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Continuation Writing
The Wolf at the Door
Step1: Read for basic information
when
where
who
what
how
one night last summer
a campsite in Banff National Park, Canada
Russ Fee, Elisa Rispoli, Matt Rispoli,
two boys, a wolf
The wolf attacked the Rispolis.
Russ came to help.
How did they escape?
Continuation Writing
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Russ Fee was asleep inside his tent last summer when a series of screams jolted him awake. Throwing on his shoes, he ran out to investigate. Fee and his wife were traveling through Canada’s Banff National Park to enjoy its stunning beauty and awesome wildlife. It was the latter he now encountered(遇到). Although it was dark, Fee could detect a neighboring tent in a mess. Backing out was a wolf, dragging something in his teeth. That thing was a man.
Step2: Understand the structure
背景介绍
推动故事发展
encounter a wolf
one night,last summer
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Moments earlier, Elisa and Matt Rispoli, from New Jersey, were asleep with their two young children when the wolf tore into their tent. It was like something out of a horror movie. For three minutes Matt threw his body in front of Elisa and the boys who would stand little chance of running faster than a wolf and fought the wolf with bare hands. At one point, Matt got the upper hand, pinning the wolf to the ground. But the wolf clamped its jaw onto Matt’s arm, set its powerful legs, and began tugging(拖,拽) Matt outside while Elisa was pulling on his legs trying to get him back.
故事发展
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Elisa and Matt Rispoli
The wolf
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tore into their tent.
Matt threw his body in front of Elisa and the boys.
They were asleep with their two young children.
He pinned the wolf to the ground.
Matt fought the wolf with bare hands.
clamped its jaw onto Matt’s arm, set its powerful legs, and began tugging Matt outside
Elisa was pulling on his legs trying to get him back.
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It was then that Russ Fee entered the picture. He ran at the beast, kicking it like he was kicking in a door. The wolf dropped Matt and emerged(出现) from the tent. Wol