Unit 5 What are the shirts made of 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 5 What are the shirts made of? 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is paper cutting. 2.Now, let me introduce the special traditional art form of China in my hometown to you. 4 中间句 1.Paper cutting is a beautiful and special form of Chinese traditional art. 2.The most common pictures are flowers, animals, and things about Chinese history. 3.They are put on windows, doors and walls during the Spring Festival. 4.We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it in our houses. 5.If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. 5 结尾句 1.Paper cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people should be proud of. And I want to spread it to others. 2.We should spread it more to make more people like it. 6 写作模板 My Favorite Chinese Traditional Art My favorite Chinese traditional art is ____（传统工艺名称）. It's one of the most important art forms in Chinese traditional culture. ____ is also very popular around the world. It has a long history. （工艺的中国地位和世界地位，历史悠久）. The reason why I love it is ____（喜欢这个工艺的理由，可介绍两点）. ____ are used to ____ （工艺的用途，可介绍两方面）. I hope more and more people will pay attention to ____（希望人们 关注这项工艺）. 7 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 8 假如你叫李明，你打算向某学校英文网站投稿，分享你喜欢的一种中 国传统艺术，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，以“My Favorite Chinese Traditional Art”为题，用英文写一篇短文。 9 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Chinese Traditional Art I want to share my favorite Chinese traditional art with you. ________________________________________________________________ 10 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：介绍自己喜欢的传统艺术与原因应用第一和第三人称，这项传 统艺术的基本信息应用第1.____人称；介绍自己喜欢的传统艺术与原因应 用一般现在时，介绍这项传统艺术的基本信息应用2.__________时，如果 涉及相关历史，可用一般过去时；呼吁人们热爱并传承传统艺术，应用一 般现在时或一般将来时。 三 一般现在 11 二、初拟提纲： 12 参考范文 My Favorite Chinese Traditional Art I want to share my favorite Chinese traditional art with you. It is named sky lanterns. They are made of bamboo and covered with paper. When the lanterns are lit, they will slowly rise into the air. 13 Here are the reasons why I love sky lanterns so much. First, when sky lanterns rise into the sky, they look like small hot-air balloons and they look so beautiful. Second, they were first used by Zhuge Kongming who I admire. Third, they were used to ask for help and now are used at festivals and other celebrations. They are symbols of happiness and good wishes. All in all, I hope everyone can love this Chinese traditional art and pass it down. 14 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 15 一、句子扩写与升格 1. Paper cutting is an amazing art. I want to learn it.（用such…that…升 格句子） ______________________________________________________ Paper cutting is such an amazing art that I want to learn it. 2. I like paper cutting. It shows beauty, love and family in life. （用because引导的原因状语从句升格句子） ______________________________________________________________ I like paper cutting because it shows beauty, love and family in life. 3. It's a kind of folk art in China.（用with结构补充说明这种民间艺术的 历史悠久） ________________________________________________________________ It's a kind of folk art in China, with a history of more than 1,500 years. 16 二、书面表达 越来越多的中国元素走向世界舞台，彰显中国力量。中国元素包罗万象， 从有形的物质符号到无形的精神内容，如风筝、剪纸等民俗艺术，《愚公 移山》，《大闹天宫》等传统故事……请选择你喜欢的一种中国元素，分 享中国传统文化。 内容包括： 1. 你喜欢的中国元素及原因； 2. 相关历史或传说； 3. 感想或启示。 17 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 18 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ There are many Chinese stories that I can share with you. Yu Gong Moves the Mountains is my favorite Chinese story. I like it because Yu Gong is a hard-working man. Yu Gong lived near two mountains—Wang wu Mountain and Taihang Mountain. One day, Yu Gong decided to move the mountains. Everyone thought it was impossible. Some people thought Yu Gong was a fool for even trying to move them. But Yu Gong tried his best and never gave up. In the end, Yu Gong succeeded． My Favorite Chinese Story 19 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ I think we can learn something from this story. As the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” No matter how hard things will get, we should always try our best and never give up. 20 21 $$