unit 1 Writing——如何写建议信-【勤径学升】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册同步练测（人教版2019）

●高中英语·必修第一册 [活学活用] [归纳拓展] 单句语法填空 (1)(the)next time... 下次…时 ①The reason he failed the English each/every time.… 每次…明 exam was that he didn't learn it well. the first time... 第一次… 2Sorry,we are late.That's 上次…明 we were the last time... (2) the moment/the minute.the instant held up in the traffic jam. …就 immediately/instantly /directly We were held up in the traffic jam and that's He was a school teacher the first time I we are late. 一句多译 saw him. 今天早上他睡过头了，起床晚了，所以没有赶上 我第一次见到他的时候，他是一名学校老师。 火车。 Every/Each time I was in trouble,he would ④The reason come to help me out. he overslept and got up too late this morning. 每次我遇到麻领，他都会来帮我摆脱困境。 He overslept and got up too late this morning and The boy burst into tears immediately he saw his he missed the train. mother. He missed the train and 这个男孩一看到他的妈妈，就立刻哭了起来。 he overslept and got up too late this morning. [活学活用] 2.the next time引导时间状语从句 单句语法填空 (教材P2o)So the next time you feel like you do DHe became interested in the young teacher's lesson first time he attended his class. not want to do boring,difficult homework or go ②四 time I see the picture,I always to class,think about the children who don't think of the days we spent together. have the chance to get a good education.所以，下 3I found myself in an entirely new world 一次你不想完成烦人的、困难的作业或不想上课 moment I arrived here. 时，考虑一下那些没有机会获得良好教育的孩 单句写作 子们。 ④下次你见到你的父亲时，请代我向他致以最好 [句式剖析] 的问候。 the next time you feel like you do not want to do Give your father my best regards boring,difficult homework or go to class是由the next time引导的时间状语从句。 Writing 如何写建议信 语：签名。有时信头和信内地址可省略。 文体指导 2.建议要简明扼要，具有合理性和说服力。建议信要 建议信是应用文的一种，是写信人就某一问题 写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由 或事件提出看法、建议或忠告的一类书信。建议信 在阐述自己的建议时要目的明确，切中要害。对某 要写明写信的原因、建议的内容以及提出建议的理 一个或某些建议可适当发表自己的看法，但要适可 由。提出建议的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和 而止，不可漫无边际，暄宾夺主。另外要注意给出 缓：行文简明扼要，目的明确，具有说服力：人称为 的建议要有一定的价值，能够引起读者的兴趣和注 第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主。 意力，这样才能达到进一步交流并解决问题的 写好一封建议信应注意以下儿点： 日的 1.信文要素要齐全。建议信的信文通常有六个部 3.语气要中背，礼貌。应该首先背定对方的优点， 分：信头（发信人的地址和发信日期）：信内地址 然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出 (收信人姓名、职位、地址等)：称呼：正文：结束 具体建议或忠告。要考虑到收信人的感受，千万 44 UNIT 1 TEENAGE LIFE4 注意不要用说教的口气，也不能把你的想法强加 You have asked for my advice on...and I will try 于对方，应该用坦诚的态度提出建议，以理服人， to make some suggestions. 要让对方时刻感受到这是一种交流。 你问我有关…的事情，我会尽力提出一些 4.论述要逻辑分明、合情合理。要让对方考虑并接 建议。 受自己的建议，就要在说理的过程中尽量站在对 2.表达建议常用句式 方的角度客观地谈问题，努力做到逻辑分明、理 If I were you,I would.,如果我是你，我会 由充分、合情合理，只有这样才能让对方接受你 I would like to suggest that.…我想建议… 的建议。 It would seem to me that you could.. [基本框架] 我认为你可以… 建议信通常采用“三段式”结构： I think it would be more beneficial if you 第一段：表明写作意图，陈述事由： could... 第二段：围绕建议，展开说明，闸述理由和根 我想如果你能…，可能会更好 据，以及所提出的建议会给对方带来的好处： In my opinion,you should..在我看来，你应该 第三段：简单予以希望，希望收信人一定采纳自己的 In my experience,it seems that... 建议，并相信该建议会对对方有所帮助。 根据我的经验，似乎… [常用词语] I will be more than happy to see improvements l.deal with处理 in this regard. 2.share sth.with sh.和某人分享某物 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。 