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自2022年9月秋季开学起，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。你所在的学校 向来有“劳动教育月”主题活动。今年，校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”征文活动。请结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。 内容要点提示: What you often do at home  What you have learned cook meals water flowers  develop life skills look after your younger brother/sister do the dishes  learn to be responsible   take out the rubbish ... ... 注意:1.表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用，可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等与你身份相关的信息;3.词数:80-120。标题已给出，不计入总词数。                                          A Helper at Home          I have always been a good helper at home.(点题) I can do a lot of housework at home,such as cooking meals, watering flowers, washing the dishes, looking after pets,taking out the rubbish and so on.However,I like watering flowers and looking after pets best(最喜欢的家务)         I think watering the flowers makes me feel relaxed.When all kinds of flowers are around me, I feel the beauty of nature. I think life is as beautiful as flowers.【高分句型】I also like to look after pets because animals are our friends. Sometimes they seem to understand what we say.They will bring a lot of fun to our life(介绍原因)       By doing housework, we not only improve our life skills, but also improve our sense of responsibility.【高分句型二】It also helps us understand the idea of fairness(做家务让我们学到什么) 中小学生要学煮饭炖汤、种菜养禽、维修家电.……2022年4月教育部印发《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》,2022 年秋开学起劳动课正式成为中小学的“门独立课程。然而，“学生是否应该做家务”一直是引发人们关注与讨论的话题,对于这个问题不同的人有不同的看法。下周,你校将举行相关话题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示和要求完成一篇演讲稿参赛。 提示: Ideas Agree Disagree   Reasons 1.Learn to be independent; 1.Too busy to do housework; 2. Help us exercise; 2. Depend on parents; 3. Share housework. 3. It's a waste of time. 要求:1.语句通顺,条理清晰; 2.选取其中一种观点发表看法,可适当发挥; 3.不少于90词(标题及开头已给出,不计入总词数)。                               Should Students Do Housework?       Should students do housework? Different people have different ideas about this question.        Some people think students should only pay attention to their study. There is no need for them to do housework. However, other people think students should help out with housework.    In my opinion, we should share housework with our parents.First, we can learn to be independent by doing housework, which can make us take good care of ourselves. Second, doing housework can help us exercise and it is good for our health. After all,we always sit too long. Third, our parents are tired after work.Sharing housework can improve our relationships with them.For example, we can help cook delicious food or clean the room. I think our parents will be pleased with us.            Let’s start to do housework now ! 一、自双减实施以来，中小学生的自主时间增加了，有效地管理好这些自主时间显得尤其重要。英语课上，老师组织了一次关于“Do Students Make Full Use of the Free Time after Double Reduction Policy?”的讨论。请你就表格中同学们的讨论结果并结合自己的个人观点向老师和同学做一个汇报。 Do Students Make Full Use of the Free Time after Double Reduction Policy? Some popular choices mentioned in the discussion: ◆ build our body                 ◆ be with our family ◆ sleep more ◆ play computer games ◆ … My choices and my opinion:  ◆ ...  Double Reduction Policy: 双减政策 注意：（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数80-100词；标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Do students make full use of time after Double Reduction Policy?      As students have more free time after the Double Reduction policy, it’s important for us to make full use of the time.The discussion shows different students have different choices. Some think we can do sports to build a strong body or read more books. Others feel happy to have more time to be with the families and friends. Some boys are excited because they can play computer games for a longer time.We are all glad that we can sleep more. For me, I’m happy to have some time to do something interesting such as joining a music club.      Anyway, I think having more free time is a good thing but we’d better think twice before we make a choice. We need time both for improving ourselves and relaxation. Let’s start planning and make full use of time! (116 words） 二、双减政策(“double reduction"policy)出台后,给我们初中生的生活和学习带来巨大变化，结合该政策和个人经历谈谈它对自己生活带来的变化以及该如何规划好学习与课余生活，并表达你的观点。 注意:(1)短文必须包括导图的所有要点,并适当发挥:(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名:(3)词数80-100;首句已给出,不计入总词数。 “double reduction" policy Past  have little time for hobbies/interests    ...   Now make good use of time at school    .... Future hopes add more colorful after-school activities ... My opinions: ...      It's really exciting news for me that the policy of double reduction has been carried out.      In the past , we had little time for interests and we were too busy to have fun with our friends and parents. But now, because of the policy our life has changed a lot. We can make good use of time at school and we go to bed earlier than before. What's more , we have spare time to do exercise and read books which we like. In the future we will have more colorful activities after school. We can also develop our new hobbies.       In my opinion, I can have more fun in my school life and more time to enjoy my spare time. 减”政策落地,各项举措跟进,反响强烈。上周你们班就“是否应该上晚自习”展开了热烈讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?请根据所提供的信息,以“Should We Have Evening Self-study?”为题,写一篇汇报短文在班队课上做总结。 同学观点及原因 赞成(75%)   1. 一起学习,效率高;   2.  ......   反对(25%)  1.