内容正文:
continuation writing
—— emotional expression
通读文章定情节
画个圈圈定“人”“物”
“两个句子”定“走向”
情节不会“感情凑”
读后续写思路总结
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情感描写
情感描写:真挚+形象 提升语言层次
1. happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; cheerful, joyful
2. pleasant enjoyable cheerful
3. pleasure delight enjoyment joy happiness
4. to one’s delight/joy/happiness/pleasure be seized by
be wild with be overcome/overwhelmed with
feel a surge (强烈感情的迸发) of
5. laugh burst into laughter smile brightly grin at sb(grin from ear to ear) beam at dance/jump/leap with joy
light (sth) up wear a smile on... resist the urge to laugh
6. (one’s eyes) twinkle (one’s heart) beat/pound wildly
Write one or two sentences on
“Tom很高兴/激动”
1. Tom was extremely/more than delighted.
2. Tom was overwhelmed/wild/overcome with joy.
3. Tom laughed/burst into laughter/roared into laughter.
4. Tom jumped with joy.
5. Tom wore a big smile on his face.
6. Tom could hardly resist the urge to burst into laughter
1. Joy wells up inside Tom.
2. A wild excitement took hold of/seized Tom
3. Tom’s face lit up with delight.
4. Tom’s eyes twinkled with excitement.
5. Tom’s heart was pounding with wild joy
无灵主语句:将没有生命力的东西作主语,常搭配有灵动词使用 ,即把没有生命力的东西,赋予有生命力的动作,使语言更加生动化
1. 表示情感状态的抽象名词做主语
2. 表示身体部位和音容的名词作主语
1. Courage deserted Tom.
2. Anger chocked Tom’s words
3. Excitement seized Tom.
4. Laughter lingered(继续存留) around the room
5. Words failed Tom.
6. Tom’s throat tightened.
7. Tom’s knees felt weak.
8. Tom’s palms were sweating.
9. The blood rushed to Tom’s face.
10. A sudden shower killed the wind.
11. A heavy rain visited the city.
12. The thick fog blanketed the field.
无灵主语句情绪描写常用动词短语:
creep over (悄悄地降临)
steal over (悄悄地降临)
settle over (缓慢地降临)
come over (突然袭来)
sweep over (突然席卷)
wash over (涌上心头)
flood over (淹没)
overwhelm
well up in/inside
deprive sb of ...
1. Tom was extremely/more than delighted.
2. Tom was overwhelmed/wild/overcome with joy.
3. Tom laughed/burst into laughter/roar