3.in some aspects在某些方面 3.建议信结尾常用句式 4.Internet互联网，因特网 Please let me know if I can help further. 5.network网络，网状系统 如果我能对你有进一步的帮助，请告知。 6.convenient便利的，方便的 I would be ready to discuss this matter to 7.with the popularity of the Internet若互联网 further details. 的普及 我时刻准备着就此事进行更详尽的讨论。 8.distract one's attention分散某人的注意力 I believe you will take my advice into account. 9.have a negative effect有负面影响 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 10.text message手机短信 I hope you will find these proposals,suggestions/ IL,keep a balanced diet保持均衡的饮食 recommendations practical useful helpful. 12.unhealthy eating habit不健康的饮食习惯 我希望这些建议/意见看法对你来说实用/有 13.unhealthy不健康的，不卫生的 用有帮助。 14.unfit不健康的 15.put on weight增加体重 典题示例 16.suffer from遭受，患上 假定你是李华，你的笔友王强最近沉迷于玩电 17.rather than而不是 脑游戏，这给他带来很多危害。请你给他写一封书 18.learn from sb.向某人学习 信，劝说他戒掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。内容 19.harmful有害的 包括： 2o.pressure压迫，压力 1.浪费了学习的时间： [常用语句] 2.对身心健康造成危害： 1.建议信开头常用句式 3.你的建议。 I am writing to express my views about... 注意：1.词数80左右： 我写信是要表达我对…的看法。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 45 ●高中英语·必修第一册 [审题谋篇] 8 You can read more good books,take more 明确体裁话题：建议信，电脑游戏的危害。 exercise or participate in some social activities 确定人称时态： 以第一、三人称及一般现在时为主。 你可以多读好书、多锻炼身体或参加一些社会活动 布局文章架构： 来开阔视野。 首段：点出写信的目的： [句式升级] 中段：说明电脑游戏的危害及建议： 1.用限制性定语从句合并句②与句③ 尾段：呼应首段 列出核心要点： 2.用非限制性定语从句合并句⑤与句⑥ 1.电脑游戏浪费学习的时间： 2.电脑游戏对身心健康造成危害： 妙笔成篇] 3.建议。 [词汇推敲] 1. 对…很人迷 玩电脑游戏 3 首先 4. 另外 5. 对…有害 6. 暴力 跟踪训练 2 心理健康 假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友 8. 挣脱：脱离 Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中还不 9. 参加，参与 能适应新环境，她不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而 10. 开阔某人视野 情绪低落。请你回信，内容如下： [遗词造句] 1,向Jenny表示问候和安慰： ①Hearing that you I felt 2.针对她的问题提出以下建议： very worried. (1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动： 听说你沉溺于电脑游戏，我很担心。 (2)遇到困推时，互相帮助： ② it will make you waste too much 3.你对友谊的理解。 valuable time. 注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节。 首先，它会使你浪费太多宝贵的时间。 The valuable time should 这些宝贵的时间应该花在学习上。 OIn addition,playing games for a long time especially to your eyes. 此外，长时间玩游戏会损害你的健康，尤其是对你 的眼睛。 ⑤Some games 有些游戏充满了暴力。 ⑥This will your mental health. 这对你的心理健康有害。 提示请完成《素能提升训练》训练六 DI strongly hope that you 请完成《素能提升训练》检测卷二 我非常希望你能摆脱它。 46time you see him 2. Travelling will not only help us to gain knowledge of Writing--如何写建议信 geography and history and other knowledge, but also 典题示例 will help us widen our eyes and keep healthy, making [词汇推敲] us less narrow-minded. Section T 1. be addicted to 2. play computer games 3. to begin Listening and Speaking & with 4. in addition 5. do harm to/be harmful to Reading and Thinking 6. violence 7. mental health 8. break away from 【基础认知 自主学习】 9. take part in/participate in 1o. broaden one's horizons I.重点单词--基础单词 [遣词造句] 1. rent 2. pack 3. source 4. flat 5. site 6. type ①are addicted to playing computer games ② To begin 7. flight 8. path 9. destination 10. package with ③be spent on your study ④will do harm to your 11. contact 12. civilisation 13. soldier 14. transport health are full of violence be harmful to car 15. hike break away from it ⑧to broaden your horizons 拓展单词 [句式升级] 1. apply 2. amazing amazed 3. arrangement 1. To begin with, it will make you waste too much valuable 4. extremely 5. narrow 6. powerful 7. official time which should be spent on your study. 