UNIT 1 读后续写微讲堂(学生用书)-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语必修第一册(人教版2019)

英语 必修 第一册 同步导学案 7.你可以和你的新同学建立亲密的关系。 2.加强锻炼的好处和建议; You can 3.表示祝愿。 8.我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 第三步:词汇/句式升级 根据提示完成书信,选择恰当的句子并认真 1.把第二步中的句4合并升级为and引导的并 抄写在文中空白处。 列简单句 Dear Mike. I'm sorry to hear that you have been ill these days and ① You are always saying that you are so busy 2.把第二步中的句6、7合并升级为sothat引导 studying that you can't spare any time for 的目的状语从句 exercise.② .In my opinion, it will be beneficial to your health ③ . which can not only 3.升级第二步中的句8中的词汇help improve your physical health and immune system but also refresh your mind. ④ 第四步:连句成篇 I hope you can form the habit of taking exercise every day after you recover and Yours. Li Hua A. wish you good health B. As a result, your efficiency can be greatly raised 实战演练 C. I'm really concerned about your health D. Actually, lack of exercise is harmful to your health 假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike总说学 E. if you take exercise regularly 习太忙而没有时间锻炼身体。最近天气变化无 常,他生病了,请你给他写一封电子邮件,对他 完成P课时作业(六) 完成P.UNIT1 单元回扣 表示关心并建议他加强锻炼。要点如下: 1.对朋友表示关心; 完成P UNIT1 单元验收评价 读后续写微讲堂 答案精解P_ 怎么读之读要素 上一讲中提到过,读后续写一般都是以记叙文 想情感。记叙文常见的表达方式有叙述、描写 为主。因此,本书的读后续写主要从记叙文展开。 抒情、议论和说明。其中,叙述和描写是记叙文 什么是记叙文呢?记叙文是以记人、叙事。 最常见的表达方式。 写景、状物为主,以写人物的经历和事物发展变 记叙文有六要素,即5W和1H--“who. 化为主要内容的一种文体形式。它的特点是通 what,where,when,why,how”。因此,我们往 过生动形象的事件来反映生活并表达作者的思 往可以有以下设问: ·42. UNIT 1 TEENAGE LIFE Who is it about? pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff What happens? started frying the bread. The pan was too hot Where does it happen? and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna When does it happen? threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the Why does it happen? other slice of bread. This time, she turned down How does it happen? the fire so it cooked nicely. 有时候一个文本并不具备所有的要素,可能只 Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the 会涉及其中的三到四个,我们可以根据具体文本寻 pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute. 读具体要素,只要把这儿个基本要素弄清楚了,文 the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. 章的主要内容也就清晰地展现在我们面前了 Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm 【典例】请读以下文本段落,找出六要素。 and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was Ips可以采用文中做标记或者文边做简要笔记 a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they 的方式列举要素。 could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother in cold water. Then she caught the smell of would be when they brought her breakfast in burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken had turned black as well. porridge. They had watched their mother in the 注意:续写词数应为150左右。 kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff As the twins looked around them in knew exactly what to do disappointment, their father appeared. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a. m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen, They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and left it to boil while they made the French toast. woke their mother up. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying 六要素 When (1) S特别注意具体的时间以及表示时间的从句或短语。按照文章发展 顺序列举时间,有助于梳理文章线索和情节发展。 Where (2) Tips 文本中可能会出现多个地点。但是随着阅读的进行,要选定最核心的地点。 (3)The twins- and s 有些记叙文本中可能会出现多个人物,但是文章的核心人物是有限 Who 的,所以要确定核心人物。 .43. 英语 必修 第一册 同步导学案 (续表) 六要素 for their (4)The twins cooked as a Mother's Day surprise. Ips本文有标题, but an accident happened-Jeff's touched the hot burner: The pan was What 要利用好标题信息。 and the piece of bread in the pan had :Steam shot out of 因为标题往往是文 the pot and the lid :The porridge boiled over and the fire. 章的中心。 (5)可从原文和标题做出推测:Why did the twins want to cook breakfast? Why The twins wanted to give (6)找出原文句子:How did the twins cook the breakfast? The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen, They decided to 关注文章的 first. They 冲突。在顺利的情 and left it to boil while they .leff How into a plate and added in some 况下,出现的意外 就是文章的最大冲 .Jenna found the and put two slices into the 突。续写应该围绕 egg mixture. Next. Jeff to heat up the frying 冲突的解决展开。 pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. [即时训练]找出文中六要素 When the day finally came for his return from John Blanchard stood up, straightened his Europe, they scheduled their first meeting army uniform(制服),and studied the crowd 7:00 p. m. at the Grand Central Station in New making their way through the station. He looked York."You'll recognize me,"she wrote,"by the for the girl whose heart he knew, but whose face red rose.” he didn't, the girl with a rose. “I will wear my dress.”So at 7:oo he was His interest in her began thirteen months in the station looking for a girl whose heart he ago in a library. Taking a book off the shelf, he loved, but whose face he'd never seen before. found himself fascinated, not with the words of A young lady was coming toward him. Her the book, but with the notes penciled in the figure was long and slim; her blonde hair lay margin(页边的空白).The soft handwriting showeda back from her ears: her eyes were blue as thoughtful soul and brilliant mind. In front of the flowers;her lips and chin had a gentle firmness. book, he discovered the owner's name, Miss and in her pale green suit she was like Hollis Maynell. With time and effort he found springtime coming alive. He went toward her her address. She lived in New York City. He entirely forgetting to notice that she was not wrote her a letter introducing himself and inviting her to correspond(通信). The next day wearing a rose. As he moved, a middle-aged he was shipped overseas for millitary service. woman whispered,"Going my way, Sir?" When: During the next year and one month, the Where: two began to know each other by mail. Each Who: letter was a seed falling on both hearts. A romance What: was budding. Blanchard asked for a photograph. but she refused. She felt that if he really cared. How: why:. it wouldn't matter what she looked like.