内容正文:
2024年中考英语写作热点话题
自然保护课件
素养解读:
大自然是我们的家,动物在一定程度上是我们的家人和朋友。它们和人类一样,都是地球上的生命,都有生存的权力!作为新时代的青少年,更应该心里有爱,尊重生命、尊重自然。
考点分析:
自然保护类文章多以议论文或应用文(倡议书、演讲稿等)为主。介绍的对象涉及动物保护和环境保护等,介绍的层面通常包括描述濒危动物的处境、分析濒危原因和保护方法、描述恶劣环境、分析环境恶化的原因,提出保护环境的建议,以及介绍垃圾分类的重要性、方法和倡议等。观点表达类作文通常会描述一种社会现象或问题,引导学生以“透过现象看本质”的眼光剖析深层含义,确定文章的中心论点,然后开始写作。题目通常会要求学生表达自己对这一社会现象所持观点,简单阐释理由,并通过解释、举例、数字等支持自己的观点,因此通常以议论文为主。
写 作 任 务
范文一① So did I. What Xu did makes me angry and upset. In my opinion, it is wrong to be cruel to animals. We should treat animals with kindness and do our best to protect them.
②As students, there are many ways that we can help animals. First, we
can help protect animals by volunteering at animal homes. We can feed them, walk them, and offer love to animals in need. Second, we can raise money for animal helpers. We can give money to groups that help animals. Third, we can call on people to protect animals. We can talk to our friends and family about the importance of treating animals kindly.
Xu’s story teaches us that it is wrong to be cruel to animals. We should
always treat them with kindness and care.
范文二
So did I. ① Can you imagine how angry and upset I was when reading the news? As far as I am concerned, human beings should treat animals kindly, like our family members, and protect them all the time.
As students, there are numerous ways in which we can contribute to the protection and welfare of animals. One way is to volunteer at animal shelters. By volunteering our time, we can provide much-needed care and attention to animals in need. We can feed them, walk them, and simply offer them love and companionship.
②Another way to help animals is to raise funds for animal welfare organizations. These organizations rely on donations to provide essential services to animals, such as veterinary care, shelter, and adoption services. By donating money or organizing fundraisers, we can help to ensure that these organizations have the resources they need to continue their important work.Finally, we can also raise awareness about the importance of treating animals with kindness and respect. We can talk to our friends and family about the issue, share information on social media, and support organizations that are working to protect animals.
③Xu's story is a serious reminder that animal cruelty is a serious problem. It is a reminder that we must all do our part to protect animals from harm. We should always treat animals with kindness and care.
译文
我也一样。读到这条新闻时,你能想象我有多愤怒和不安吗?在我看来,人类应该像对待我们的家人一样善待动物,并始终保护它们。
作为学生,我们可以通过多种方式为保护和改善动物福利做出贡献。
一种方法是在动物收容所做志愿者。通过贡献我们的时间,我们可以为有
需要的动物提供急需的照料和关注。我们可以喂它们,遛它们,并简单地
给它们爱和陪伴。帮助动物的另一种方法是为动物福利组织筹集资金。这些组织依靠捐款为动物提供基本服务,例如兽医护理、收容所和领养服务。通过捐款
或组织筹款活动,我们可以帮助确保这些组织拥有继续开展重要工作的
资源。最后,我们还可以提高人们对善待和尊重动物重要性的认识。我们可
以与朋友和家人讨论这个问题,在社交媒体上分享信息,并支持致力于保
护动物的组织。
徐某的故事是一个严肃的提醒,表明虐待动物是一个严重的问题。它
提醒我们,我们都必须尽自己的一份力量来保护动物免受伤害。我们应该
始终善待和关爱动物。
词汇积累welfare ['wɛlˌfɛr] n. 福利,幸福,福利事业
companionship [kəmˈpæniənˌʃɪp] n. 陪伴,友谊,同伴关系
fund [fʌnd] n. 基金,资金,款项
rely on [rɪˈlaɪ ɑːn] v. 依靠,信赖
donation [doʊˈneɪʃən] n. 捐赠,捐款
essential [ɪˈsɛnʃəl] adj. 必需的,重要的
veterinary [ˈvɛtərənəri] adj. 兽医的
shelter ['ʃɛltər] n. 庇护所,避难所
adoption [əˈdɑːpʃən] n. 收养
fundraiser ['fʌndreɪzər] n. 筹款活动,筹款人
awareness [əˈwɛrnəs] n. 意识,觉悟
issue ['ɪʃuː] n. 问题,议题
写作练习
青山如黛。绿水盈盈。从万里长江到九曲黄河,从东北平原到热带雨林,选择源于保护生态环境的初心,行动来自对美好家园的热爱。作为中学生,请你写一篇短文,谈谈你对环保的认识以及你的做法。提示:做法:列举至少生活中三件有关环保的小事;
要求:
1. 适当增加细节,语句通顺,语意连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、班级及校名;
As we know, we have only one Earth. Everyone can make a difference to the environment. So I always go to school by bike.
Protecting the environment begins with small things. We can save electricity by turning off the lights when we leave a room. We can reuse our own bags instead of buying plastic bags from supermarkets. We can choose to ride a bike, take a bus or walk to school, but not by taxi or car. It is also important for us to remind ourselves to throw the rubbish in the dustbin. All these small things could add up and become big things that could improve the environment.
If we can keep them a habit in our daily life, the earth will become a safer planet for us to live on.
[亮点词汇]
① make a difference to 对……产生影响 ② save electricity 节约用电
③ begins with 开始于…… ④ turning off the lights 关灯
⑤ instead of 而不是 ⑥ remind ourselves to... 提醒我们自己……
⑦ add up 积少成多
[高分句型]
① Protecting the environment begins with small things.(动词ing形式作主语)
② We can save electricity by turning off the lights when we leave a room.(when引导时间状语从句)
③ It is also important for us to remind ourselves to throw the rubbish in the dustbin.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
④ If we can keep them a habit in our daily life, the earth will become a safer planet for us to live on.(if引导条件状语从句)
一.目前的环境问题
1.Even the bottom of the river was full of rubbish
2.The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.
3.It has been a fact that the environmental problems aregetting increasingly serious.
4.The sky has been more and more heavily polluted4than before and I seldom see the blue sky.
二.如何保护环境
1.Everyone should play a part in saving the earth
2.To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus orsubway instead ofdriving.
3.Have you ever thought about how these things canactually be put to good use?
4.Nothing is a waste if you have a creative mind
5.Last but not least. we should use cloth bags instead ofplastic bags when shopping, which can cut down theland pollution.
6.For example, it's a good choice to put up somearticles with pictures in the community
三.保护环境的意义
1.So together, our actions can make a difference andlead to a better future!
2.It's good for health and it doesn't cost anything2.
3.Not only can the art bring happiness to others, but italso shows that even cold, hard iron can be broughtback to life with a little creativity.
4.Only in this way, can we have a harmonious city4
1I believe our actions can make a difference and leadto a be tter future.
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