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UNIT 2
TRAVELLING AROUND
读后续写微讲堂
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
1~2
Mr Taylor went hiking with his two sons, Harry
and Joel.
3~7
argued for the first three miles
of their hiking trip
一直在吵架
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8~10
slipped backward and down muddy bank,
falling into the river
落水了
只受了轻伤
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took care of
quarrelling
cooperated
the hiking
the hiking
successfully
英语 必修 第一册
英语 必修 第一册
制 作 者:状元桥
适用对象:高中学生
制作软件:Powerpoint2010、
Photoshop cs3
运行环境:WindowsXP以上操作系统
怎么读之读情节
情节广泛存在于叙事性文学作品中,旨在表现人物之间相互关系以及一系列生活事件的发展过程,如联系、矛盾、同情、反感等的主要脉络。它由一系列展示人物性格和表现人物与人物、人物与环境之间相互关系的具体事件构成。一般包括:
一般情况下,在读后续写提供的语篇中,已经出现了三部分:开端、发展和高潮。需要续写的两段分别对应尾声和结局。
【提示】 一般情况下,可以采用绘制情节山(plot mountain)的方式整理文章脉络,阐释文章的情节发展,为下一步的续写做好准备。如下图:
【典例】 请在通读文章后,完成表格填写。
Mr Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicine, a compass, and a map wrapped in plastic…Bingo! He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.
Mr Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel.Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term. “It will be an unforgettable experience, definitely,” he whispered to himself unconsciously a smile spreading over his face.
Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip.Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes.Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray(喷雾防虫剂).Harry told Joel he smelled terrible.Joel called Harry a coward(懦夫).
“Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together?” their father said. “You're missing all of the beautiful scenery!”
It was true.Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip.They hadn't looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead.Worst of all, they hadn't paid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continued their argument.
“Joel threw a stick at me!” Harry screamed. “That's not true!” Joel shouted back.
Mr Taylor could no longer contain his anger. “And both of you need to stop arguing!” he erupted.As he turned to face them, his left foot caught on a root.He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that ran alongside the path.
Harry and Joel raced to their father's assistance.They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet backpack up onto land.
Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured.
1.情节分析
开端
(Beginning)
Paragraphs _______:
__________________________________________________
发展
(Rising Action)
Paragraphs _______:
Harry and Joel ___________________________
______________________________.
文章最大的冲突:哈利和乔尔_____________。
高潮
(Climax)
Paragraphs ________:
•Mr Taylor could no longer contain his anger.
•He _____________________________________
___________________ that ran alongside the path.
高潮:泰勒先生_______。幸运的是,虽然全身湿透了,泰勒先生_______________。
尾声
(Falling Action)
做出合理预测:Harry and Joel ___________Mr Taylor, stopped ____________,and _____________ to finish ______________.
结局(Ending)
做出合理预测:They finished _________________
__________.
2.绘制情节山
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