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专题15 书面表达精讲 专题一对比性观点看法类 专题二介绍说明类 专题二 解决方法类作文 专题一 对比性观点看法类 观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。 对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板 The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 . From my point of view, I think我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice. 例题 最近,你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like?”为主题的班会。请你综合以下同学的观点,并发表你自己的看法,写一篇短文,向学校校刊投稿。 要求:(1)80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 假如你班为了配合创建“美好锡东,诗意栖居”的号召,最近以“Life in the future: for better or worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。60%的同学对锡东新城未来50年表示乐观,40%的同学感到有些担心。请你根据下列表格中的内容要点提示,用英语写一篇短文。 60% 1.a better area 2.improve people􀆳s lives 3.a good public transport system 40% 1.more crowded 2.more environmental problems 3.less energy Your opinions 考生自拟(至少两点) 注意:1.词数90左右,短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇:乐观的optimistic;观点、看法opinion Life in the future:for better or worse? 60% of the students are optimistic about the next 50 years in Xidong New City. 专题二介绍说明类 （1） ___________(事物)is/lies （地理位置）. It has/ is __________ （特征）. There are many places of interest here, for example, __________（景点介绍）. There are also many __________（人们的活动、风俗等）. I hope/ think __________（看法和感受）. 　　走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。 注意:(1)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数; (2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯; (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Welcome to Lianyungang 　　I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang， Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. （2） The table below shows that__________（说明问题或现象）. __________（数据）percent __________（现象一）. __________（数据）percent（现象二）. __________（数据）percent__________（现象三）. In my opinion____________(自己的观点和感受). 青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我,某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题,对1,127名学生进行了问卷调查,下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生,请结合以上图表信息,以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题,用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1.简要说明图表内容; 2.从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 要求: 1.词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 专题二 解决方法类作文 In recent days, we have to face a problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________（说明A的现状）. Second,  ____________（举例进一步说明现状）.  Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,  ____________（解决方法一）. For another ____________（解决方法二）. Finally, ____________（解决方法三）.  Personally, I believe that____________（我的解决方法）.  Consequently,  I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________（带来的好处）. 例题1 　　青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 　　注意事项: (1)邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; (2)词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数; (3)邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Mr. Friend， I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. 　　　　　　　 I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 例题2 公众健康日(7月7日)旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。你班准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为 How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。 How to live a healthy and happy life 健康包括身体(physical)健康和心理(mental)健康。 身体健康 1.健康饮食;2.适当锻炼;3.充足睡眠。 心理健康 1.积极乐观;2.与人为善;3.……(至少一点) 希望 ……(至少一点) 注意事项:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 How to live a healthy and happy life Hi， my dear classmates， With the improvement of living conditions， we are paying more and more attention to our health， which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life? 　　That’s all. Thank you. 一 目前我国生态环境保护任务依然艰巨,生态环境部表示,2023年将积极推进美丽中国建设实践,扎实推动绿色低碳高质量发展,深入打好污染防治攻坚战,扎实推进蓝天保卫战、碧水保卫战、净土保卫战,加强固体废物和新污染物治理,深入推进“无废城市”高质量建设,切实维护生态环境安全,加快健全现代环境治理体系。假设你校的英语校报正在征集有关“环保周”的文章,请你根据以下提示写一篇关于环保的英语短文。 生态环境现状 河水变脏、天空变成灰色、一些地区没有干净的饮用水 环保措施 1.不往河里乱扔垃圾; 2.节约用水; 3.……(补充1—2点措施) 呼吁 携手共建美丽中国 　　要求: 1.内容完整,条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确; 2.不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名; 4.标点正确,卷面整洁。 参考词汇:垃圾rubbish　环保environmental protection As is known to all, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 二 　　假如你是李华，你将要给毕业班的同学做一个以“享受快乐生活”为主题的分享演讲，讲述在生活中你是如何享受快乐的，内容要点如下: 快乐的重要性 快乐让我们更健康，大脑更敏捷。 在哪些方面你能感受到快乐 1.