内容正文:
应用文写作(三)
a letter for advice建议信
【评分标准早知道】
一、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第六档
(13-15分) ——覆盖所有的内容要点,表达清楚、合理
——使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但完全不影响理解
——有效使用语句衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯,完全达到预期的写作目的
第五档
(10-12分) ——覆盖全部或大部分内容要点,表达清楚、合理
——使用了比较多样的、恰当的词语和语法结构
——比较有效的使用语句衔接手段,全文比较清晰,较连贯,达到了预期的写作目的
第四档
(7-9分) ——覆盖了部分写作要点,有个别的表达不够清楚合理
——使用简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当之处,但基本不影响理解
——基本有效的使用语句衔接手段
建议信简介
1.建议信是对某事提出建议和忠告。
2.建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
3.建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
Sample
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and feel confused about the Chinese customs, I’m writing to offer you some advice.
To begin with, I would like to suggest that you should arrive on time, because it is impolite to be late in Chinese traditional culture. In addition, it is a good idea to bring some appropriate gifts, such as a bunch of flowers or a box of Chocolates. Last but not least, you are supposed to pay attention to table manners when enjoying the meal. For example, you should avoid making noise while chewing the food or sticking your chopsticks into your food.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions would be helpful/beneficial/be of benefit to you. I am sure you will have a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
寒暄+写作背景+写作目的
提出具体建议及理由
简单予以
希望和祝愿
【常用词汇】
1.给某人提建议_______________________________________
2.向某人征求意见_______________________________________
3.如下 _______________________________________
4.在我看来_______________________________________
5.认为……有用 _______________________________________
6.参加_______________________________________
7.接受我的建议 _______________________________________
8.把……考虑在内 _______________________________________
9.关于;就 _______________________________________
10.提出 _______________________________________
give/offer sb. some advice(on)
ask sb. for advice
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