Unit 6 When was it invented 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 6 When was it invented? 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.I'd like to introduce my new invention to you. 2.There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. 4 中间句 1.It was invented in 1973 by Martin Cooper in the United States. 2.We can use it to make phone calls, chat and look up information. 3.For students learning English, they can also use it to look up new words and practice listening. 4.The schoolbag is small, about as big as an English book. 5.It can not only hold books, but also be used to communicate with people. 6.It can protect the environment because it uses solar energy. 7.It can help us sweep the floor, sort garbage, and take care of the house. 5 结尾句 1.I hope more inventions can appear in our life and more people will be interested in inventing things. 2.I hope you will like my invention. Thank you. 6 写作模板 Inventions are very important in our life（用一句话点明发明的重要 性）. My favorite invention is ___ （发明名称）, which was invented by ___ in ___ （发明者和发明时间）. 7 As we all know, ___ is one of the most important inventions （发明的重要地位）. It is made of/from ___ （制作材质）. It looks like ___ （样子）. When it is ___ , it will ___ （它的使用方法）. In my opinion, I hope ___ can help us in these ways（用途）.On one hand, ___ . On the other hand, ___（具体介绍两种用途）. With the help of ___ , people can ___ （继续介绍用途）. Thanks to the invention of ___ , it has made our life ___ （对发明的看法或感受）. 8 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 9 发明改变了世界，改变了人们的生活。因为各种各样的发明，我们的 生活变得越来越舒适与便捷。请你以“Invention and Life”为题写一篇短文， 介绍一个你熟悉而且一直在使用的发明物。内容包括： 1. 这个发明物是什么？ 2. 这个发明物的用途和影响是什么？ 3. 你的看法是什么？ 10 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Invention and Life Hello, everyone! It gives me great pleasure to stand here to introduce________________________________________________________ 11 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：介绍发明物的材质和功能应用第1.____人称，自己的看法应用 第一人称；介绍发明物的时间、发明过程用2.__________时，发明物的影 响用一般现在时，自己的看法应用一般现在时。 三 一般过去 12 二、初拟提纲： 13 参考范文 Invention and Life Hello, everyone! It gives me great pleasure to stand here to introduce the great Chinese invention—papermaking to you. As we all know, papermaking is one of the four most important inventions in ancient China. It was invented in the Western Han Dynasty by Cai Lun. After he had done many experiments, Cai Lun made paper with bark, ropes, rags and so on. It is a great contribution to the world. 14 Nowadays, paper is very useful in our work, study and daily life. We can use it to write, paint, print books and so on. The invention of papermaking promoted the spread of culture and the progress of world civilization. At the same time, it is also one of China's great contributions to world civilization. Thanks to the invention of papermaking, it has made our life more colorful. 15 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 16 一、句子扩写与升格 1. The robot was invented by one of the students. It has attracted many people's attention.（用定语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________________ _________________ The robot that was invented by one of the students has attracted many people's attention. 2. I want to have a robot at my home.（用to do不定式扩写句子，补充 说明机器人的功能） ______________________________________________________________ I want to have a robot at my home to help me do some housework. 17 3. We have problems in doing homework. It will tell us how to solve them.（用when引导的时间状语从句升格句子） _____________________________________________________________ ____________ When we have problems in doing homework, it will tell us how to solve them. 18 二、书面表达 科学需要梦想，发明贵在创新。所有社会的发展和进步都是靠发明创造所 带来的。假如你是一名发明家，你想要发明出什么物品呢？请你以“I Want to Invent a/an _________ ”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括： 19 1. 这个发明物是什么; 2. 你想发明此物的原因； 3. 这个发明物的功能（至少2个）。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 20 I Want to Invent a ___________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Pair of Super Shoes Many of us may have to throw away our shoes when they are too small for our feet. This is a great waste. And those shoes are also bad for the environment. If I could invent a kind of super shoes, there would be no such waste. 21 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet. In addition, if the shoes are dirty, they will start the automatic cleaning function between 12:00 a.m. and 3:00 a.m., and it will dry itself. These shoes not only can help us save some time for cleaning, but also are environmentally friendly. The most important thing is that the shoes are cheap. 22 23 $$