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2024年新课标I卷 “五字真经” 读后续写答案详解 文 体：记叙文 题 材：助人为乐 主题语篇：人与社会 这篇文章描述了作者在一个寒冷湿润的九月夜晚遇到Gunter的经历。由于风暴的影响，作者原定的飞往维也纳的航班延误了一个半小时，使得作者差点错过了去往布拉格的最后一班巴士。在机场，作者遇到了出租车司机Gunter，虽然一开始Gunter并不知道作者所说的巴士站，但在经过一番努力后，Gunter通过电话得知了位置并及时送作者到达。然而，在付款时，作者发现自己钱包中没有现金，银行卡又无法使用。最终，在Gunter的提示下，作者发现了一台取款机，但不幸的是，取款机显示“故障，抱歉。”这是一个关于困难、帮助和意外的故事。 2 往年高考读后续写命题规律 2021年高考读后续写真题 题材与情境： 2021年的题目围绕家庭情境，特别是孩子为母亲准备母亲节惊喜的情节。这是一个温馨而充满日常生活趣味的题材。 任务与挑战： 题目要求考生续写的部分发生在一系列小意外之后，需要考生展示角色如何解决问题并继续他们的计划。 情感与发展： 从初始的兴奋和期待到面对困难时的失望和紧张，再到最终可能的圆满和感动。 2022年高考读后续写真题 题材与情境： 2022年题目聚焦于个人成长与突破，涉及到的体育运动是长跑，主要人物是一位老师以及一位身体有障碍但决心参与的学生。 任务与挑战： 题目的挑战在于展现主人公在面对外界偏见和个人挑战时的坚持和勇气。 情感与发展： 这个故事的情感强调了包容、坚持和自我超越，呈现了一种励志和感人的氛围。 2023年高考读后续写真题 题材与情境： 2023年的题目与个人成长和语言学习挑战有关，背景是一个学生初次尝试写作比赛。 任务与挑战： 题目要求展现主角需要克服初次的恐惧和自我怀疑，最终发现自己对写作的喜爱和才能。 情感与发展： 情感上从自我怀疑到自信和成功的转变，展现了个人成长和自我实现的主题。 2024年高考读后续写命题规律 2024年高考读后续写真题 题材与情境： 2024年的题目聚焦于助人为乐。设定在一个国际旅行的紧急情境中，主人公与出租车司机Gunter在交通和支付上遇到了挑战。 任务与挑战： 考生需要续写的内容涉及如何解决支付问题，以及在数日后与Gunter的再次交流。题目要求考生处理紧张的情境，展示主人公在困境中的应对策略。 情感与发展： 故事从紧张和焦急的起点发展到最后的解决方案，涉及人与人之间的信任和帮助。 与2021年到2023年的题目相比，2024年的题目具有以下特点和变化： 国际视角和多样性： 2024年的题目涉及国际旅行，背景更加国际化，同时涉及多国文化元素（如维也纳、布拉格、葡萄牙银行卡），这与以往更侧重国内或具体社区的情境不同。 技术与现代生活挑战： 题目中涉及的支付失败和现代通讯设备的使用，反映了现代生活中的常见问题，这也是与以往侧重传统情境和人际交往不同的地方。 情感与人际互动的深化： 虽然前几年的题目也涉及情感和人际关系，但2024年题目中的人际互动更为复杂，需要考生展现人物间在困难情境下的相互理解和支持。 分析角度 2021-2023年 2024年 命题规律 传统情境（家庭、学校）；任务涉及个人成长、日常挑战。 国际化和现代情境；任务涉及处理全球流动性和技术挑战。 学生要求 强调情感表达、人际关系和小规模冲突的解决。 强调在不熟悉的环境中解决问题、适应新文化和处理技术失败。 故事分析 关注个人挑战的克服、情感过渡和熟悉环境中的人际动态。 涉及在全球背景下处理复杂情况，包括文化互动和现代问题。 教育目的 鼓励个人发展、情感智能和社区价值观。 培养全球意识、适应能力和技术素养。 2024年高考读后续写对标以往高考题目 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. 结构： 为故事设定了背景和紧迫的情境 为后续的事件发展提供了前提 段落大意： 主角在一个又湿又冷的晚上遇到了滞后的航班问题，导致主角降落后必须在极短的时间内赶往巴士站。 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going , but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. 结构： 增强了故事的人际关系维度 推动了故事进展 段落大意： 主角在匆忙中跳上一辆出租车并遇到了司机Gunter。由于语言沟通上的障碍，Gunter一开始并不了解主角所说的巴士站。经过一番努力，包括Gunter用手机联系朋友并讨论一番后，他们终于确定了方向并启程。 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it, "he said. 结构： 这一段是故事的高潮，释放了之前累积的紧张气氛。 段落大意： 在千钧一发之际，主角和Gunter成功抵达了公交站。幸运的是，由于前方还有长队等待上车，他们并未错过巴士。Gunter的满意和欣慰的表情也传递给了主角一种胜利的喜悦。 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. 结构： 这一段引入了新的冲突 增加了故事的不确定性和紧迫感 段落大意： 当主角试图付款时，发现自己没有现金，且银行卡在出租车的机器上无法使用，情况变得复杂。 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message:"Out of order. Sorry." 结构： 此段进一步加深了主角的困境，为故事增添了更多的紧张和急迫感。 设置了故事的可能转折点，引出下一步的行动和解决方案。 段落大意： 在一系列挫折之后，主角尝试使用公交站的提款机，却发现机器故障。 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 读后续写两大制胜法宝 五字真经 在已定框架范围内，依据情节和情感的发展需要，利用前文的伏笔，结合生活常识，确定续写段落中可能出现的人物，推断这个或这些人物“所见、所闻、所说、所想、所做(即见、闻、说、想、做五字真经)”，由此去构想和补充合理的情节。 