九上 Module 4 Home alone 模块写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(外研版 广西专版)

九年级上册 WY 1 Module 4 Home alone 模块写作指导 2 话题概述 本模块围绕“独自在家”这一话题展开，介绍了一次独自在家的经历及 电影《小鬼当家》的剧情。该话题常见写作角度有： 1. 独自在家的经历及感受：文体为记叙文，记叙在家的经历，用一般过去 时；表达自己的感受，可用一般现在时。 2.独自在家的经历给自己的启示以及后面的计划：文体为记叙文，记叙独自 在家的经历，用一般过去时；介绍后期计划，用一般将来时或一般现在时。 3.针对独自在家做出计划并表达希望：文体为说明文，介绍计划内容用一 般将来时；表达希望用一般现在时或一般将来时。 3 典例探究 每一次经历都是学习的体验，成长的积淀。近期你校英语报Have Your Say栏目要举办以“Being home alone”为题的征文活动。请你用英语 写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 独自在家的原因（父母外出、父母出差……）; 2. 独自在家的活动安排（打扫房间、做饭……）; 3. 独自在家的感受。 4 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Being home alone I'd like to share one of my experiences of being home alone with you today. ______________________ 5 ◆审题 1. 体裁：记叙独自在家的经历，本文为________； 2. 时态：记叙独自在家的经历，用____________。表达自己的感受，可用 ____________； 3. 人称：记叙独自在家的经历，用__________。 记叙文 一般过去时 一般现在时 第一人称 6 ◆逐步突破 一、短语翻译 1. ___________ 出差 2. _______________ 按时起床 3. __________________ 打扫房间 4. ______________ 在我看来 on business get up on time clean up the house in my opinion 7 二、句子翻译 1. 虽然我把食物烧焦了，但我还是喜欢吃。（although引导的让步状语从 句） _____________________________________________ Although I burned my food, I still liked eating it. 2. 当我的父母回来时，他们为我感到骄傲，我感到非常高兴。（so… that…） ________________________________________________________________ _______ When my parents came back, they were so proud of me that I felt very happy. 3. 确保我们把门窗都锁上了。（make sure+that从句） _______________________________________ Make sure we lock the door and windows. 8 三、篇章展示 Being home alone I'd like to share one of my experiences of being home alone with you today. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Last month my parents were on business for three days. During these three days, I got up on time and went to school by bus. After school, I did my homework first, and then I tried to cook. Although I burned my food, I still liked eating it. Also, I cleaned up the house. When my parents came back, they were so proud of me that I felt very happy. 9 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ In my opinion, being home alone is enjoyable, but we should be careful when we are at home alone. Make sure we lock the door and windows. And remember to turn off the electricity when leaving the house. 10 11 $$