友谊:我与朋友同喜同忧，和他们在一起很开心…… 2.爱好与学业:我喜欢……因为……，在爱好和学业之间能达到平衡; 3.家庭:与父母相处…… 总结 快乐无处不在，我们要学会去发现快乐并享受快乐生活。 注意事项: 1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范; 2.必须包含表格中所有要点，并适当发挥; 3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息; 4.词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Enjoy My Happy Life Good morning， boys and girls. Today I’ll give you a talk about my happy life. 三 　　ChatGPT的出现使人工智能(AI， artificial intelligence)一度成为热门话题，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。请以“The development of AI”为题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文: 1.告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展; 2.列举人工智能的发展带来的好处(至少两点)，并举例说明; 3.谈谈你对未来人工智能的发展的期待。 注意:1.文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息; 2.词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。 The development of AI The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI. 　　　　　　　　　  四 　　你校英文校刊就“过度养育”(Overparenting)这一现象开辟专栏,展开讨论。请以“Overparenting:Yes or No”为题写一篇短文,向该栏目投稿。 要求: 1.简述该现象; 2.陈述图表中不同观点及理由; 3.表述你的观点及两点理由(须与图中不同)。 注意: 1.请先填写表中空格; 2.须全面反映图表信息,但不能完全照抄; 3.文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名; 4.词数:100左右。 五 假如你班为了配合创建“美好锡东,诗意栖居”的号召,最近以“Life in the future: for better or worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。60%的同学对锡东新城未来50年表示乐观,40%的同学感到有些担心。请你根据下列表格中的内容要点提示,用英语写一篇短文。 60% 1.a better area 2.improve people’s lives 3.a good public transport system 40% 1.more crowded 2.more environmental problems 3.less energy Your opinions 考生自拟(至少两点) 注意:1.词数90左右,短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇:乐观的optimistic;观点、看法opinion Life in the future:for better or worse? 60% of the students are optimistic about the next 50 years in Xidong New City. 六 无论时代如何变化,我们对于美好生活的向往始终一致,而垃圾分类在各大城市的实施也是为了更好地保护环境,更好地建设我们的家园。作为学生,我们应该从小事做起,养成良好的习惯,为盐城创建全国文明城市出一份力。请以“Act to Build a Civilized City”为题目,写一份倡议书。 注意事项: 1.词数100左右; 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、人名、校名等信息。 Act to Build a Civilized City 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  ( 2 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 第 2 页 共 20 页 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题15 书面表达精讲 专题一对比性观点看法类 专题二介绍说明类 专题二 解决方法类作文 专题一 对比性观点看法类 观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。 对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板 The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 . From my point of view, I think我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice. 例题 最近,你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like?”为主题的班会。请你综合以下同学的观点,并发表你自己的看法,写一篇短文,向学校校刊投稿。 要求:(1)80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 假如你班为了配合创建“美好锡东,诗意栖居”的号召,最近以“Life in the future: for better or worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。60%的同学对锡东新城未来50年表示乐观,40%的同学感到有些担心。请你根据下列表格中的内容要点提示,用英语写一篇短文。 60% 1.a better area 2.improve people􀆳s lives 3.a good public transport system 40% 1.more crowded 2.more environmental problems 3.less energy Your opinions 考生自拟(至少两点) 注意:1.词数90左右,短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇:乐观的optimistic;观点、看法opinion Life in the future:for better or worse? 60% of the students are optimistic about the next 50 years in Xidong New City. 答案 写作提示 1.审题:要求以“Life in the future: for better or worse?”为题,结合提示内容完成作文,写作时主要以第三和第一人称行文,时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时。 2.确定要点: (1)60%的同学的观点:①更好的地方;②改善人们的生活;③好的公共交通服务系统。 (2)40%的同学的观点:①更加拥挤;②更多的环境问题;③能源减少。 (3)你自己的观点。 参考范文 Life in the future: for better or worse? 60% of the students are optimistic about the next 50 years in Xidong New City. They believe it will be a better area and people􀆳s lives will be greatly improved. With a better public transport system, it will be much easier for people to get around. However, the rest of the students are worried about the future of Xidong New City. They think the area will become more crowded. Therefore, there will even be more environmental problems such as air pollution and water pollution. What􀆳s worse, there will be less and less energy in this area.   In my opinion, with the development of technology, Xidong New City will become better and stronger. We will find ways to solve the problems and live a happier life in the future. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 be optimistic about 对……乐观;what􀆳s worse 更糟的是;in my opinion在我看来;with the development of随着……的发展;live a happier life过着更幸福的生活 2.