1、读要素，弄懂故事大意 2、读人物，抓住关键人物 3、读时态，确定主题时态 本文描述了主角在遭遇航班延误和交通挑战后，急于从维也纳赶往布拉格参加会议的紧张经历。在出租车司机Gunter的帮助下，主角虽然克服了部分困难，但在支付车费时又遇到了新的问题。 I，Gunter 一般过去时 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 4、读语言，把握语言特色 （1）环境描写： 遇到Gunter的那天晚上： I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. 导致飞机延误的原因： Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 4、读语言，把握语言特色 （2）动作描写： 下机场后我赶往巴士站： I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.…… Gunter求助的动作： Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. Gunter对把我准时送到巴士站的反应： Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 4、读语言，把握语言特色 （2）动作描写： 我发现钱包里没现金的反应： I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. 我急忙冲向提款机： I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, …… 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 4、读语言，把握语言特色 （3）情感描写： 我对目前紧急情况的情感： A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. （4）心理活动描写： 我对Gunter动作的思考： I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. 我意识到钱包里没钱： I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. 写作步骤1——通读全文，理清脉络 写作步骤2——依据首句，构思框架 1、读懂两段首句，生成写作框架 第一段首句译文： I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 我跑回去告诉冈特这个坏消息。 第二段首句译文： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照约定给冈特打了电话。 两段首句定一框 二框二首正能量 两段首句定一框：（由两段首句推断第一段的框架） 由题目所给文章可知，我没有带现金，无法支付车费，但我急着下车赶巴士，在千钧一发的瞬间我看到了取款机，但是取款机显示不工作。 由第一段首句得知，我和Gunter说了这个坏消息。 由第二段首句得知，四天后我回到了维也纳，并且按照约定联系了Gunter。 因此推断出第一段续写框架： （该段主要内容应是）Gunter对我的帮助，让我准时登上了大巴：听到我说的坏消息之后，Gunter的反应（与第一段首句衔接）→Gunter出言安慰，并思考解决方式（包含动作描写和语言描写）→Gunter灵机一动，掏出现金给我，并留下自己的姓名和电话（包含动作描写，可与第二段的动作描写相呼应）→我被Gunter的行为感动（包含情感描写）→我保证在会议结束后会把钱还给他（包含语言和动作描写，与第二段首句衔接） 两段首句定一框 二框二首正能量 1、读懂两段首句，生成写作框架 写作步骤2——依据首句，构思框架 二框二首正能量：（由第二段首句和正能量结局推断第二段的框架） 由题目所给文章可知，我没有带现金，无法支付车费，但我急着下车赶巴士，在千钧一发的瞬间我看到了取款机，但是取款机显示不工作。 由第二段首句得知，四天后我回到了维也纳，并且按照约定联系了Gunter。 因此推断出第二段续写框架： （该段主要内容应是）我感谢Gunter对我的帮助：我对再次见到Gunter感觉十分期待（包含心理描写，与第二段首句衔接）→我在约定的地点见到了Gunter（包含动作描写，丰富续写情节）→我紧紧拥抱Gunter并送上了我的礼物，以及给回了之前我欠他的钱（包含动作、情感描写，与前文衔接，丰富续写情节）→毫无疑问，这次难忘的经历见证了我们之间新的纽带，正是冈特的善良像太阳一样照亮了人性的真谛，让我在寒冷的暴风雨之夜感受到了温暖。（主题升华部分，升华通篇主题） 两段首句定一框 二框二首正能量 1、读懂两段首句，生成写作框架 写作步骤2——依据首句，构思框架 2、写好三个衔接句(衔接技巧点拨） 第一段首句后的衔接句： Feeling my anxiety, he turned around, staring at the last few passengers in bus queue. 写作步骤2——依据首句，构思框架 通过使用情感词“anxiety”，与上文与第一段首句衔接，凸显出我此刻焦急的情绪。 通过使用“in bus queue”，与原文细节对应，使文章更加连贯。 通过描写Gunter的动作，写出了Gunter对我的话的反应，使前后句衔接更加自然。 第一段尾句（须与第二段首句衔接）： Touched by his absolute trust, I made a promise that I was bound to pay back the money after the conference. 写作步骤2——依据首句，构思框架 该句与第一段续写内容衔接，我被Gunter的行为打动。 