内容正文:
Unit 5 Music
Reading for Writing
Made by Erin
relief
cure
talent
various
absorbed in
have an impact on
in addition to
satisfaction
Review
减轻或消除 n.
治愈、治疗 v.
天分、天赋 n.
各种各样的 adj.
被吸引住;
专心致志
对…有影响
除…以外
满意 n.
music therapy 音乐疗法
“Music is the medicine of the mind.”
音乐是心灵的良药
Lead-in
Has music ever had any impact on you?
Write a speech about how music affect you.
But how to write a speech?
Learn from the speech of Sarah Williams.
Learn to write a speech
高考作文类型之一:
写一篇演讲稿
To feel the language and intonation of the speech.
Listen to the speech
polite 有礼貌的
conniving 有说服力的
encouraging 鼓舞人心的
Reading
Find the main idea of each paragraph
Main idea
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
Para. 4
Paragraphs
Propose the topic — music has impact on Sarah
Her experiences with music —helped her recovered
Her feeling about music —gave he happiness
Her advice to readers
Reading
Read the speech and the questions
What was Sarah’s problem?
How did music help her during her difficult time?
What is her advice to others?
She had serious disease which was difficult to cure.
It made her feel much better.
And gave her happiness.
When we’re going through tough time, just somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of our life.
Reading
Study the aspects of the speech
greeting 问候
introduce 自我介绍
topic 引出话题
Personal anecdote 个人经历
Personal feeling 个人感受
Close the speech 结尾
Thank the audience 致谢
Reading
Study the language features
Learn some rhetorical devices(修辞手法).
Reading
quote
simile
metaphor
personification
repetition
rhetorical question
引用
明喻
重复
暗喻
反问、设问
拟人
I wandered lonely as a cloud.
Simile明喻
Hope is a good breakfast, but it is a bad supper.
Metaphor暗喻
The night gently lays her hand at our fevered heads.
Personification拟人
Shall we allow those untruths to go unanswered?
Rhetorical question反问、设问
Study the language features
Match the name of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.
修辞手法
quote
________
simile
________
rhetorical devices
metaphor
________
personification
________
repetition
________
rhetorical question
________
A
B
D
C
E
F
Reading
What expressions does Sarah use to talk about how music can make us feel? Circle the phrases in the speech.
Study the language features
Reading
Music gave me happiness.
Made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.
Gave me strength and brought me relief.
Was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.
Gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.
Spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.
Music made…like…
Music gave…
Music was…
Complementary
Study the expressions in speech writing
greeting 问候
introduce 自我介绍
topic 引出话题
Aspects of a speech
Expressions of a speech
Good morning!
My name is Li Hua / I’m Li Hua.
It’s an honour to be here and share with you …
It’s my honour to be here to deliver a speech about…
I feel honoured to deliver a speech about…
Complementary
Study the expressions in speech writing
main body
正文
Aspects of a speech
Expressions of a speech
描写音乐经历
Music made my…like…(明喻);
Music gave me…(拟人);
Music is…(暗喻);
…, which brought strength and belief to me(非限制性定语从句);
Not only can music…, but also it can…(并列句).
…, …, as well as…(并列句).
experiences
音乐体验
feeling
感受
一般过去时/现在完成时
Complementary
Study the expressions in speech writing
close the speech 结尾
thank the audience 致谢
Aspects of a speech
Expressions of a speech
Finally, I’d like to repeat what I mentioned above.
Finally, I’d like to attach the importance to … again.
I sincerely hope that…
Thank you for your listening.
To write a speech about how music can change a person.
1. Think of ways that people experience music, and how music can help people.
Writing
Ways people experience music
How music can help people
Singing,
Give encouragement,
Listening to a piece of music,
Share similar feelings; bring about happiness…
Play the piano/guitar/guqin,
Express feelings from heart; imagine a dream world; have fun
To write a speech about how music can change a person.
2. Think about your experience with music and how it has changed your life, or think about how the life of someone you know has been changed by his/her experience with music.
Writing
Get through your difficult time
Music experience od someone
To write a speech about how music can change a person.
3. Make an outline of your speech, and then write it.
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
Speech
greeting
问候
introduce
自我介绍
topic
引出话题
experiences with music
音乐体验
feeling
感受
close the speech
结尾
thank the audience
致谢
Writing
Possible version
(参考范文)
Good morning! My name is Li Hua. It’s my great honour to be here to deliver a speech about how music can change a person.
Over the past three years of my middle school days, I have been under great pressure from school performance. However, rap music saved me, which kept me away from anxiety and sorrow. As for me, not only can music make my heart like the free cloud, but also it can give me strength and belief in my daily life.
Finally, I would like to attach the importance to music again. Thank you for your listening.
Thank you
Music is the medicine of the mind.
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