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经历感受
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经历感受就是把已经发生的事情叙述出来并加上个人的感想。常考的话题有参加某场活动的记录或某次经历的叙述。以一般过去时为主,按事情发展的先后顺序来进行讲述。通常包括三部分内容:
文体概述
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对事物的看法或个人感受
事情发生的时间和地点
开篇
正文
事情发生的经过和结果
结尾
经历感受
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1. Last weekend, I participated with…in…, which turned out to be fruitful and meaningful. 上周末,我与……一起参加了……,事实证明是富有成果和有意义的。
引入话题
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3. It was an unforgettable experience that happened during my first year in high school. 那是一段难忘的经历,发生在我高中的第一年。
2. I can never forget that afternoon in…, from which I’ve learnt that… 我永远不会忘记那个下午,从中我学会了……
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2. Once there was a… 从前,有一个……
说明事件
1. As soon as we…, what came into sight was/were… 我们一到达……,就看到了……
3. Early in the morning, we gathered at the school gate and went to that village by school bus. 一大早,我们在校门口集合,坐校车去了那个村庄。
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2. As long as we have the courage to face our failure and make up our mind to deal with it, we are actually winners
in life. 只要我们有勇气面对失败并且下决心去解决它,我们实际上是人生的赢家。
对事物的看法/个人感受
1. Through this activity, we have a better understanding of… 通过这次活动,我们可以更好地了解……
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4. From this experience, I realize that…, which not only…, but also… 从这次经历中,我意识到……,这不仅……,而且……
3. Therefore, we should…and make efforts to… 因此,我们应该……,并努力去……
5. Though tired and exhausted, we all regarded…as a good way of… 尽管疲惫不堪, 我们都认为……是……的一种好方法。
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例题精选
假定你是李华,上周末你和家人参观了附近的一个美丽村庄,请给你的交换生朋友Jim,写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 参观经历;
2. 参观感受。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
How are you going? [写信目的]I’m writing with delight to share with you my family tour to a nearby beautiful village last weekend.
[参观经历]Early summer is a great season for an outing to the countryside. Approaching that village①, all kinds of green plants and flowers