通过使用“made a promise”,与第二段首句“as promised”相对应，使衔接更加连贯。 通过描述我的动作，即承诺在会议后将钱归还，与第二段首句中的动作，四天会议结束后我按约定找了Gunter，两个动作相对应，使衔接自然。 2、写好三个衔接句(衔接技巧点拨） 第二段首句后的衔接句： I could hardly wait to meet him again, not only due to the cash I owed him but also the kindness he showed to me. 写作步骤2——依据首句，构思框架 通过使用“meet him”，与第二段首句“called him”呈逻辑顺序关系，使衔接自然。 “cash”和“kindness he showed to me”与前文情节相对应，使文章行文连贯流畅。 2、写好三个衔接句(衔接技巧点拨） 2、写好一个升华句（主题升华技巧点拨） 第二段的尾句，即文尾句。能体现故事圆满结局的句子或故事给我们的启示的句子： It was Gunter’s kindness shining like the sun that illuminated the true essence of humanity and let me feel the warmth in the cold stormy night. 写作步骤2——依据首句，构思框架 该部分通过使用“illuminated the true essence of humanity”提出个人感悟，升华全文主题。 通过使用“the cold stromy night”与前文细节相对应，同时使用了“warmth”和“shining like the sun”与之形成对比，进一步通过心理描写加强了文章立意。 五字真经，增加细节 五字真经 在已定框架范围内，依据情节和情感的发展需要，利用前文的伏笔，结合生活常识，确定续写段落中可能出现的人物，推断这个或这些人物“所见、所闻、所说、所想、所做(即见、闻、说、想、做五字真经)”，由此去构想和补充合理的情节。 写作步骤3——增加细节，展开续写 （大体框架）Gunter对我的帮助，让我准时登上了大巴。基于第一段的框架，我们可以补充以下细节： （续写第一段首句）我跑回去告诉冈特这个坏消息。 →（所做）听到我说的坏消息之后，Gunter的反应 →（所做、所说）Gunter出言安慰，并思考解决方式 →（所做、所说）Gunter灵机一动，掏出现金给我，并留下自己的姓名和电话 →（所感、所想）我被Gunter的行为感动 →（所感、所说、所做）我保证在会议结束后会把钱还给他 五字真经，增加细节 写作步骤3——增加细节，展开续写 （大体框架）我感谢Gunter对我的帮助。基于第二段的框架，我们可以补充以下细节： （续写第二段首句）我跑回去告诉冈特这个坏消息。 →（所想）我对再次见到Gunter感觉十分期待 →（所做、所感）我在约定的地点见到了Gunter，感到十分激动 →（所做、所感、所说）我紧紧拥抱Gunter并送上了我的礼物，以及给回了之前我欠他的钱，谢谢他的帮助 →（主题升华部分）毫无疑问，这次难忘的经历见证了我们之间新的纽带，正是冈特的善良像太阳一样照亮了人性的真谛，让我在寒冷的暴风雨之夜感受到了温暖。 五字真经，增加细节 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 【感、做】Feeling my anxiety, he turned around, staring at the last few passengers in bus queue. 【做、说】With a furrowed brow, he still reassured me not to worry in a calm voice. 【感】Suddenly, a relieved smile broadened across his face. 【做】He fished out some cash, handed it to me and then quickly scribbled his name and phone number on a sticky note. 【说】He urged :“ Let's tackle the problem next time. Be quick to board the last bus.” 【感、做】Touched by his absolute trust, I made a promise that I was bound to pay back the money after the conference. 写作步骤4——检查优化，整洁誊写 名师范文（范文投稿来源：广西博白县中学——邹秋华老师） Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 【想】I could hardly wait to meet him again, not only due to the cash I owed him but also the kindness he showed to me. 【做】The moment I saw him where we first encountered. 【做、感】I embraced him tightly and presented him with a gift I had bought in Prague, along with the money, tears welling up in my eyes. 【想】I really knew nothing would be able to convey my sincere gratitude to him. 【说】We talked a lot as if we had been friends for many years. 