内容正文:
Unit 7 The Birthday Party
单元话题满分范文必背
1.假设你是Bob,上个星期天是你的生日,你6:30在家举行了生日聚会。你的一些朋友参加了你的生日聚会。请根据图片提示写一篇60字左右的短文记录当时的情景。
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【答案】例文
I am Bob. Yesterday was Sunday. It was my birthday. I had a birthday party at home. Some of my friends came to my party. They brought me some flowers and some other things. My mother bought a big cake for me. The party began at 6:30. At the party, Ann played the piano. Jenny danced. Kate sang a Chinese song. Tony performed Chinese Kungfu. We had a good time at the party.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文。
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示:文章为“第一人称”和“第三人称”,介绍自己的生日及朋友们在生日聚会上做的事情,图片描述清楚,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍,并生日聚会的时间、地点、人物;
第二步,具体介绍图片中的人物在聚会上做的事情;
第三步,总结大家都很开心。
[亮点词汇]
① buy sth. for sb.给某人买某物
② play the piano弹钢琴
③ perform表演
④ have a good time玩得高兴
[高分句型]
They brought me some flowers and some other things.(并列句)
2.某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动,请你根据下面的思维导图,用英文以“On My mother’s/father’s Birthday”为题目写一篇 70 词左右的记叙文投稿,内容为某次你为爸爸或妈妈庆祝生日的经历。
注意事项:1. 必须包含所提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
On My ________ Birthday
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