实战演练 W:First,I visited some of my old relatives in the small villages. ①~⑤CDEBA and we exchanged gifts.Then I spent several days in the city with my friends.The last few days I returned home to stay 读后续写微讲堂 with my mum and dad. (1)Mother's Day M:Sounds like fun. (2)in the kitchen II.1~4 BACB (3)Jenna:Jeff:their father;their mother 听力原文： (4)breakfast:mother:hand:too hot:turned black:started to W:Good morning.everyone.I'm so glad I'm invited here to give shake:put out a speech today.Now I'll tell you how to protect the environment. (5)their mother a Mother's Day surprise Eat less meat and dairy.Meat and dairy need a lot of (6)boil the porridge:put some rice into a pot of water:made the energy to produce.We can protect the environment more if French toast:broke two eggs:milk:bread:turned on the second we eat vegetables.If you really can't stop eating meat,then stove burner try to eat meat at most once a week. [即时训练] Don't drink coffee from K-cups.K-cups are usually When:7:00 p.m.,after his return from Europe thrown away once you use them for just one time.It greatly Where;at the station harms the environment.If you really love drinking coffee, Who:John Blanchard and Miss Hollis Maynell prepare a cup for it. What:John planned to meet his dream girl at the station. Buy local food.Food from somewhere far away needs a How:They planned to recognize each other by a red rose. lot of energy to be transported.It harms the environment as Why:John looked for the girl whose heart he knew,but whose the food is usually taken to you by trucks,ships or planes. face he didn't. You can visit farmers'markets to find local vegetables and fruits. Don't waste food.Plan your meals so that you don't UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUND cook more than you will eat.Store what you haven't finished and use them up at your next meal. Section I Listening and Speaking 三、（一）l.camera2.isa3.destination4,waterfall5.trip 听说突破·技法指导训练 6.journey 7.outing 8.luggage 9.sightseeing 10.guide 一，1~2BC 11.passport 12.speed 13.recommend 14.subway 15.highway 听力原文： 听力原文： M:Good morning.madam.I am your guide for this trip. 1.camera 2.visa 3.destination 4.waterfall 5.trip W:How lovely!Could you tell me about the Grand Hotel that 6.journey 7.outing 8.luggage 9.sightseeing 10.guide I'm going to stay at? 11.passport 12.speed 13.recommend 14.subway M:Yes.of course.The Grand Hotel opened in 1990.And it sits 15.highway on the seaside along the South Coast Highway.It is the most ()1.a place of interest 2.go on a trip 3.see off beautiful hotel here. 4,put sb up 5.on holiday 6.have a good trip W:That sounds great. 7.get close to nature 8.show sb around M:And there are some restaurants outside.So,at dinner time 9.pay a visit to 10.book a hotel room you'd have a lot of choices. 听力原文： W:That's really nice.I'd like to have some local foods while 1.a place of interest 2.go on a trip 3.see off 4.put sb up travelling.What about the scenery around it? 5.on holiday 6.have a good trip 7.get close to nature M:The hotel has the best views of the Pacifie Ocean. 8.show sb around 9.pay a visit to 10.book a hotel room W:Oh.I think I will love this hotel. ()1.checked out 2.took the tourist bus 二、I.1~3CBA 3.amazing view 4.enjoyed beautiful natural scenery 听力原文： 5.as well 6.know more details M:How was your trip back to your hometown? 听力原文： W:Great,except for the flights.On the way there,I stopped in Early in the morning,we 1.checked out of the hotel and Munich and had to wait six hours for my flight.On the way left for Mount Emei.To save time,we 2.took the tourist bus back I stopped in Zurich and waited for hours. and cable cars to get to the higher sites.Standing at the top of M:That doesn't make sense.It shouldn't take that long to get to the mountain,we got an 3.amazing view.We visited temples, Lisbon from Beijing. fed monkeys,watched rare plants and 4.enjoyed beautiful W:You're right,but that is the cheapest flight I could get.I natural scenery.I hope in the future we can see the mountain bought these tickets three months ago. again and visit the famous stone statue-Leshan Giant Buddha M:That's too early!My brother says you should always buy 5.as well.Travelling in Chengdu and Mount Emei is really your ticket 40 to 50 days before your flight leaves. pleasant.If you want to 6.know more details.just travel there W:That might work normally,but not around our National in person. Day.If you book too late,your ticket will be much more 语基输入·助力语言输出 expensive. 1.(1)申请(2)应用：运用(3)涂：敷(4)to join M:So what did you do while you were there? (5)improving (6)application 211·