UNIT 3 读后续写微讲堂(学生用书)-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选必修第一册(人教 版2019)

UNIT 3 SPORTS AND FITNESS 读后续写微讲堂 答案精解P4s妇 怎么读之读细节 细节描写是指对人物某些细小的言行举止 "I was just thinking about playing in a 或细微事物的描写，细致的自然环境和社会环境 brand new-soccer field！”Maria answered.. 描写也可视为细节描写。细节描写是记叙文描 Her father smiled and said,"Tomorrow,a 写中的核心部分，有了细节描写，文章就有了活 Town Council meeting is to be held to discuss 力。细节描写可以分为与人物相关的细节描写 about the use of that vacant(空着的)lot next to 以及与场景，环境有关的细节描写。人物细节描 the pet store,Home for Pets.Why not take this 写在记叙文中占有较大的比重，所以此处我们着 opportunity to convince them we need a better 重分析人物细节描写。 field?" 那么我们如何通过分析人物的细节描写“读 The next day,with the company of her 懂”人物，揭示主题呢？我们可以关注人物所看、 father,Maria and her teammates went to the 所说、所做、所闻、所想与所感。人物的语言能表 meeting hall.On their arrival,they saw Councilwoman 现人物的出身，教养、经历和性格，让人读了如闻 Jill and some citizens already there.They took 其声，如见其人。人物的所作所为是其思想和性 their seats.After Jill announced the start of the 格的表现。人物的内心世界是很丰富的，心理描 discussion,Maria stood up and spoke first."Up 写能充分揭示出人物内心的喜、怒、哀、乐、爱慕、 till now there is no soccer field in our community, 思念、苦闷、痛苦、怨恨、惊恐、嫉妒等情感变化。 which certainly affects our physical health.Our 人物思想感情的变化又推动了情节的发展。当 team currently have to practice in a tiny school 读者抓住人物情感变化主线时，往往就理清了文 yard,and only when it's not already booked. 章的情节，即可预测并续写故事。 Mrs Lorries,owner of the pet store,commented, 【典例】根据文中人物的动作语言等，分析人物的 "I couldn't agree more.Kids do need such a 性格特征。 field.The Rockers applauded excitedly and the Maria was practicing with her soccer mates other citizens all agreed it would be a way out. in a tiny school yard.They were all from River "A soccer field would be a good use for that Edge Rockers,a soccer team of their community. lot with overgrown weeds and some large rocks, Suddenly,the ball flew into a deep hole at the but to build such one would need a small sum of edge of the yard.It was the third time that they money and maybe you even need to do all the had lost their ball this month.Without the ball. work on your own.Councilwoman Jill smiled, Maria had to wave goodbye to her mates and “Can you manage it?” went home,depressed."If only there were a Thinking for a while,Maria nodded with a regulation soccer field！”she thought. determined look on her face,"The Rockers can That evening,seeing her in low spirits.her do it!We will turn it into a soccer field."The father asked,“What was the matter,dear?” teammates all cheered. ·87· 英语必修第一册同步导学案 结构 情节 性格和情感 (Structure) (Plot) (Characters and Feelings) Para.1: If only there were a regulation soccer field! 开端 Maria and her soccer mates wanted 用 句表示玛利亚对现在球场的 (Beginning) 和对新球场的 Para.2~7: ·…seeing her low spirits Maria's father suggested 说明玛利亚对旧球场的 .Her father smiled and said... ·The next day, 说明爸爸对玛利亚的 Jill,Mrs Lorries. ·I couldn't agree more. and other citizens 此处应用了“ ”表示最高级含义，表明洛瑞 发展 on the meeting. 女士对玛利亚的 (Rising Action) But to build a regulation soccer field .Kids do need such a field. would need and 此处应用了“do十动词原形”表示对 的强 even need 调，表明洛瑞女士对玛利亚的 文章最大的冲突：宠物店旁边的空地可 ·The Rockers applauded excitedly,表明了队员们的 以用作新球场，但是必须由马利亚和她 之情。 的队员们自己筹钱并且自己动手改造。 ·Jill smiled…表明了吉尔对玛丽亚的 Para.8: Maria and her teammates Maria nodded with a determined look on her face... accept the 高潮 challenge to transform 表明了玛利亚 的心情。 into a regulation soccer The teammates all cheered. (Climax) field. 表明玛利亚的队友们同样 高潮：玛利亚和队员们 接 的心情。 受挑战。 尾声 Maria and her teammates managed to enough money and tried their (Falling Action) best to all the difficulties. 做出合理预测：虽然很 ,但是他 They transforming the lot 们 付出努力和劳动，充满了 结局 with weeds and some (Ending) into a regulation soccer ficld. 拓展训练]请根据以上文本绘制“情节山” Clima sing ing Act Beginning Eading ·884.(should)have a balanced diet:go on a diet 读后续写微讲堂 5.(1)to (2)between (3)makes no difference to your development 【典例】 (4)A little kindness makes a big difference. a regulation soccer field:感叹：不满/失望；渴望；using the 6.