【想】There was no doubt that the unforgettable experience witnessed a new bond between us. 【主题升华】It was Gunter’s kindness shining like the sun that illuminated the true essence of humanity and let me feel the warmth in the cold stormy night. 写作步骤4——检查优化，整洁誊写 名师范文（范文投稿来源：广西博白县中学——邹秋华老师） 下水文1（邹秋华老师投稿）： I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Feeling my anxiety, he turned around, staring at the last few passengers in bus queue. With a furrowed brow, he still reassured me not to worry in a calm voice. Suddenly, a relieved smile broadened across his face. He fished out some cash , handed it to me and then quickly scribbled his name and phone number on a sticky note. He urged :“ Let's tackle the problem next time. Be quick to board the last bus.” Touched by his absolute trust, I made a promise that I was bound to pay back the money after the conference. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. I could hardly wait to meet him again, not only due to the cash I owed him but also the kindness he showed to me. The moment I saw him where we first encountered. I embraced him tightly and presented him with a gift I had bought in Prague, along with the money, tears welling up in my eyes. I really knew nothing would be able to convey my sincere gratitude to him. We talked a lot as if we had been friends for many years. There was no doubt that the unforgettable experience witnessed a new bond between us. It was Gunter’s kindness shining like the sun that illuminated the true essence of humanity and let me feel the warmth in the cold stormy night. 写作步骤4——检查优化，整洁誊写 下水文2（学生投稿）： I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Panting and clearly anxious, I explained that the cash machine was broken. Without a moment’s hesitation, Gunter rummaged through the car and surprisingly pulled out an old credit card machine. "Let’s try this one, maybe it’ll work," he said hopefully. After a few tense seconds, the machine made a positive sound, and my payment was processed. Relieved, I thanked him profusely and promised to call him again to express my gratitude, then hurried onto the bus before it left. As the bus started moving, I looked back to see Gunter waving. His quick actions and constant help had saved the day. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. I had been thinking about his assistance during the conference, and I really wanted to properly thank him. He answered the phone with a cheerful, "Hello, my running friend!" which made me smile. We agreed to meet where we first met. There, I gave him a small gift—a model of the historic bus we almost missed, as a token of my thanks. We exchanged stories and laughs, and our meeting turned into a delightful afternoon of new friendship. Gunter’s kindness was a reminder of the unexpected human connections that can happen in our busiest moments. 