2024年英语新高考I卷II卷读后续写 好心的出租车司机 课件

2024年全国I+II卷 好心的出租车司机 读后续写真题系列专题 目录 CONTENTS 1 读原文 划要素 填表格 2 读P1P2首句 定情节发展 列大纲 两段12句法 3 写句式 招招升级 4 5 写句式 招招升级 水到渠成 范文赏析 1 读原文 划要素 填表格 1 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. l had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half, l touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment l got off the plane, l ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when l met Gunter. l told him where l was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. l thought my pronunciation was the problem, so l explained again more slowly but he still looked confused. When l was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. 2024年全国I+II卷真题原文 Finally, with just two minutes to spare, we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus, Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it.” he said. Just then l realized that I had zero cash in my wallet. l flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as l saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. l jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry. 读原文 划要素 填表格 n. 特点 （adj./v./短语） 角色1 Gunter a warm-hearted taxi driver 角色2 I 背景事件 I jumped into a taxi in a hurry and met the driver Gunter, who was warm-heartd and gave me a big hand. 微情节 动作(v.)/ 情绪(adj.) l told him where l was going, but he looked confused.(p2) When l was about to give up, Gunter rang up a friend for help and sent me to the destination successfully. (p2-3) l realized that I had zero cash in my wallet and a feeling of helplessness washed over me.(p4) Gunter pointed towards a cash machine and I made a mad run for the machine, but failed to take cash out.(p5) 1 2 读P1P2首句 定情节发展 Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. _______________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised. _______________________________________________________ 2 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.   Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised. P1大意 I told Gunter the truth, and Gunter helped me. I promised to pay him back. P1角色 续写 思路 角色 I Gunter 动作 (v.) 情绪(adj.) 读P1P2首句 定情节发展 I ; Gunter ①How did I feel? ③What did Gunter do? 2 ②What did I do? ④What promise did I make? P2大意 P2角色 续写 思路 角色 Gunter 动作 (v.) 情绪(adj.) 读P1P2首句 定情节发展 I paid him back and expressed my gratitude to him. I 2 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised. I ; Gunter ①What did I say? ②What did I do? ③How did Gunter react? 列大纲：两段12句法 3 列大纲：两段12句法 1） 2） 3） 4） 5） 6） 7） 8） 9） 10） 11） 12） 思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？ 3 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.   Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised. 列大纲：两段12句法 1）固定 2） 3） 4） 5） 6）固定 7）固定 8） 9） 10） 11） 12）固定 结局/升华主旨 续写首段首句 续写二段首句 承接首段首句 3 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.   Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised. I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.   Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised. 列大纲：两段12句法 1） 2） 3） 4） 5） 6） 7）固定 8） 9） 10） 11） 12） Kindness makes a big difference. What was the bad news? Gunter knew I would call. I left without paying. Gunter said OK. I felt moved. I wrote his number down. I promised to pay him back. We appointed to meet. I offered an extra $10 tip. Gunter refused the tip. I felt moved. 3 写句式 招招升级 4 写句式 招招升级 e.g.: 1）“Sorry, I can’t take cash out.” I said embarrassedly, with my face burning. 2）Hearing my words, Gunter replied with the familiar smile on his face. 招式1： 非谓语动词 常用句式： ① Doing..., ..... ② with + n + doing/done/to do ③ ..., doing... 4 写句式 招招升级 e.g.: 3） So surprised and moved was I that I couldn’t say a word out. 招式2：倒装句 so...that... ”如此......以至于......” 句型中，为了表示强调，可以将so的部分提至句首，后面接半倒装的句型。 4 写句式 招招升级 e.g.: 4）Gunter pointed toward it and said to me, “It is your turn.” 5）Realizing it was time to leave, I took out my notebook, asked Gunter’s number and wrote it down hurriedly. 4 招式3： 动作链（V1, V2 and V3) 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足 写句式 招招升级 e.g.: 6） Suddenly, a warm current washed over me. 4 招式4：无灵主语 ① a flood of + （情绪类）n. seized/welled up/came over sb. ② 无灵主语（表示时间、地点的名词）+有灵动词（see/witness） Step 4. 写句式 招招升级 e.g.: 7）It was at that time that I realized that a small kindness action could make such a big difference! 招式5： 主旨升华常用句式： “知道那时我才意识到......” It was at that time that I realized that... 水到渠成 范文赏析 5 范文赏析 5 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. “Sorry, I can’t take cash out.” I said embarrassedly, with my face burning. Hearing my words, Gunter replied with the familiar smile on his face, “That’s OK, just go ahead, you can pay me at your convenience.” So surprised and moved was I that I couldn’t say a word out. As the bus queue became shorter, Gunter pointed toward it and said to me, “It is your turn.” Realizing it was time to leave, I took out my notebook, asked Gunter’s number and wrote it down hurriedly. At the same time, I promised firmly that I would call him and paid him back as soon as possible. 范文赏析 5 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised. The moment Gunter picked up the phone, I couldn't wait to introduce myself. Gunter seemed to know I was going to call, and he said softly, "I know." We made an appointment to meet at the departure place. As we met the following day, I hugged him tightly like we were long-time-no-see old friends, and I expressed my great gratitude to him. I paid him back and offered an extra $10 tip, however, he refused the tip, only to accept the taxi fare, saying “It is not a big deal.” Suddenly, a warm current washed over me. It was at that time that I realized that a small kindness action could make such a big difference! Thank you! $$