内容正文:
Unit 10
You're supposed to shake hands.
单元作文
目标:运用表示建议的句型介绍“礼仪、习俗”。
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【范文1】
假如你是苏敏,你的美国笔友Tina发来电子邮件,说她下周要来中国,但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少,于是向你寻求帮助,请你给她回一封电子邮件,告诉她有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况。
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提示:
1. 风俗习惯的不同:中国人第一次见面时握手;
2. 见面时谈论的内容:问候身体情况,不问工资、年龄等;
3. 餐桌礼仪的不同:我们用筷子就餐;就餐时不能用筷子指着别人;就餐时不可以多说话等。
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模板
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Dear Tina, I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to china next week(宾语从句). I hope to see you soon.
满分范文
回信开头
be+短暂性V“表示即将做某事”
As we all know(众所周知), different countries have different customs. So the manners in China are very different from those in your country. Let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
开篇引题:运用Let me tell you sth about句型
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First, we Chinese are supposed to shake hands when we meet for the first time. Then we greet each other. After that, you can talk about something relaxing. But you are not supposed to talk about someone’s salary, age and so on. Second, we use chopsticks to have meals while you use your forks at table(吃饭). Also, it’s bad manners to talk too much when you’re having meals.
形容词放在不定代词之后作后置定语
介绍中国的风俗习惯
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I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours, Su Min
省略that的宾语从句
表达愿望
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点评:1. 开头先表面写信的目的。2. 第二段引题:运用了As we all know短语,Different countries have different customs.Let me tell you something about...句型.3. 第三段主要介绍中国的风俗习惯和餐桌礼仪,运用了First、After that、Second、while、also等过渡词,使得句子更加连贯。也用到了be supposed to do sth、for the first time、and so on、It's bad manners to do sth等短语和句型。4. 最后一段表达愿望收尾。
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【范文2】
俗话说“入乡随俗”,因此去另一个国家前,先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据初中阶段所学到的关于英国的习俗和历史,写一篇文章,投稿到某英文版的旅游文化刊物。
写作要点:
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礼仪: ①第一次见面通常握手;②跟年长的人说话要用Mr.或Mrs..
饮食 在茶会(tea party)上只能喝茶,不喝咖啡或果汁。
城市 ①伦敦(London),约两千年的历史;②利物浦(Liverpool),在18世纪以工业闻名。
注意事项 在公共场合不要大声说话。......(请再列举1-2点)
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写作要求:1、词数90左右;2、短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3、文中需包括所有写作要点,