出彩结构 With a better public transport system, it will be much easier for people to get around. (It will be+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.结构) 专题二介绍说明类 （1） ___________(事物)is/lies （地理位置）. It has/ is __________ （特征）. There are many places of interest here, for example, __________（景点介绍）. There are also many __________（人们的活动、风俗等）. I hope/ think __________（看法和感受）. 　　走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。 注意:(1)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数; (2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯; (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Welcome to Lianyungang 　　I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang， Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. 参考范文　 Welcome to Lianyungang I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang， Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.  Lianyungang lies in the north⁃east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain， the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer. Moreover， Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it. Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon. （2） The table below shows that__________（说明问题或现象）. __________（数据）percent __________（现象一）. __________（数据）percent（现象二）. __________（数据）percent__________（现象三）. In my opinion____________(自己的观点和感受). 青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我,某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题,对1,127名学生进行了问卷调查,下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生,请结合以上图表信息,以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题,用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1.简要说明图表内容; 2.从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 要求: 1.词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 参考范文　 A possible version: I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don't like to complain.  As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. 专题二 解决方法类作文 In recent days, we have to face a problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________（说明A的现状）. Second,  ____________（举例进一步说明现状）.  Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,  ____________（解决方法一）. For another ____________（解决方法二）. Finally, ____________（解决方法三）.  Personally, I believe that____________（我的解决方法）.  Consequently,  I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________（带来的好处）. 例题1 　　青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 　　注意事项: (1)邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; (2)词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数; (3)邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Mr. Friend， I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. 　　　　　　　 I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 参考范文　 Dear Mr. Friend，  I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. I feel quite stressed these days. The final exams are coming soon and I’m not sure if I can get good marks. Sometimes I even have difficulty falling asleep at night and I feel tired the next day. My parents keep encouraging me to work harder so that I can get into a good high school. But I think I’ve tried my best. They give me lots of extra homework to do every day and I doubt if it can do any help.  I don’t know what to do and who to talk to. Can you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.  Yours sincerely，  Li Hua  例题2 公众健康日(7月7日)旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。你班准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为 How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。 How to live a healthy and happy life 健康包括身体(physical)健康和心理(mental)健康。 身体健康 1.健康饮食;2.适当锻炼;3.充足睡眠。 心理健康 1.积极乐观;2.与人为善;3.……(至少一点) 希望 ……(至少一点) 注意事项:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 How to live a healthy and happy life Hi， my dear classmates， With the improvement of living conditions， we are paying more and more attention to our health， which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life? 　　That’s all. Thank you. 参考范文　 How to live a healthy and happy life Hi， my dear classmates，  With the improvement of living conditions， we are paying more and more attention to our health， which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?  