Unit 14 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.Our junior school life will come to an end. 2.At the moment, I would like to share my experiences of school life with you. 3.During the three years, I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates. 4 中间句 1.When I look back, I find that my math has improved a lot because of my hard work. 2.The most unforgettable people are all the teachers who are so knowledgeable and experienced. 3.In the past three years, we've had a beautiful school and it provides us with a good study place. 4.During the three years, you always helped me with my schoolwork in your spare time. 5 结尾句 1.Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you! 2.In short, I will try my best to be a better student next term. 3.At last, we hope our school will become better, our teachers will be healthy forever and all our dreams will come true. 4.The end of junior high school is the beginning of a new life and I'm sure I'll be ready for my new journey. 6 俗语/谚语 1.How time flies! 时光飞逝！ 2.Friends may meet, but mountains never greet. 朋友可相逢，高山永分离。 3.Time flies like an arrow, and time lost never returns. 光阴似箭，一去 不返。 7 写作模板 How time flies! My three-year middle school life is coming to an end. Look back on the three years, I feel ____（感受类形容词）and ____（感受类形容词）. Most of my happiness is brought by my teachers and classmates in my school. The teachers are very ____（评价类形容词） and ____ （评价类形容词）. They not only ____（老师们做的事情1）, but also ____（老师们做的事情2）. My classmates are very ____（评价类形容词） and ____（评价类形容词）. We always ____（和同学们做的事情1） and 8 ____（和同学们做的事情2） together. What's more, our school organized different kinds of activities for us, such as ____（学校组织的活动1） and ____（学校组织的活动2）. They make our school life ____ （评价类形容词）. All good things come to an end, but I am sure ____（希望）. 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 10 假如你是李华，你的初中生活即将结束，在此之际，请你表达对父母、 老师们的感激之情，同时做出今后的打算。内容包括： 1. 对父母的感激之情； 2. 对老师们的感激之情； 3. 你今后的打算。 11 注意： 1. 参考要点内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等； 4. 词数不少于80词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：gratitude感谢 My junior school life is coming to an end.______________________ 12 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：介绍父母和老师对自己的帮助，用第1.____人称，表达自己对 他们的感谢，用第2.____人称；讲述客观事实，应用3.__________时。 三 一 一般现在 13 二、初拟提纲： 14 高分范文 My junior school life is coming to an end.Many people helped me. I want to say thanks to them. First, I want to express my gratitude to my parents. They have taken good care of me since I was born. They work hard every day to support our family. Whenever I need help, they are always there with me. Then I want to thank my teachers. Whenever I fail my exams, they always encourage me and give me confidence. When I can't get on well with my classmates, they will give me some useful advice. I plan to study harder and get into a good high school. 15 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 16 一、句子扩写与升格 1. You speak more. You will make fewer mistakes.（用“the+比较级, the+ 比较级”升格句子） ________________________________________________ The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. 2. I believe you'll make great progress in your English study. （用if引导的条件状语从句扩写句子） ________________________________________________________________ ______________ If you accept my advice, I believe you'll make great progress in your English study. 17 3. We often practice listening, speaking, reading and writing. We will certainly learn English well.（用as long as引导的条件状语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________________ _______________________________ As long as we often practice listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will certainly learn English well. 18 二、书面表达 三年快乐而充实的初中生活即将结束了，你将进入高中学习。展望未 来，你对高中生活充满期待。请以“My Dream School Life”为题，写一篇 短文。 内容包括： 1. 生活、学习环境（餐厅、图书馆、运动场等）； 2. 师生、同学关系； 3. 生活多姿多彩、学业进步。 19 注意： 1. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 20 My Dream School Life I will study in a senior high school soon. Everything is new to me. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ I hope my school is big and clean with a large dining room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. We can help each other. At the same time, my dream school life is colorful. After class I can listen to music and play chess and basketball. To gain more useful know-ledge, I can surf the Internet. I will not only keep a good eating habit but also do exercise often to be in good spirits to study. I will try my best to make great progress. As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream. 21 22 $$