Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark 第6课时 单元写作指导-【众相原创】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(人教版 广西专版)

九年级 RJ 1 Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 一阶 素材积累 二阶 典例探究 三阶 写作训练 2 第六课时 单元写作指导 一阶 素材积累 3 开头句 1.Time passed quickly. I've changed a lot with the time going. 2.We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. 4 中间句 1.I used to be thin and short, but now I am tall and strong. 2.In the past, I liked playing computer games. Now, I like doing sports in my free time. 3.I used to be afraid of speaking English, but now I like making speeches in public. 4.When I was in Grade 8, I got up very late in the morning, but now I have to get up early to go to school. I never arrive late for school. 5 结尾句 1.What a big change I have made! I believe I will be better and better in the future. 2.Seeing my changes, I'm so happy and more confident in myself. 6 写作模板 How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot. My biggest change is ____（最大的变化是什么）. In the old days, I ____（过去的外貌/性格/学习方式）. But now I ____（现在的变化）. With the help of ____, I ____（在某人的帮助下， 我是如何有这种变化的）. At first, I felt ____（刚开始的感受）. Then I found ____（发现了这种变化带来的好处）. So I am used to ____ （养成了什么习惯）. I think we should change our bad habits and be better and better. （对这种变化的积极态度） 7 第六课时 单元写作指导 二阶 典例探究 8 在三年的初中生活中，你肯定发生了很大的变化。请以“The Most Important Change for Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你这三年中最 重要的变化。内容包括： 1. 你觉得自己最重要的变化是什么呢？ 2. 你为什么有这个变化？ 3. 你对这些变化有什么感受？ 9 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 The Most Important Change for Me _______________________________________________________________ 10 写作点拨 一、 仔细审题：介绍自己的变化用第1.____人称；介绍过去的事情，应用 2.__________时，介绍现在的事情，应用一般现在时。 一 一般过去 11 二、初拟提纲： 12 参考范文 The Most Important Change for Me Time goes by. Three years has passed. Of course I have changed a lot. Let me show you my changes. Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English study. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn't remember the words easily or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. 13 Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I have found a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class and take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. Now I like English so much that I read English novels every day. Seeing the great changes in my English study, how happy I am! 第六课时 单元写作指导 三阶 写作训练 15 一、句子扩写与升格 1. I used to be shy. I am outgoing and good at communicating with people now.（用合适的连词连接两个简单句） ________________________________________________________________ ____________ I used to be shy, but now I am outgoing and good at communicating with people. 2. I used to be unhealthy, but now I have a healthy life.（用for example 扩写句子） ________________________________________________________________ ___________ I used to be unhealthy, but now I have a healthy life. For example, I get up early. 16 3. I have made the greatest progress in the past two years. I have learned how to deal with my shyness.（用合适的连接词升格为表语从句） ________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________ The greatest progress I have made in the past two years is that I have learned how to deal with my shyness. 17 二、书面表达 好习惯是开启成功之门的金钥匙，某英文网站正在开展以“Good Habits”为 题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 你的好习惯是什么； 2. 你如何保持这个好习惯（以前是什么样的，现在的变化是什么）； 3. 因为这些改变你取得了哪些进步。 18 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：a good habit， keep doing， improve， progress 19 Good Habits As we all know, everyone has his or her own habits. ________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us in many ways. I think a good habit makes me better. I used to go to bed very late and I felt tired and sleepy the next day. I couldn't pay attention to what my teachers said. Later, my mother asked me to go to bed before 10 o'clock. And little by little, I have developed this habit. I go to bed early and get up early every day. Now I feel much better. My learning efficiency has improved, and I have also made great progress in my grades. 20 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ From my experience, I know having good habits is so important that I will develop more good habits. And good habits will also make me better and better. 22 $$