时间过长,易疲劳;  2.... My opinions: 1.  ...   2. .... 注意:(1)短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (3)词数:80-100(汇报的首尾格式已给出,不计入总词数)参考词汇:efficient adj.效率高的                      Should We Have Evening Self-study?      Hi, everyone! Last week our class had a discussion about whether we should have evening self-study. Different students have different opinions.        Most students are for the idea. It is efficient to study at school with their classmates. They can ask teachers when they have problems in their study. However, some students consider it's not a good idea. They are afraid that students may get tired while staying at school for too long. They think some students may copy other students' homework.        In my opinion, I prefer to have evening self-study.I can finish my homework more quickly. When I get home, I can do something I like or go to bed early. It's both good for my study and health.       That's all. Thank you! 你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。  要求：（1）内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥； （2）书写认真，句子通顺；（3）词数：80词-120词左右。          Jack is my friend who likes playing computer games very much.He has a bad habit. He often sits in the same way for a long time without moving. As a result , he has a headache and a sore back . There is something wrong with his eyes.At the same time, he can’t sleep well so that he often feels tired every day.       In my opinion, it’s necessary for him to stop playing computer games and take breaks away from games. He is supposed to do more exercise ,such as playing basketball, running and swimming. What’s more , he should do eye exercises to relax his eyes. Last but not least,  he’d better go to bed early and get enough sleep.    If he follows my advice, he will be better soon. 假如你是Martin, 你的朋友Alice 给你写信,告诉你她身体不舒服，又不开心。请你给她一些建议。 Dear Alice,      I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. I want to give you some advice. I hope this will be helpful for you.     First of all , I think that healthy food is the key to good health. Therefore, you should have food including fresh vegetables and fruit instead of food high in fat and sugar. Doing more exercise is also necessary for us to build up our body. You can run, swim, play table tennis and so on. Besides, enough sleep is good for your health, which makes you full of energy and in a good mood. Last but not least, you should keep happy.      Follow my advice, I believe you will feel better soon. Best wishes to you.                                                                                                                                                              Yours,                                                                               Martin 假设你叫李华，你的美国朋友Sam在网上看到“中国龙年”被翻译为the Year of the Loong而不是the Year of the Dragon，对此他很困惑，来信向你求解。请你根据表格信息，给他回一封信。 内容要点 写作参考 Explain the reasons 1．Both created, not real animals 2．About “the Chinese Loong” ●be made up of some animals (a rabbit’s eyes, an ox’s ears, …); ●can fly and spray water from mouth (in Chinese mythology （神话）); ●often painted gold, friendly, … ●a symbol of good luck, … 3．About “the Western Dragon” ●body of a snake and the big wings of a bat; ●breathe fire; ●mostly painted in dark colors, … ●stand for evil （邪恶） … … Convey your wish … 注意：1．文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考供选择使用； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3．词数：100词左右； 4．正文首句已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi Sam, In your letter you say you are really puzzled why we Chinese people prefer to use “Loong” instead of “Dragon” in the translation.  Let me help you solve this puzzle. Although both the Chinese Loong and Western Dragon are created, not real animals on earth, they have quite different images. The Chinese Loong is made up of parts of some animals, such as a rabbit’s eyes and an ox’s ears. In Chinese mythology, it can fly and even spray water from its mouth to create rain. It is often painted gold and looks very friendly and adorable. To us Chinese people, the Loong is a symbol of good luck, happiness, success and wealth. The drag-on, on the other hand, has the body of a snake and the big wings of a bat. It breathes fire and is mostly painted in dark colors. It stands for evil and usually seems more of an enemy to humans. Therefore, the word “dragon” doesn’t match the cultural meaning of “long” in China. We prefer to say “Happy Loong Year”. I hope my explanation will be  helpful.   Wish you all good luck in the Year of the Loong!                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours,                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua 随着“双减”政策的实施,同学们有更多的时间参加综合实践活动,全面提高自己各方面的能力(如阅读、运动、烹饪、救护方法…...),请结合自身经历,根据写作要求写一篇英语短文。       As we all know, skills are necessary for us teenagers. Good skills can always help us grow up. As for me, cooking helps me a lot in my daily life.Now let me tell you about it. First, cooking is a basic skill. It helps me to find the pleasure to create my own dishes so that I can enjoy myself better. In addition, I also learn the importance of food. So I won't Waste it. Finally, I understand that my parents love me so much that they will do all hard work to make me happy. I can get on well with my parents now.  All in all, in order to develop my cooking skill, I will work harder. Maybe one day I can make other people feel happy through my dishes. "双减"政策实施后,学生们的业余时间更多了。你是如何利用你的业余时间的呢?