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8下 U3 Could you please clean your room? Writing
【话题概述】
本单元话题以“家庭琐事与许可”展开,情境属于2022新课标“人与自我”主题范畴中的“做人与做事”这一主题群,涉及子主题“劳动实践,劳动品质与工匠精神”和“勤于动手,乐于实践,敢于创新”。该话题常见的写作类型有:描述自己做过的家务劳动,或介绍学生做家务的情况并表达自己的观点或看法,鼓励大家在日常生活中勤于动手,主动分担家务。
【写作任务】:
假设你是Tina, 是一名中学生。你看到《Sunday Magazine》最近正在做一项关于孩子在家是否需要做家务的调查。你想写一封电子邮件给这个杂志发表自己的看法,并阐述理由。要求:字数80-100词,至少写三点理由。
写作建议:(1)文章三段写作,第一段描述观点;(2)至少描述3点理由,理由能支撑观点;(3)理由之间是否有连接词连接。
议论文:OREO(奥利奥)
O:opinion观点 R:reason 理由(firstly,secondly,thirdly,what’s more.描述理由)
E:example (举例) O:opinion观点(总结观点)
【范文】:
Dear Sir or madam,
My name is Jenny, I’m a middle school student. I think it’s important for kids to learn how to do chores. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, Children these days depend on their parents too much.Doing chores can help to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. Secondly, as a member of the family, it's everyone's duty to do housework. Thirdly, doing housework can help to understand the idea of fairness. Everyone should do their part in keeping the environment clean and tidy. What’s more, doing chores is not difficult, so why not do some chores at home?
In a word, I think it’s necessary for us to do chores.
Yours
Jenny
【重点短语和句型】:
1. 一名中学生 a middle school student
2. 我认为 I think...
3. 做家务 do chores
4. 依靠 depend on
5. 发展孩子们的独立性 develop children’s independence
6. 照顾 look after/take care of
7. ....的一员 a member of
8. 理解公平的概念 understand the idea of fairness
9. 参与 do/play one’s part in
10. 做某事是重要的 It’s important to do sth
11. 学习怎样做某事 learn how to do sth
12. 帮助做某事 help to do sth
13. 教某人怎样做某事 teach sb how to do sth
14. 做某事是某人的责任 It’s one’s duty to do sth.
15. 为什么不做某事表建议 why not do sth
16. 做某事是必须的 It’s necessary to do sth
【中译英】:
我叫Jenny, 是一名中学生。我认为对孩子来说学会怎样做家务是很重要。这是我的理由。
My name is Jenny, I’m a middle school student. I think it’s important for kids to learn how to do chores. Here are my reasons.
首先,现在的孩子们过多地依赖父母。做家务可以帮助培养孩子们的独立性并教会他们怎样照顾自己。第二,作为家里的成员之一,做家务是每个人的职责。第三,做家务可以帮助他们理解公平的概念。每个人都应该对保持环境整洁干净尽自己的职责。并且,做家务并不难。为什么不在家里做些家务呢?
Firstly, Children these days depend on their parents too much.Doing chores can help to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. Secondly, as a member of the family, it's everyone's duty to do housework. Thirdly, doing housework can help to understand the idea of fairness. Everyone should do their part in keeping the environment clean and tidy. What’s more, doing chores is not difficult, so why not do some chores at home?
总之,我认为对我们来说做家务事是必须的。
In a word, I think it’s necessary for us to do chores.
【译文】:
我叫Jenny, 是一名中学生。我认为对孩子来说学会怎样做家务是很重要。这是我的理由。
首先,现在的孩子们过多地依赖父母。做家务可以帮助培养孩子们的独立性并教会他们怎样照顾自己。第二,作为家里的成员之一,做家务是每个人的职责。第三,做家务可以帮助他们理解公平的概念。每个人都应该对保持环境整洁干净尽自己的职责。并且,做家务并不难。为什么不在家里做些家务呢?
总之,我认为对我们来说做家务事是必须的。
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