Firstly， we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food， but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example， we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile， we also need enough sleep every day. Secondly， mental health is also very important. We should love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad， we can communicate with our parents， teachers and friends frankly. In a word， I hope everyone can be in good physical and mental health， and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day. That’s all. Thank you!  一 目前我国生态环境保护任务依然艰巨,生态环境部表示,2023年将积极推进美丽中国建设实践,扎实推动绿色低碳高质量发展,深入打好污染防治攻坚战,扎实推进蓝天保卫战、碧水保卫战、净土保卫战,加强固体废物和新污染物治理,深入推进“无废城市”高质量建设,切实维护生态环境安全,加快健全现代环境治理体系。假设你校的英语校报正在征集有关“环保周”的文章,请你根据以下提示写一篇关于环保的英语短文。 生态环境现状 河水变脏、天空变成灰色、一些地区没有干净的饮用水 环保措施 1.不往河里乱扔垃圾; 2.节约用水; 3.……(补充1—2点措施) 呼吁 携手共建美丽中国 　　要求: 1.内容完整,条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确; 2.不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名; 4.标点正确,卷面整洁。 参考词汇:垃圾rubbish　环保environmental protection As is known to all, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文　 As is known to all, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Now the river has become dirty, the sky has turned grey, and some areas do not have clean drinking water. So let's do something to protect the environment.   Don't throw rubbish into the river. At the same time, we also need to save water. It is necessary for us to go to school by bus or on foot, because it can help reduce air pollution. Besides, recycling is good for our planet because it changes waste into something that we can use again. It is everyone's responsibility to protect our environment. Let's build a beautiful China together. 二 　　假如你是李华，你将要给毕业班的同学做一个以“享受快乐生活”为主题的分享演讲，讲述在生活中你是如何享受快乐的，内容要点如下: 快乐的重要性 快乐让我们更健康，大脑更敏捷。 在哪些方面你能感受到快乐 1.友谊:我与朋友同喜同忧，和他们在一起很开心…… 2.爱好与学业:我喜欢……因为……，在爱好和学业之间能达到平衡; 3.家庭:与父母相处…… 总结 快乐无处不在，我们要学会去发现快乐并享受快乐生活。 注意事项: 1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范; 2.必须包含表格中所有要点，并适当发挥; 3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息; 4.词数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Enjoy My Happy Life Good morning， boys and girls. Today I’ll give you a talk about my happy life. 参考范文　 Enjoy My Happy Life Good morning， boys and girls. Today I’ll give you a talk about my happy life.  Happiness can not only make us healthier but also make us smarter. I can share my joy and sadness with my friends. They make my life colourful and powerful. I enjoy learning all the subjects because I believe I can realize my dream by working hard. Also， I can keep a balance between my hobbies and studies. To my joy， my parents and I are like friends. We get on well with each other. In a word， happiness is around us. We should learn to find it and enjoy it. Thank you! 三 　　ChatGPT的出现使人工智能(AI， artificial intelligence)一度成为热门话题，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。请以“The development of AI”为题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文: 1.告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展; 2.列举人工智能的发展带来的好处(至少两点)，并举例说明; 3.谈谈你对未来人工智能的发展的期待。 注意:1.文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息; 2.词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。 The development of AI The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI. 　　　　　　　　　  参考范文　 The development of AI The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI. There is no need to worry too much because AI will never completely take the place of humans. In fact， it has many advantages.  First， AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. Also， with the help of AI， people don’t have to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. It improves the accuracy of data and helps scientists to do research. I believe we will live a more and more convenient life with the development of AI. 四 　　你校英文校刊就“过度养育”(Overparenting)这一现象开辟专栏,展开讨论。请以“Overparenting:Yes or No”为题写一篇短文,向该栏目投稿。 要求: 1.简述该现象; 2.陈述图表中不同观点及理由; 3.表述你的观点及两点理由(须与图中不同)。 注意: 1.请先填写表中空格; 2.须全面反映图表信息,但不能完全照抄; 3.文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名; 4.词数:100左右。 答案 1.parents　2.kids/children 写作提示　 1.体裁:议论文; 2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称; 3.时态:以一般现在时为主; 4.要点: 1)人们对过度养育的观点及理由; 2)你对过度养育的观点及理由。 