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人教版(2019)选择性必修四
Unit 3 Sea Exploration
Using Language (Reading for Writing)
Express your opinions on sea exploration
Should the sea be explored?
predict potential disasters
discover new species
detect energy resources
plastic waste
overfishing
oil leaking
What are the advantages and disadvantages of sea exploration?
Lead-in
Skim the passage(P32) and finish exercises.(pause here for about 5mins)
What is the text type of the two passages?
Narration(记叙文)
Practical writing(应用文)
Expository writing(说明文)
Argumentative essay(议论文)
2. What is the purpose of the essay?
To inform
To persuade
To entertain
To identify
Scan for argument/opinion/point
opposed
supportive
Scan for argument/opinion/point
Can you read the author’s emotion?
Present perfect tense
Simple future
Deep concern
Tip 1: adopting different tenses to show emotions
1
2
3
evidence
+
explanation
Scan for evidence
How does the author explain the evidence to be persuasive?
point
Scan for explanation
Tip 1: To be persuasive, we can present eye-catching/
impressive/alarming data and some hard facts(铁铮铮的事实)
Scan for explanation
Tip 2: To be persuasive, we can explain the cause and effect with signal words.
negative/vicious circle
Because of / on account of/ due to/ owing to….
…., causing/ leading to/ contributing to/ accounting for/
giving rise to…
Scan for explanation
Tip 3: To be persuasive, we can give examples and select words of strong emotions.
Murder the intelligent creatures without mercy
残忍地杀害这些生灵
link
evidence
+
explanation
How does the author call back to his point?
point
Tip 4: To be persuasive, we can make contrast to highlight our point.
PEEL method
Reading --Text 1
Argument
Evidence
Restatement
Sea exploration has caused many problems
pollution
damaging mining
overfishing
Do protect the ocean!
Argumentative essay
Structure
Content
Language
writing methods
Find out the arguments and evidence.
1. facts
2. figures
3. examples
4. cause& effect
choice of words/ sentence patterns
linking words
also, another, ...
“so-called” research”, “murder”, “if..., ...”
summary
Write an outline with PEEL
Checklist
□ Is there a clear point?
□ Are there supporting facts and examples?
□ Are the facts and examples convincing and persuasive?
□ Is the explanation relevant and understandable?
□ Are there linking words connecting two points?
Assignment
Write your draft and exchange it with a partner and use the checklist to help each other revise the drafts.
Thank you !
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