请你结合下面提示信息，以"How to make our free time more meaningful"为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。 提示词：housework,reading,do exercise ...                      How to make our free time more meaningful     As we all know, nowadays we have more free time than before because of the"double reduction" policy. But how can we make our free time more meaningful? Here are my suggestions. Firstly, we should help our parents do housework so that they can have a rest after a day's hard work. We can also develop life skills such as washing clothes, cooking and so on. Secondly, we are supposed to read more because reading makes a man wise. We can learn a lot from it. Thirdly, we can do more exercise. That is because exercise helps us keep healthy and keeps our spirits up. Last but not least, we can do something meaningful, including volunteering in our community or visiting the old people's home.        All in all,let's make full use of our free time and be a better person. 同学们参加过各种各样的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一个你参加过的社团，谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。 提示词语：take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress 提示问题：What club did you join? What did you do in the club? What have you learned from the experience? 范文: I’m Li Hua. There are many clubs in our school. I had the chance to be a part of our basketball club.  In this club, we used to practice playing basketball from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams.Whether we won or failed, we learned a lot. During the three years, my skill of playing basketball has improved a lot. And I also made a lot of friends. Playing basketball not only helps me keep healthy, but also helps me understand the importance of teamwork. Joining the Basketball Club has been a meaningful journey of skill development and personal growth. I will keep playing and try to be good at it.  假设你是学校Cultural China社团的成员李平，你将作为社团代表在校英语文化节上介绍你所在的社团。请按照以下提示，撰写一篇发言稿，介绍社团活动以及你的收获。 Cultural China Greetings ... Activities Make paper cutting, Make traditional food, ... Gains ... 注意：(1)发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节： (2)活动至少三项： (3)词数：90-100。 Hello, everyone! I'm Li Ping, a member of Cultural China Club. I'm here to introduce my club to you. If you are a Chinese culture lover, our club is a great choice. Many interesting activities are offered here. You can learn how to make beautiful paper cutting that is usually regarded as a symbol of good luck. Also, you can try making traditional Chinese food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. What's more, you can experience the beauty of clay art here. The club activities have helped me a lot. I have not only learned lots of skills, but also made many friends here. If you are interested, we are looking forward to having you in the club! 假如你是李平，来自扬帆中学。 你想去敬老院当志愿者，请你写一封信表达你的请求。 Dear Sir or Madam,           I’m Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School. I’m writing to you about volunteering in your old people’s home.（写作目的）       I would like to stay with old people. I’m in good health and I’m very strong, so I can look after them well. I’m kind and outgoing, so I can get on well with them.（健康状况及性格）I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people’s home because I’m good with old people. I’m good at telling stories and jokes. I’m strong in giving performances. I can wash the dishes and clean rooms and so on. I can use different ways to cheer them up. （能力）         I’m free to be a volunteer on weekends and during the holidays, so I think I am right for this job. Can you give me a chance?                                                        Yours ,                                                                                                                                    Li Ping 假如你叫王林，暑假即将来临，你们学校计划组织子公益活动。下面的表格是学校安排的两项活动，请根据自己的特长选择其中一项，用英语给活动负责人刘老师写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，提出申请。 Activities What to do When Old people’s home visit Cheer them up, clean up house and read, sing and dance for them Every Tuesday morning Children's after-school program Teach them to read, draw pictures and play with them Every Friday afternoon 提示：1.你想参加哪项活动；2.你为什么想参加此项活动；3.你打算如何做好此项活动。  Dear Mr. Liu,     I am Wang Lin.I read your notice yesterday. I am really interested in the activity "old people's home visit".      Old people need our help, because their sons or daughters don't stay with them. They sometimes feel lonely and sad.Some of them are so old that they can't look after themselves well. So we should help them.I'll try my best to help them.I'll go there every Tuesday morning and won't be late.I’ll clean up their house. What’s more, I’ll sing and dance to cheer up the old people because I am good at singing and dancing.      I hope I can get the chance.I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Wang Lin 5 月 21 日是“国际茶日”。中国是茶文化起源地，底蕴深厚。你知道有关茶的故事吗？你知道茶是怎么制作的吗？你知道我国有哪些名茶吗？请你根据以下表格内容写一篇介绍短文。 History :   discover,  Shen Nong, about 5,000 years ago ;  tea leaves, produce  Development : First bring to Korea and Japan in the 6th century; First appear in England around 1660 The production process(制作过程):   pick by hand;  send for processing ;  pack for sale Kinds:  Green tea, black tea,  white tea and so on Effects(功效):  ... Your opinion:  ... 写作要求：1.短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;  3.词数:80-120。         