2023-2024学年高二下学期大练习作文讲解讲义

HNSDF高二下大练习讲解示范 第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分） 第一节（满分15分） 假定你是李华，你在美国笔友Peter的建议下和父母的沟通交流有所好转。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. Peter的帮助是如何改善了你和父母的沟通的； 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右。 2.请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 如何写感谢信？ 1.开门见山，表达写信目的：感谢对方的帮忙。 2.回顾当时对方对自己的帮助是如何改善自己的。（就此信来说，即写出对方的建议是如何帮助自己和父母沟通交流得以改善，具体实操可针对对方的几则建议一一展开其所发挥的积极影响） 3.再次表示感谢，如有可能，邀约见面开展某活动，以便当面表示感谢。 参考范文： Dear Peter, I'm writing to convey my appreciation to you for your warm suggestions, without which the communication between my parents and me can't be so smooth. First of all, it is your encouragement and support that relieve me. Moreover, the calm and respectful manner I am adopting has miraculously kept arguments at bay each time. For good measure, putting myself in my parents' shoes has enabled me to understand them better. In short, your suggestions have actually benefited us a lot. My appreciation is beyond words and wish you all the best. （88 words) Yours, Li Hua 下水作文： Dear Peter, I’d like to express in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your kind suggestions. With your help, the communication between my parents and me is now improving day by day. Just as you suggested, whenever our communication went wrong, I just put myself in my parents’ shoes. Surprisingly, I felt their strong love and sincere care for me despite their seemingly unacceptable ways of expressing themselves. I also tried writing them a letter instead of arguing with them face to face. And it worked. Many thanks again. Best wishes! (91 words) Yours, Li Hua 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Thirty Cents Worth Whispering voices and laughter filled the hallways of my school as I walked with my friend toward our next class. I resisted the impulse(冲动) to become yet another person using these few moments to judge others in order to make myself feel better. I repeated to myself, “Thirty cents”, as I continued to walk in silence, something I rarely did. My f