Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.My favorite music/movie is... 2.If there is no music, our life won't be interesting. 3.I'm writing to tell you something about the movies I like. 4.Now let me introduce my favorite movie to you. 4 中间句 1.I love music that I can sing along with. 2.Some students prefer music that has great lyrics. 3.Listening to quiet music can help me relax and have a good dream. 4.I like watching documentary films because I can gain a lot of knowledge from them. 5.I love the cartoon because it makes me laugh when I watch it. Laughing for an hour is a good way to relax. 5 结尾句 1.In all, different people like different kinds of music. 2.The movie tells us that we should be brave and that is why I like this movie best. 3.I think this film is well worth seeing. I'm sure you can learn a lot from it. 6 俗语/谚语 1.Music is the eye of the ear. 音乐是耳朵的眼睛。 2.Music is the universal language of mankind. 音乐是全人类的共同语言。 3.Music is the medicine of the breaking heart. 音乐是医治心灵创伤的妙 药。 7 写作模板 Life would be boring without music. Different people enjoy different kinds of music. As for me, I like the music that can cheer me up and ____（歌名） is my favorite song. The song tells us that ____（歌曲内容）. The reason why I like it is that ____（原因）. Each time I feel down, I will listen to the song which reminds me ____（感悟）. This is my favorite song that ____（评价）. Let's turn on the player and enjoy ourselves in the music world. 8 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 9 学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动，请以“My Favorite Music”为题介 绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。内容包括： 1. 你最喜欢的音乐类型（列举一至两种）； 2. 你最喜欢这种音乐的原因； 3. 这种音乐带给你的感受、对你的帮助和影响。 10 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：country music乡村音乐；pop music流行音乐；rock and roll摇 滚音乐；classical music古典音乐；hip hop说唱音乐 My Favorite Music I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do.____ 11 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：介绍自己最喜欢的音乐用第1.____人称，介绍音乐的作用及魅 力用第2.____人称；介绍最喜欢的音乐及其原因是客观事实，应用 3.__________时。 一 三 一般现在 12 二、初拟提纲： 13 高分范文 My Favorite Music I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally speaking, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, rock and roll and classical music. But my favorite music is classical music. For some people, they find classical music boring. However, I think classical music is beautiful and it can make me inspired. Every time I feel upset or nervous, classical music helps me calm down. 14 Besides, it makes my life more colorful and gives me a lot of entertainment. Most importantly, it makes me relaxed. I'd like to share this kind of music with my mother. The reason is that she is a music lover. She is busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classical music after she gets back home, she will feel more relaxed. In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music. 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 16 一、句子扩写与升格 1. This movie is exciting. I would like to watch it a second time. （用so... that... 升格句子） _______________________________________________________________ This movie is so exciting that I would like to watch it a second time. 2. They like pop music and traditional Chinese music.（用not only... but also... 升格句子） _______________________________________________________________ They not only like pop music, but also like traditional Chinese music. 3. Listening to the conversations in English movies is very useful. （用It is+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.升格句子） ________________________________________________________________ It is very useful for me to listen to the conversations in English movies. 17 4. Children have no time to enjoy the beauty of music and art. （用too…to…扩写句子） ________________________________________________________________ ______________ Children are too busy preparing for these exams to enjoy the beauty of music and art. 18 二、书面表达 假如你是李华，你的笔友Lucy写邮件询问你是如何通过选择合适的音 乐和电影来缓解学习压力的。请根据表格内容，写一封邮件给她。 听音乐 在上学前和放学后经常听一些音乐令自己放松；喜欢听歌 词优美的歌曲 看电影 在周末看一些有意义的电影 19 写作要求： 1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息； 2. 结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯； 3. 文中不得透漏个人信息； 4. 词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 20 Dear Lucy, How are you these days? _____________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ I'm writing to tell you how I deal with study pressure by choosing suitable music and movies. To relax, I often listen to music before and after school. It helps me feel calm. I really enjoy songs with nice lyrics. On weekends, I watch movies that are meaningful. They are not just fun, but also helpful in improving my thinking ability. 21 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Music and movies are great things to take my mind off something unpleasant to make me happy. They help me forget the stress and focus on positive things. I hope these tips can help you too. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. 22 23 $$