写作步骤4——检查优化，整洁誊写 范文短语点拨 动作描写 心理描写 情感描写 环境描写 语言描写 ·turned around ·staring at ·With a furrowed brow ·fished out some cash ·handed it to me quickly scribbled his name and phone number on a sticky note ·embraced him tightly ·presented him with a gift ·I could hardly wait to meet him again ·let me feel the warmth in the cold stormy night. ·Touched by his absolute trust ·Feeling my anxiety ·a relieved smile broadened across his face ·the kindness he showed to me ·let me feel the warmth in the cold stormy night. ·reassured me not to worry in a calm voice ·He urged…… ·We talked a lot as if we had been friends for many years…… 范文句子点拨 1、动作描写 (1)Feeling my anxiety, he turned around, staring at the last few passengers in bus queue. 感受到我的焦虑，他转过身来，盯着公交车队列中的最后几名乘客。 (2)……a relieved smile broadened across his face. ……脸上露出了如释重负的笑容 (3)He fished out some cash, handed it to me and then quickly scribbled his name and phone number on a sticky note. 他掏出一些现金递给我，然后迅速在便签纸上写下了他的名字和电话号码。 范文句子点拨 2、语言描写 (1)With a furrowed brow, he still reassured me not to worry in a calm voice. 他眉头紧皱，但还是用平静的语气安慰我不要担心。 (2)He urged:“Let's tackle the problem next time. Be quick to board the last bus.” 他敦促道："让我们下次再解决这个问题。快点搭上末班车"。 (3)We talked a lot as if we had been friends for many years. 我们聊了很多，就像多年的朋友一样。 范文句子点拨 3、情感描写 (1)Suddenly, a relieved smile broadened across his face. 突然，他的脸上露出了如释重负的笑容。 (2)……tears welling up in my eyes. ……泪水在眼眶里打转 4、心理活动描写 (1)I could hardly wait to meet him again…… 我迫不及待地想再见到他 (2)I really knew nothing would be able to convey my sincere gratitude to him. 我真的知道，没有什么能表达我对他的诚挚谢意。 范文句子点拨 5、精句详解 (1)Touched by his absolute trust, I made a promise that I was bound to pay back the money after the conference. 我被他的绝对信任所打动，许下诺言，会议结束后一定会把钱还给他。 分析： Touched by his absolute trust ...过去分词作状语，表被动关系。.... I made a promise that I was bound to pay back the money 这是由that 引导的同位语从句， 用来说明promise的具体内容 范文句子点拨 6、主题升华句详解 It was Gunter’s kindness shining like the sun that illuminated the true essence of humanity and let me feel the warmth in the cold stormy night. 是冈特的善良像阳光一样照亮了人性的真谛，让我在寒冷的风雨之夜感受到了温暖。 本句运用强调句作为主旨升华句，强调了Gunter 的善举是整个故事所传递的主题，其中shining like the sun 使用了比喻的修辞手法 ，让Gunter如同闪耀阳光的善举与外部环境（寒冷的风雨交加之夜）的伏笔形成鲜明反差，让读者更加为此震撼 版权声明 此“五字真经”读后续写详解ppt版权归爱疯大课堂所有。 此书为与“五字真经读后续写详解PPT”相关的爱疯大课堂读后续写书籍，欢迎扫码了解详情。 欢迎关注“爱疯大课堂英语”公众号、“爱疯大课堂”公众号，获取更多最新试题及试题解析资源。 爱疯大课堂英语公众号 爱疯大课堂公众号 Thank You！ $$