Tea is one of the most widely known drinks around the world. According to the legend,tea was discovered by Shen Nong by accident about 5,000 years ago. A nice smell was produced when the tea leaves dropped into the hot water. It was first brought to Korea and Japan in the 6th century. And it first appeared in England around 1660.      As for the production process, tea leaves are picked by hand from tea trees, and then they are sent for processing in the factories. After that tea is packed in bags for sale in shops. There are different kinds, like green tea, black tea, white tea and so on. They are all good for people’s health.       I like tea. Drinking tea can make me feel relaxed and pleased. 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom给你发来邮件，谈到了感恩母校这话题，请你根据内邮件内容给Tom回复。 Dear Li hua,    How time flies! We will  graduate from junior high school in less than half a year. Looking back on the  past few years, what do  you think of your junior school life?Who do you most want to thank ? I  wonder if you could share a story or two with me . And what are your best wishes to your mother school.      I'm looking forward to your reply.                       yours,                         Tom Dear Tom,         I'm so glad to hear from you. Yeah ,how time flies!      Looking back on the past few years, I think it has been a wonderful journey with all my teachers and classmates, full of laughter and tears.          Firstly, I want to express my thanks to my dear teachers. With their help, I have overcome one difficulty after another in study. Secondly , I want to thank my classmates. I remember breaking my leg in Grade Eight. My classmates took turns looking after me at school and helping me with my study.Thanks to my classmates, I go through that hard time without difficulty. Finally, I want to send my best wishes to my mother school. I hope my mother school will be better and better.      So much for now.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.                                                                                  Yours,                                                                                Li hua 回顾初中三年，有许多人和事令人难忘。校英语报 Have Your Say 栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文，请你根据以下表格内容分享你难忘的初中生活。 Special memories of my junior high school The most meaningful experience take part in an environmental project … The most embarrassing moment wear wrong clothes at a party … The most educational class learn…  from an English class  about The Shirt of a Happy Man … … 【分析】这是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格内容分享难忘的初中生活。写作内容包括最难忘的经历、最尴尬的时刻以及最有教育意义的一节课等。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。     Looking back on the past three years, I have many special memories of my junior high school.      First, I remember taking part in an environmental project. It is the most meaningful experience because I think our small actions can lead to big changes. Besides, I also remember wearing wrong clothes at a costume party. I was the only person wearing a costume so I was really embarrassed. And as for the most educational class, I learnt what the spirit of happiness was from an English class about The Shirt of a Happy Man. Lastly, Mr. Hunt is the best teacher in my heart. He was always patient with me in the math class. He helped me to work out the answers myself no matter how difficult they were.      I can't believe how fast the time went by! 假如你是李平，来自扬帆中学。 你想去敬老院当志愿者，请你写一封信表达你的请求。 Dear Sir or Madam,           I’m Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School. I’m writing to you about volunteering in your old people’s home.（写作目的）       I would like to stay with old people. I’m in good health and I’m very strong, so I can look after them well. I’m kind and outgoing, so I can get on well with them.（健康状况及性格）I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people’s home because I’m good with old people. I’m good at telling stories and jokes. I’m strong in giving performances. I can wash the dishes and clean rooms and so on. I can use different ways to cheer them up. （能力）         I’m free to be a volunteer on weekends and during the holidays, so I think I am right for this job. Can you give me a chance?                                                        Yours ,                                                                                                                                    Li Ping 假如你叫王林，暑假即将来临，你们学校计划组织子公益活动。下面的表格是学校安排的两项活动，请根据自己的特长选择其中一项，用英语给活动负责人刘老师写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，提出申请。 Activities What to do When Old people’s home visit Cheer them up, clean up house and read, sing and dance for them Every Tuesday morning Children's after-school program Teach them to read, draw pictures and play with them Every Friday afternoon 提示：1.你想参加哪项活动；2.你为什么想参加此项活动；3.你打算如何做好此项活动。  Dear Mr. Liu,     I am Wang Lin.I read your notice yesterday. I am really interested in the activity "old people's home visit".      Old people need our help, because their sons or daughters don't stay with them. They sometimes feel lonely and sad.Some of them are so old that they can't look after themselves well. So we should help them.I'll try my best to help them.I'll go there every Tuesday morning and won't be late.I’ll clean up their house. What’s more, I’ll sing and dance to cheer up the old people because I am good at singing and dancing.      I hope I can get the chance.I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Wang Lin 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$