Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands. 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.I'm glad to know that you're interested in Chinese social manners. 2.I'm very happy to know that you're coming to China for vacation. 3.Let me give you some advice on Chinese customs and table manners. 4.As we all know, different countries have different customs. 4 中间句 1.If you want to visit your friends, you'd better make a call to them. 2.During the Spring Festival, you'd better not cut your hair. 3.You're supposed to arrive at the party on time, or a few minutes earlier. 4.After dinner, you'd better say that the food is delicious and thank them for their treat. 5 结尾句 1.Enjoy your time and the beauty of Chinese customs. 2.I hope the information can help you and that you will have a pleasant journey in China. 6 俗语/谚语 1.When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 2.So many countries, so many customs. 十里不同俗。 7 写作模板 Dear ____， I'm glad that you will come to ____（地点）. Life in ____（地点） is different. So it's truly necessary to learn about our local customs. I'm writing to introduce some customs to you, which can make your life easier here. 8 In our ____（地点）, we usually ____（习惯1）. ____（习惯2） are different from those in your country. First of all, you are supposed to ____（细节1）. But don't ____（细节2）. Besides it is impolite to ____ （细节3）. If you are invited to ____（地点）, you'd better ____ （细节4）. It is good manners to ____（细节5）. By the way, you are not supposed to ____（细节6）. In the end, just remember the golden rule: Watch the other people and do as they do. I hope you will enjoy your stay in ____（地点）. I am looking forward to seeing you in ____（地点）. Yours, ________ 9 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 10 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国文化很有兴趣，他给你发邮 件询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请 你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。 写作要点： 1. 初次见面有什么礼仪； 2. 餐桌上有什么礼仪； 3. 被邀请去朋友家时应该做什么。 11 写作要求： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, You must be excited about coming to China soon.____________ Yours, Li Hua 12 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：给对方写信介绍一些中国的传统礼仪，主体是Mike，应用第 1.____人称；介绍客观事实应用2.__________时。 二 一般现在 13 二、初拟提纲： 14 高分范文 Dear Mike, You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs. Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to your friend's house and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it's rude to point at others with your chopsticks. 15 I hope the above advice is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 17 一、句子扩写与升格 1. We meet people for the first time. We usually shake hands with them. （用when引导的时间状语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________________ _______ When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands with them. 2. Talking too much when having meals is bad manners.（用it作形式主 语升格句子） _________________________________________________ It's bad manners to talk too much when having meals. 3. When you receive a gift, you should open it after the guest leaves. （用被动语态来升格句子） _____________________________________________________________ When you receive a gift, it should be opened after the guest leaves. 18 二、书面表达 中国自古以来就有“礼仪之邦”的美称。在我们的日常生活之中，礼仪 无处不在，如行走之礼、见面之礼、入座之礼、饮食之礼等等。某英语报 社正在举办“China's Traditional Manners”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写 一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 介绍你所熟知的中国传统礼仪（请至少介绍两种）； 2. 在今后的学习生活中，你将如何付诸行动（请列举两到三种做法）； 3. 呼吁大家从自身做起，弘扬中国传统礼仪文化。 19 注意： 1. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 20 China's Traditional Manners There are many customs and traditions in China. _________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ For example, when we meet someone for the first time, we should shake hands with him or her. We're expected to knock at the door before going into others' houses. Besides, when we eat dinner with other people, it's impolite to point at others with chopsticks. 21 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ In the future, firstly, I will take the traditions seriously. Secondly, I will follow these manners so that my behavior is in line with the standards of manners. Moreover, I will introduce Chinese manners to more people and spread traditional Chinese culture. Hope that everyone can start from themselves and stick to the spread of traditional Chinese manners and culture. 22 23 $$