读后续写：我最好的一场考试 My best examination 课件-2024届高三苏北七市二模英语

读后续写：我最好的一场考试 My best examination （2024届高三苏北七市二模英语） 审题： 1. 标题My Best Examination 2. 故事情节很简单，作者只身离家五百里，前往Hampton学院求学。校 长让他打扫隔壁教室，算作入学考试。这很像中国小说里的拜师学艺桥段。从立德树人角度，这是教育我们通过努力劳动实现梦想。 3. 这是入学的考试，也是人生的考试。作者通过了考试，获得了入学机会，也重新开启了信心及未来面对困难的勇气。 情节设计： P1: It occurred to me at once that here was my chance. 想法+行动+结果 P2: The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.  我的反应+老师的反应+结尾点题（best examination） 教师下水文： P1: It occurred to me at once that here was my chance. 为了证明我的价值和价值，我，甩掉了我所有的疲惫，抓起扫帚和一块布，开始彻底打扫教室。 写作技巧： 【with正面情绪，shrug off消除负面情绪，】某人+谓语动作链； 点出主题词worthiness and value With determination to prove my worthiness and value, I, shrugging off all my weariness and exhaustion, seized the broom, along with a cloth, and embarked on a thorough cleaning of the classroom. l 我尽一切努力完成任务，一直打扫和擦拭房间的每个角落以及壁橱，直到它们闪闪发光。 Exerting all my effort into the task, I kept on sweeping and wiping every corner of the room, as well as its closets until they were shining with light. 写作技巧： 现在分词作状语，谓语动作链； 写出细节closet呼应下一段首句 我工作的时间越长，我的内心的自豪感就越强烈，这提醒我，我绝对值得接受汉普顿学院提供的教育。 写作技巧： the more..., the more...句型； 无灵主语句“情绪bubbled up inside sb”； 现在分词作状语；第二次点出主题词worthy The longer I worked, the stronger sense of pride and purpose bubbled up inside me, reminding me that I was absolutely worthy of the education that Hampton Institute offered. P2: The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets. 我焦急地看着她检查我的劳动，在心里祈祷，我的努力最终会得到认可。 写作技巧： 写作分词作状语； 第三次点出主题词my efforts ...be recognized. I watched anxiously as she examined my work, praying in my heart that my efforts would ultimately be recognized. l 使我松了一口气的是，她点头表示赞同，眼睛里露出一丝惊讶。 写作技巧： 动作+表情描写（身体部位+分词构成独立主格结构） To my relief, she nodded in approval, a hint of surprise registering in her eyes. l 这是一项小任务，但我以奉献、责任和勤奋完成了它。带着一种新发现的自信，我站在她面前，准备好迎接未来的任何挑战和机遇。这是一场有价值的考试，开启了我人生的新篇章。 写作技巧： 第四次点题dedication, responsibility and diligence； 升华主题，回扣文章标题the best examination； 结尾处作者的认知从第一层面“展现自我价值”，上升到第二个层面“任何的挑战中都蕴含着机