(1)Once he is determined to do vacant lot next to the pet store:Councilwoman:owner of the pet (2)Once you make a promise (3)are (4)focusing store:agreed:a small sum of money:to do all the work by Maria (5)Owould rather lose the game than and her teammates;不满/失望：支持和疼爱：否定词+比较级； would lose the game rather than 支持：谓语动词：支持：兴奋：支持：were willing to:the vacant preferred to lose the game rather than lot:乐意：下定决心；坚定；下定决心：坚定：raise;overcome: 7.(1)剪下(2)停止做(3)删掉(4)cut down(5)cut off succeeded in;overgrown:large rocks;辛苦和疲意：乐意：欢乐 (6)cut in (7)cut up (8)cut out unimportant details [拓展训练] 8.(1)By (2)compared (3)to DMaria and her soccer mates wanted a regulation soccer field. (4)compare yourself to/with others 2But to build a regulation soceer field would need a small sum of 9.(1)stressed (2)stressful (3)stresses the importance of money and even need to do all the work by Maria and her teammates. 以读促写·体现学以致用 Maria and her teammates were willing to accept the challenge. [微写作] Maria and her teammates managed to raise enough money and 1.(1)My classmate is always ready to help others. tried their best to overcome all the difficulties. (2)Jack worries about the result of every examination. 5They succeeded in transforming the lot with overgrown weeds (3)They continued to plant trees even though they were tired. and some large rocks into a regulation soccer field. (4)He often helps those who are in need (of help). 2.(1)rather than UNIT 4 NATURAL DISASTERS (2)Instead of sitting in the classroom (3)made a great difference Section I Listening and Speaking (4)that our sehool will open the gym to us students 听说突破·技法指导训练 (5)that you will join in ,1.It lasted only five seconds. (6)compared jogging with running 2.She wanted to move far away. 佳作构建 听力原文： 第二步：由词扩句 Michelle felt the earthquake.It lasted for only five seconds. 1.I used to be very slim and often fell ill The whole house shook.She heard noise.The TV went off.The 2.recommended me to join a health/fitness club lights went off.She was scared.She had never felt an 3.I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day earthquake.It was very strong.It was as if a giant hand had 4.I have a more balanced diet shaken her house.The lights came back on.Michelle turned the 5.made a great difference TV on.The TV had no news about the earthquake.She turned 6.rather than go to hospital on the radio.The radio said it was a 4.7 earthquake.But there 7.not only healthier but also I have become more confident was no damage.No one was hurt.Everyone was okay.No houses 第三步：句式升级 had damage.Everything was okay.But Michelle was still scared. 1.I used to be very slim and often fell ill,which made me annoyed. She wanted to move far away.She did not like earthquakes. 2.One of my friends recommended that I should join a health/ They were so scary. fitness club. 二、I.1~3CCA 3.Not only am I healthier but also I have become more confident. 听力原文： 第四步：连句成篇 Text 1 One possible version: M:Jane,I've heard you plan to buy a new smartphone. I am Linda.I used to be very slim and often fell ill,which W:Yes,but I haven't saved enough.The phone costs 680 made me annoyed. dollars.but I have 550.My sister said she would help me. One of my friends recommended that I should join a health/ Text 2 fitness club.In the club,I kept taking a proper amount of M:Could you tell me how many people will be present at the party? exercise every day.In addition,compared with the past,I have a W:Besides you and me.there are eight other people coming to more balanced diet.My sweat made a great difference.Now I the party. would go to the gym regularly rather than go to hospital.By Text 3 working out regularly,I built up strength greatly. W:Good morning.Would you like some organic carrots? Not only am I healthier but also I have become more M:How much do they cost? confident. W:7 dollars per kilogram. 实战演练 M:Hmm...That's a little expensive. ①~⑤DBECA II.1~4 CBCB ·215·