UNIT 5 Section Ⅳ（课件PPT)- 【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

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(2)(2022·全国乙书面表达)It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.___________, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. (3)(2020·新高考Ⅰ读后续写)He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. __________, he asked Mrs.Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. (4)(2020·全国Ⅱ书面表达)We have a lot of respectable people around us.They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders.__________ me, my father is the person I respect most. ★学用各种表达方式陈述自己的观点 课文中使用了多种表达方式来陈述自己的观点，例如：believe, argue, hold, claim, maintain, be in favour of, be opposed to, object to, I am fully convinced that…， What I firmly believe in is that…等。多种表达方式的使用完美避开了叙述的千篇一律，使得表达丰富多彩，论证有力。 [微写作2]——补全句子 (1)(2024·1月浙江写作)我赞成“起立伸展”运动是一种快速而简单的可以让你的血液流动并使身心恢复活力的方法。 ____________________ “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise is a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. (2)(2023·新高考Ⅱ写作)我完全相信，如果与他们相处或沟通困难的人配对，学生可能会感到不舒服或不积极。 ___________________ students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with. (3)(2022·全国乙书面表达)毫无疑问，学生迫切需要提高自律性。 __________________________ it's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline. (4)(2022·新高考Ⅰ读后续写)我争辩说，除了你自己，没有人能改变你的想法。 ________________ no one can change your mind, except yourself. (一)输入好词 1．heat debate/discussion about/on　关于……的热烈讨论 2．arouse wide public concern/draw public attention 引起了广泛的公众关注 3．It is commonly believed/recognized that… 人们普遍认为…… 4．a controversial issue 有争议性的问题 5．argument on both sides 双方的论点 6．a totally different argument 完全不同的观点 7．every coin has two sides 事物都有两面性 8．cannot bear closer analysis/cannot hold water 经不起推敲 9．be listed as follows 列举如下 10．all things considered 全面考虑 11．people/those in favour of the former/latter opinion 支持前/后种观点的人 12．Some people…while others… 一些人……而另外一些人…… 13．take many factors into account/consideration 考虑到诸多因素 14．from another perspective 从另一个角度 15．the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages 利远远大于弊 (二)输入好句 1．提出论点，引入话题 ①Recently, firecrackers have been a hotly debated topic in China.Some people claim that firecrackers should not be banned.Others, on the contrary, hold the opposite opinion. 最近，鞭炮在中国一直是一个热门话题。一些人声称不应该禁止燃放鞭炮。相反，其他人则持相反意见。 ②For many of us, our closest encounter with wild animals is at a zoo.These places allow us to observe the behaviors and characteristics of amazing creatures.It's an enjoyable and educational experience for us, but is it the best environment for the animals？对我们许多人来说，与野生动物最亲密的接触是在动物园。这些地方让我们可以观察到神奇生物的行为和特征。对我们来说，这是一次愉快的教育体验，但对动物来说这是最好的环境吗？ ③Recently our class has had a debate about whether organic farming is good for us.Different students hold different opinions. 最近我们班就有机耕作是否对我们有益展开了一场辩论。不同的学生有不同的看法。 ④In spite of this, advantages are more than disadvantages. 尽管如此，优势大于劣势。 ⑤Will distance learning replace traditional learning? 远程学习会取代传统学习吗？ ⑥Is listening to a book better than reading it？听书比看书更好吗？ ⑦There had been much debate on the issue of easing the burden of excessive homework and off-campus tutoring for students. 人们对“双减”问题议论纷纷。 2．列举正反方观点及其理由 ⑧Admittedly, there is no denying that keeping pets has negative sides.For example, keeping pets is dangerous.诚然，不可否认，养宠物有消极的一面。例如，养宠物是危险的。 ⑨However, its benefits are far more obvious than its downsides.To begin with, there is no doubt that keeping pets can make life more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.然而，它的好处远比缺点更明显。首先，毫无疑问，养宠物可以使成人和儿童的生活更加丰富多彩和有趣。 ⑩Furthermore, it is obvious that it is beneficial to our environment.With online shopping, citizens do not need to go to the malls to buy goods.Thus, it can reduce the use of private cars and reduce carbon emissions.此外，很明显，它对我们的环境有益。通过网上购物，市民不需要去购物中心购买商品。因此，它可以减少私家车的使用，减少碳排放。 ⑪The advertisements on TV are not only about products but also about safety.Some of the advertisements play an educational role.For example, advertisements about the introduction of Internet fraud can help raise the general public's awareness of safety. 