched from being dependent on our parents to 3.obtained his doctor's degree 4.succeeded in coming back to 3.(1)preference (2)quarrelling (3)Opreferred cycling:to staying 5.had been devoted to:contributed a lot 6.was regarded as 2preferred to cycle:rather than stay would rather cycle 4.(1)for an instant (2)Dthe instant she read the letter 7.passed away in Beijing instantly she read the letter 第三步：句式升级 on/upon reading the letter 8.Qian Xuesen,regarded as the "Father of Chinese Aerospace", 5.(1)of (2)in (3)to hand (4)(should)hand was born in 1911 in Shanghai. (5)because I have a good command/knowledge of English 第四步：连句成篇 (6)disobeying (7)obeys the traffic rules One possible version: 6.(1)to become (2)for (3)potentially Qian Xuesen.regarded as the "Father of Chinese Aerospace". (4)to achieve/realize/develop their greatest potential was born in 1911 in Shanghai.In 1935,Qian went to America 7.(1)to (2)irrelevant (3)relevantly for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman (4)Dare relevant/linked/related to/are connected/associated because of his good mark.In 1938,he obtained his doctor's with Chinese culture have relevance to Chinese culture degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.In 1950. 8.(1)set the factory on fire (2)make a fire (3)catch fire he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in coming 9,(1)可利用的(2)有空的(3)可获得的 back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government (4)available (5)Every doctor available tried to stop him.Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace 10.(1)In (2)getting (3)In no sense should you lose heart science and contributed a lot to the cause of China's aerospace (4)make sense of and in 2009.he passed away in Beijing.Because of the love for 11.(1)在…之前(2)(…之后)就会… his country and the great achievements,he had received the (3)(…之后)才…(4)before we know it respect and admiration from his people. (5)It wasn't long before Jane sensed that she got lost in the unfamiliar forest:It won't be long before my husband finds me 实战演练 One possible version: Section II Learning About Language Born in Poland,Madame Curie went to study in Paris 语法慧学·提升语言能力 University in 1891,where she worked very hard.After she got [自我感知] married to Pierre Curie.she began to do research into 1.①②③：将来进行2.④⑤：一般将来 radioactive substance with him.In 1898.they succeeded in 要义详析 discovering two kinds of radioactive substance-polonium and [即时训练] radium.Years later,she and her husband were awarded the 1.(1)will be having (2)will be making/will make Nobel Prize for Physics.It was because of her great achievement (3)be using (4)will be delivering his lecture that she received the Nobel Prize for Chemistry. 2.(1)will check (2)will be using (3)shall be working As the first female scientist to win the Nobel Prize twice in (4)will be wearing (5)will be showing the world,Madame Curie will always be remembered by people. 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