参考范文　 Overparenting:Yes or No Nowadays, overparenting is a hot topic. People have different opinions about it. Some parents think their kids are so busy that they needn􀆳t do chores. Others disagree. They think overparenting is harmful to kids􀆳 growth. Some kids who want to be independent think overparenting will make them lose opportunities to challenge themselves. But other kids hope that their parents can help them when meeting with difficulties. In my opinion, it􀆳s unnecessary to overparent. On the one hand, parents cannot be with us forever. On the other hand, it stops us from growing independently. So it􀆳s necessary for parents to keep the balance between parenting and overparenting. 精彩语句　 1.精美词汇 a hot topic热门话题;be harmful to对……有害;on the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面 2.出彩结构 Some kids who want to be independent think overparenting will make them lose opportunities to challenge themselves. (overparenting will...to challenge themselves为省略了that的宾语从句;动词不定式to challenge themselves作后置定语,修饰opportunities) 五 假如你班为了配合创建“美好锡东,诗意栖居”的号召,最近以“Life in the future: for better or worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。60%的同学对锡东新城未来50年表示乐观,40%的同学感到有些担心。请你根据下列表格中的内容要点提示,用英语写一篇短文。 60% 1.a better area 2.improve people’s lives 3.a good public transport system 40% 1.more crowded 2.more environmental problems 3.less energy Your opinions 考生自拟(至少两点) 注意:1.词数90左右,短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇:乐观的optimistic;观点、看法opinion Life in the future:for better or worse? 60% of the students are optimistic about the next 50 years in Xidong New City. 答案 写作提示 1.审题:要求以“Life in the future: for better or worse?”为题,结合提示内容完成作文,写作时主要以第三和第一人称行文,时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时。 2.确定要点: (1)60%的同学的观点:①更好的地方;②改善人们的生活;③好的公共交通服务系统。 (2)40%的同学的观点:①更加拥挤;②更多的环境问题;③能源减少。 (3)你自己的观点。 参考范文 Life in the future: for better or worse? 60% of the students are optimistic about the next 50 years in Xidong New City. They believe it will be a better area and people􀆳s lives will be greatly improved. With a better public transport system, it will be much easier for people to get around. However, the rest of the students are worried about the future of Xidong New City. They think the area will become more crowded. Therefore, there will even be more environmental problems such as air pollution and water pollution. What’s worse, there will be less and less energy in this area.   In my opinion, with the development of technology, Xidong New City will become better and stronger. We will find ways to solve the problems and live a happier life in the future. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 be optimistic about 对……乐观;what􀆳s worse 更糟的是;in my opinion在我看来;with the development of随着……的发展;live a happier life过着更幸福的生活 2.出彩结构 With a better public transport system, it will be much easier for people to get around. (It will be+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.结构) 六 无论时代如何变化,我们对于美好生活的向往始终一致,而垃圾分类在各大城市的实施也是为了更好地保护环境,更好地建设我们的家园。作为学生,我们应该从小事做起,养成良好的习惯,为盐城创建全国文明城市出一份力。请以“Act to Build a Civilized City”为题目,写一份倡议书。 注意事项: 1.词数100左右; 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、人名、校名等信息。 Act to Build a Civilized City 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  答案 写作提示 1.审题: 这是一份倡议书。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。主体时态为一般现在时。 2.确定要点: (1)倡议目的(创建全国文明城市); (2)具体建议: ①应该做的事情(垃圾分类,保护花草,遵守公共规则……自拟至少一点); ②不应该做的事情(不要乱扔垃圾,不要使用一次性塑料购物袋,不讲脏话……自拟至少一点)。 (3)我的希望(自拟至少一点)。 参考范文 Act to Build a Civilized City In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to take action every day in all ways. First of all, it􀆳s suggested that we sort garbage carefully and throw it into the right bin. Secondly, we should protect grass and flowers in public areas instead of destroying them. Thirdly, it􀆳s a good choice to follow the public rules when we are in public places. Finally, as a student, we should study hard and obey the school rules. There are some things that we shouldn􀆳t do. First, we shouldn􀆳t litter everywhere. Next, we shouldn􀆳t use disposable plastic shopping bags while shopping.Then, we shouldn􀆳t say dirty words. Last but not least, the resources are getting fewer and fewer, so we shouldn􀆳t waste them. Actions speak louder than words. If everyone behaves well, our city will become more beautiful and more attractive. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 take action采取行动;first of all首先;instead of而不是 2.出彩结构 First of all, it’s suggested that we sort garbage carefully and throw it into the right bin.(that引导主语从句,it是形式主语) ( 2 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 第 2 页 共 20 页 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$