电视上的广告不仅关乎产品，也关乎安全。有些广告起到了教育作用。例如，介绍网络诈骗可以帮助提高公众的安全意识。 3．表明自己的观点 ⑫All in all, it seems that there are advantages to both physical books and audiobooks.As far as I am concerned, physical books can help to learn information better. 总而言之，实体书和有声书似乎都有好处。就我而言，读纸质书可以更好地记住信息。 ⑬From what has been mentioned above, we may draw the conclusion that keeping pets can bring some problems, but they cannot undermine the role of pets in our life.从上面提到的内容中，我们可以得出结论，养宠物会带来一些问题，但它们不会削弱宠物在我们生活中的作用。 ⑭From my point of view, micro-blog is a good platform for people to show their personal experiences and communicate with others.在我看来，微博是人们展示个人经历和与他人交流的好平台。 ⑮In my view, environmental protection and economic development can coexist in parallel and can stay in harmony. 在我看来，环境保护和经济发展可以并行共存，并且可以保持和谐。 【写作要求】 假如你是李华，你班就化学耕作和有机耕作进行了讨论，请你写一篇文章阐述一下你的观点。内容如下： 1．有机农产品更健康，让人放心； 2．有机农耕对环境不造成破坏； 3．有机农耕让农民增加收入。 注意：词数80左右。 参考词汇：喷洒化学农药spray chemical pesticides 【四步成文】 第一步：审题谋篇 第二步：由词扩句 1．最近我们班就有机耕作是否比化学耕作更可取展开了一场辩论。我赞成有机耕作，原因如下。 Recently our class ______________________________ organic farming is preferable to chemical farming. _________ __________ the organic farming.Here are some reasons. 2．在有机耕作中，农民被禁止在植物上喷洒化学农药。 Farmers _______________________________________ on the plants in organic farming. 3．农民利用天然的动物肥料。这将有利于改善土壤条件。 Farmers __________________________________.It will ________________________________________________. 4．有机耕作可以增加农民的收入。 Organic farming can ____________________________. 5．随着越来越多的人关心自己的健康，他们倾向于购买有机水果和蔬菜。 ___________________________________________, they tend to buy organic fruits and vegetables. 6．我希望将来越来越多的农民转向有机耕作。 I hope more and more farmers _____________________ _______________________. 第三步：句式升级 7．将句3合并升级为定语从句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．将句5升级为 with复合结构 ________________________________________________________________________________________________ Farmers use natural waste from animals, which will be good for improving the conditions of the soil.　 With more and more people caring about their health, they tend to buy organic fruits and vegetables. 第四步：连句成篇 One possible version： Recently our class has had a debate about whether organic farming is preferable to chemical farming.I'm in favour of the organic farming.Here are some reasons. Firstly, farmers are forbidden to spray chemical pesticides on the plants in organic farming. Secondly, farmers use natural waste from animals, which will be good for improving the conditions of the soil. Thirdly, organic farming can increase the farmers' income. With more and more people caring about their health, they tend to buy organic fruits and vegetables. I hope more and more farmers will turn to organic farming in the future. 除夕之际，全国多地禁止燃放烟花爆竹。虽然有明文规定，但除夕之夜爆竹烟花燃放依旧如故。对于该不该禁止燃放烟花爆竹，民众主要存在两种看法。请以“Fireworks—to be forbidden or not”为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的观点。 注意：词数80左右。 One possible version： Fireworks—to be forbidden or not When the Spring Festival of 2024 was around the corner, bans on fireworks frequently came out.There has long been public argument about fireworks in China. Some people claim that fireworks should not be banned.Others, on the contrary, hold the opposite opinion.As far as I'm concerned, I am in favor of the former as long as we use them properly. There is no denying that fireworks have positive sides. For example, it is an ancient Chinese custom, which makes festivals and holidays more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children. However, their downsides are far more obvious than their benefits.To begin with, lighting fireworks is dangerous. Furthermore, they are harmful to our environment and health since they can lead to air pollution. Personally speaking, I think it a good idea to ban fireworks for the sake of safety.Anyway, we have many other ways of celebrating the New Year such as having parties. $$