内容正文:
Unit 3 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?
单元主题写作
鲁教五四版 八年级上
一、话题分析
本单元谈论的话题是过去某个时间你在做什么。通过本单元的学习,同学们要掌握必要的语言知识,以便能熟练地表达过去某个时刻正在发生的事情,并能够在一些突发事件发生时,做一些有益于别人的事。
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二、 写作方法
“4W1H 法”写过去正在发生的事情类作文
1. who:故事主人公。
2. when:事件发生的时间。
3. w here:事件发生的地点。
4. what:事件的内容。
5. how:对事件的感想、观点。
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三、素材积累
(一)写过去正在发生的事情类作文常用词汇:
at that time // last night // just then // yesterday morning // from eight to ten last night...
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(二)写过去正在发生的事情类作文常用句型:
开头句
1. I’d like to share a story with you.
2. When/While I was ...
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(二)写过去正在发生的事情类作文常用句型:
开头句
1. I’d like to share a story with you.
2. When/While I was ...
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中间句
1. One day ...
2. When my classmate Wang Hong saw it ...
3. When I heard the news ...
结尾句
1. Thanks to ...
2. Do you have a story to tell me?
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中间句
1. One day ...
2. When my classmate Wang Hong saw it ...
3. When I heard the news ...
结尾句
1. Thanks to ...
2. Do you have a story to tell me?
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四、写作任务
假如你是李华,请你给美国笔友David 写一封信,讲述你同班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事,并谈谈感受。
1. 上周五,一棵树被大风吹倒,挡住了道路;
2 . 王红看到后,捡起地上的树枝,又去移动树干;
3. 树干太沉,她搬不动;
4. 人们过来帮忙;
5. 你认为……
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四、写作任务
假如你是李华,请你给美国笔友David 写一封信,讲述你同班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事,并谈谈感受。
1. 上周五,一棵树被大风吹倒,挡住了道路;
2 . 王红看到后,捡起地上的树枝,又去移动树干;
3. 树干太沉,她搬不动;
4. 人们过来帮忙;
5. 你认为……
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参考词汇:
被吹倒 be blown down;挡住block;树枝branch;
树干trunk
要求:
1. 词数:80~100;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
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参考词汇:
被吹倒 be blown down;挡住block;树枝branch;
树干trunk
要求:
1. 词数:80~100;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
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when Last Friday
who Wang Hong
where on the way home
what Wang Hong picked up the branches on the road ...
how People all spoke highly of Wang Hong.
【写作模板】
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when Last Friday
who Wang Hong
where on the way home
what Wang Hong picked up the branches on the road ...
how People all spoke highly of Wang Hong.
【写作模板】
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【高分作文】
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, __________________________________
_________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell me? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【高分作文】
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, __________________________________
_________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell me? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on the way home, a tree was blown down by a strong wind, blocking the road. When my classmate Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and moved the trunk. But the trunk was too heavy for her to move. At that time, more people came to help her. Finally, the road was cleared.
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Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on the way home, a tree was blown down by a strong wind, blocking the road. When my classmate Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and moved the trunk. But the trunk was too heavy for her to move. At that time, more people came to help her. Finally, the road was cleared.
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People all spoke highly of Wang Hong, saying that she was a good student. But Wang Hong said that she just did a little thing she should do.
As a middle school student, we should try our best to do some meaningful things.
Do you have a story to tell me? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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People all spoke highly of Wang Hong, saying that she was a good student. But Wang Hong said that she just did a little thing she should do.
As a middle school student, we should try our best to do some meaningful things.
Do you have a story to tell me? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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