九上 Module 1 Wonders of the world 模块写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(外研版 广西专版)

九年级上册 WY 1 Module 1 Wonders of the world 模块写作指导 2 话题概述 本模块围绕“自然和旅游”这一话题展开,相关的作文话题是“描写地点 和经历”。写作中以“描写地点和经历”为话题的书面表达形式灵活多变,题 材丰富。该话题常见写作角度有： 1.描述旅游经历或介绍旅游计划和安排等，体裁以记叙文为主，通常用一 般过去时描写旅游经历,介绍旅行的时间、地点、交通工具、人物活动及感 受等；而介绍旅游计划与安排时用一般将来时。人称多用第一人称。 2.介绍某个风景名胜或某地的自然风光，体裁以说明文为主。通常用一般 现在时描写,需要正确描述其地理位置、文化、风土人情等。 3 典例探究 人们常说：“读万卷书不如行万里路。”你最难忘的旅行是哪次？学校 英语俱乐部请你以“An unforgettable trip”为题写一篇短文，在期末优秀作 品展示会上进行分享，内容包括： 1. 你去了哪里（青岛、西安……）； 2. 你在那里做了什么（游览名胜古迹、爬山、看日出、游泳……）； 3.你对这次旅行的感受。 4 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： sunrise（日出）, ray of sunshine（一缕阳光） An unforgettable trip I have been to many places these years. ______________________ 5 ◆审题 1. 体裁：本文讲述自己一次难忘的一次旅行，是一篇________； 2. 时态：阐述自己难忘的旅行经历，时态用____________。表达自己对这 次旅行的感受用____________； 3. 人称：讲述自己的经历，人称为__________。 记叙文 一般过去时 一般现在时 第一人称 6 ◆逐步突破 一、短语翻译 1. _____________________ 玩得开心 2. ________________ 爬山 3. ______________ 看日出 4. _______________________ 第一缕阳光 5. ___________ 拍照 have a great/good time climb mountains see the sunrise the first ray of sunshine take photos 7 二、句子翻译 1. 我们在那里做了很多有意义的事情，比如游泳、划船、爬山。 （did a lot of meaningful things, such as…） ________________________________________________________________ ___________________ We did a lot of meaningful things there, such as swimming, boating and climbing mountains. 2. 青岛也以其食物而闻名，因为那里的海鲜真的很美味。（be famous for） ________________________________________________________________ __________ Qingdao is also famous for its food because the seafood there is really delicious. 8 3. 最令人兴奋的事情是看日出。（The most exciting thing is/was to do sth.） ___________________________________________ The most exciting thing was to see the sunrise. 4. 我感到如此高兴以至于我迫不及待地想再去那儿。（so…that…） ______________________________________________ I feel so happy that I can't wait to go there again. 9 三、篇章展示 An unforgettable trip I have been to many places these years. ________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ But Qingdao is the most unforgettable place I have ever been to. Last summer, my friends and I went to Qingdao. We had a great time there. We did a lot of meaningful things there, such as swimming, boating and climbing mountains. Qingdao is also famous for its food because the seafood there is really delicious. The most exciting thing was to see the sunrise. When the sun rose from the 10 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ east, we cheered. For the first ray of sunshine in the morning, people always have different feelings. These feelings are the expectation of a new day and the hope of a better day. I took many photos as well. They can be my best memories. I feel so happy that I can't wait to go there again. 11 12 $$