Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. 2.It is the challenges that make me stronger. Let me tell you my story. 3.Here I'd like to share an embarrassing experience with you. 4.Today was the unluckiest day of my life. 4 中间句 1.At noon when I got to the dining room, I found I hadn't taken money with me. 2.Before I was about to leave for the bus station, I realized that I had left my mobile phone on the bed. 3.When I opened my eyes and saw my sports bag, I remembered I had planned to go running with Jame. 5 4.When I got to the cinema, I realized that I had forgotten to take my ticket. 5.In the face of danger, we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents, our teachers or the police for help in time. 6 结尾句 1.What an unlucky day! 2.I have learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life. 3.I learn that we should always be caring and understanding no matter what happens. 4.In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives. 7 俗语/谚语 1.Nothing is so certain as the unexpected. 天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。 2.Every cloud has a silver lining. 否极泰来。 8 写作模板 I remember well/I will never forget ____（什么事情）. It happened in/on ____（时间） at/in ____（地点）. When I heard the news of ____, I was ____（当时的感受）. When ____ happened, I was____（事件发生时“我”在做的事）. My friends were ____（事件发生时朋友们在做的事）. This event is very important to me because ____（重要的原因）. I really learned a lesson from this event because ____（得到教训的 原因）. 9 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 10 生活中总是充满意外。无论是意外的惊喜，还是意外的困境，都是生 活给我们的礼物。从中我们不仅可以体验喜怒哀乐，收获经验，还可以吸 取教训，不断成长。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，讲述自己的一次 “意外”经历。 写作要点： 1. 那一天发生了什么事； 2. 你的感受； 3. 你从中学到了什么。 11 写作要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透漏个人信息； 3. 词数80左右。 12 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：讲述自己的一次“意外”经历用第1.____人称；这个经历已经发 生过，应用2.__________时。 一 一般过去 13 二、初拟提纲： 14 高分范文 Life is full of the unexpected. It is normal to experience something good or bad. What's important is that life can teach us something. This reminds me of an experience I had two years ago. One day, I was told there was an English exam next day. I was not good at English, so I stayed up late studying for the exam. When I entered the classroom next morning, one of my classmates said it was April Fool's Day and that the exam was a joke. However, in English class, my teacher did give us an exam. As a result, I did really well because I was the only one who had prepared for it carefully. I felt so lucky. 15 Since then, I have developed the habit of reviewing what I have learned every day because the experience made me understand the saying “No pain, no gain.” 16 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 17 一、句子扩写与升格 1. Yesterday was really a bad day for me.（用定语从句扩写句子） _________________________________________________________ Yesterday was really a bad day for me, which I'll never forget. 2. We handed in our homework. I had left it at home.（用It was time to do sth.升格句子） ___________________________________________________________ It was time to hand in our homework, but I had left it at home. 18 3. We can keep our minds open to different people or things. We may learn more.（用if引导的条件状语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________________ ____________ If we can keep our minds open to different people or things, we may learn more. 19 二、书面表达 生活中，难免会遇到挫折、意外或被人误解，对此我们应该冷静面对。 请以“I Managed to Keep My Cool”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写 一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 你遭遇的事件是什么； 2. 你是如何控制情绪并冷静应对的； 3. 你对自己处理问题的方式有什么感想。 20 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 I Managed to Keep My Cool ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ I remember that we had an English exam in Grade Seven. Before the paper was handed out, I felt very nervous. As a result, I failed in the exam. From then on, I was afraid to take part in English exams very much. But I managed to overcome my fear finally. 21 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ This problem had troubled me until I was about to enter the eighth grade. I asked my English teacher for help, and he told me that I should be confident in myself. I should face examinations correctly. After that, I studied harder than before. I planned and prepared for each exam very well. And by doing so, my exam results were getting better and better. I have learned that it is important to have enough self-confidence to do everything well. 22 23 $$