8. recognise 9. admire 10. architect architecture 2. Some games are full of violence, which will be harmful II.重点短语 to your mental health. 1. for 2. for 3. around 4. to 5. for 6. through 7. of [妙笔成篇] 8. for 9. in 10. on 11. by 12. than 13. to 14. of 参考范文 15.up Dear Wang Qiang. III.阅读词汇 Hearing that you are addicted to playing computer 1.城堡;堡垒 2.签证 3.住处;停留处;腾宿 4.唯一 games, I felt very worried. 的;独特的;特有的 5.资料(或广告)手册 To begin with, it will make you waste too much IV.重点句型 valuable time which should be spent on your study. In 1. running along the coast addition, playing games for a long time will do harm to 2. It is for this reason that your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some 3. Especially amazing is games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your 4. so that mental health. Therefore, I strongly hope that you can break away 5. as you spend a day driving along the new highway 【语篇精读 合作探究】--整体理解 from it. The earlier, the better. You can read more good I. 1. the location, history and official language of Peru books, take more exercise or participate in some socia 2. the four tourist attractions of Peru activities to broaden your horizons. II.1-4 B D A D I hope the advice above will be helpful to you. III. 1. Located 2. powerful 3. the 4. was ruled 5. So Looking forward to your good news. Yours, 6. places 7. travelling 8. to 9. amazed 10. its Li Hua 【要点精研 讲练互动】-一核心词汇 1.活学活用①working ②to ③application 跟踪训练 ④to apply for the position [参考范文] 2.活学活用①amazed ②amazing Dear Jenny. ③To our amazement ④was amazed at I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after 3.活学活用①to drive ②to meet ③arrangements entering the high school. Your classmates are also facing ④ for have already made arrangements for the same problem, so you don't have to worry too much our vacation about it. 1 ②out of control 4.活学活用①under control ③lost There is something that you can do to change this control of ④in control of the company in the control situation. First, try to invite some of your classmates to of him take part in some activities together after school. This 5.活学活用①tobe will help you understand each other better by ②is recognised ③recognition ④ is recognised to be/as It is recognised that communicating with others. Then, help others when they 6.活学活用①than ②other ③is ④他考试又不及格。 are in trouble, and ask them to help you when you have difficulty. 依我看来,与其说他笨倒不如说他懒。 7.活学活用①for ②admiration ③admirable As far as I am concerned, life in senior high school is stressful. I believe you will make many new friends in the ④admire her for ②with ③make contact with 8.活学活用①in ④keep new school! Yours. in cortact Li Hua 重点句型 1.活学活用① that/who ②that ③It ④It was the UNIT2 TRAVELLING AROUND book that It was in this shop that It was 【美文欣赏·话题链接】--探究问题 yesterday that 1. Because they want to relax and enjoy their life. 2.活学活用①are ②sat a professor ③ Present at the