Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.Little happiness is everywhere in our daily life. 2.Everyone must meet a special person who makes him or her feels warm in life. 3.There are many unforgettable things in my middle school life. 4.Have you had an unforgettable experience in your life? Let me share mine. 5.I believe that we all have our own unforgettable experiences. Let me tell you one of my experiences. 4 中间句 1.I will never forget the story happened between my best friend and me. 2.When I fail my exam, they always encourage me and give me confidence. 3.We should thank our parents for bringing us to the world. 4.My father was very happy and said that was the best gift for him. 5.Little by little, I've become interested in physics and I'm good at it. 6.My mother always gives me advice on how to solve my problems and encourages me to do better. 5 结尾句 1.It was so fantastic that I'll never forget this experience. 2.I believe as long as you pay attention, you will feel the little happiness in life. 3.Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up. 6 俗语/谚语 1.Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是良药。 2.It's rare for people to laugh. 人世难逢开口笑。 3.Be not anxious for the morrow. 勿忧明日。 7 写作模板 As we all know, ____. I still remember the first time I ____ （做了什么事情）. Last ____（时间）, I wanted to learn ____（学习的内容）. I asked ____（人物）. I went to ____（地点）. He/She taught me how to ____ （学习的内容）. At first, I was ____（感受）. But he/she encouraged me. He/She said ____（鼓励“我”的话）. Then I began to ____（做法1）. It made me ____（感受）. Then he/she told me how to ____（做法2）. It took me about ____（时间） to learn to ____（学习的内容）. I felt quite ____（感受）. What an unforgettable experience it was! 8 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 9 生活中，有很多事情令我们开心，比如享受一次愉悦身心的旅行、阅 读一本经典名著、参加一场酣畅淋漓的比赛、解决一个棘手的问题……它 们带给我们快乐，也让我们成为更好的自己。本期学校英语论坛正在开展 以“____ Brought Me Happiness”为题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文 投稿，分享你的故事和感受。 写作要点： 1. 谁/什么带给了你快乐？ 2. 你从中学到了什么？ 3. 你的感受是什么？ 10 写作要求： 1. 请将标题补充完整； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 _______ Brought Me Happiness As we all know, happiness is a feeling in our daily life.___________ 11 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：谈论自己的感受用第 1.____人称，介绍读书的好处及如何给自 己带来快乐，用第 2.____人称；介绍读书的乐趣和作用，自己对读书的感 受，用 3 .__________时。 一 三 一般现在 12 二、初拟提纲： 13 高分范文 Reading Brought Me Happiness As we all know, happiness is a feeling in our daily life. I always read in my spare time. I think it can not only improve my knowledge, but also broaden my mind. 14 First of all, there are all kinds of stories in the book. Some are interesting, some are sad, and some are wonderful. I can always learn a lot from them. Second, reading books helps me do well in my study. Last but not least, books are quite useful when I meet with difficulties. In a word, reading has already become part of my life. Just as the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man.” I think doing more reading can really make me better. 15 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 16 一、句子扩写与升格 1. Ms. Wang is very helpful. She's always ready to help almost every student in our class.（用so... that... 引导的结果状语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________________ ___________________ Ms. Wang is so helpful that she's always ready to help almost every student in our class. 17 2. She is a great mother.（升格成感叹句） __________________________ What a great mother she is! 3. I think my mother is a good mother. She is also a good doctor. （用not only… but also…升格句子） _______________________________________________________________ I think my mother is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. 18 二、书面表达 人生是一场经历，需要用心去体验。快乐的事能带给我们愉悦，温暖 的事能令我们感动，痛苦的事也能使我们回味，也许多彩的人生才算是生 命的永恒。校英语报社以“An Unforgettable Thing I've Experienced”为题 举办英语征文比赛，请你根据自己的生活经历写一篇文章投稿。内容包括： 1. 谈谈这件难忘的事； 2. 说说你的感想或收获； 3. …… 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 19 An Unforgettable Thing I've Experienced Have you had an unforgettable experience in your life? Let me share mine. ___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life. One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8. 20 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ I worked hard to prepare for an English speech. However, things didn't go on as smoothly as I had expected. I fell ill a week before the speech. I coughed so badly that I could even hardly speak. I felt worried and helpless. It was my English teacher that helped me get out of trouble. She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully. Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up. 21 22 $$