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Continuation Writing
Produce pictures in the minds of your readers.
Use of Imagery
南昌二中 马宁
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A is waiting for B who is the only hope left for his company. He welcomes B by giving him a hug.
Role-play Game
Which pair do you think acts better?
And why?
What is told
A is waiting for B who is the only hope left for his company. He welcomes B by giving him a hug.
What is shown
Imagery
language that produces pictures in the minds of people
What is told
What is shown
Emotion
A is waiting for B who is the only hope left for his company. He welcomes B by giving him a hug.
What is shown in the video clip?
Actions
check his watch
turn to others nearby
confirm by taking off glasses
slap his thighs
clap
shake hands
hug
tears well up in his eyes
anxiety
wild joy
designed by Ma Ning
1.情感为核
2.动作成链
秘籍
How to produce pictures in the minds of your reader?
A is waiting for B who is the only hope left for his company.
Knowing that B is the last hope of his company, A awaited anxiously. He constantly checked his watch and turned to others nearby, questioning whether B was on his way. It’s him!
He welcomes B by giving him a hug.
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Activity 1: Combine the emotion and the action chain into well-connected sentences.
Pair Work
check his watch
turn to others nearby
confirm by taking off glasses
slap his thighs
clap
shake hands
hug
tears well up in his eyes
The morning classes are over, Tim dashes to the canteen.
Practice
excited,
eager
Activity 2: Work in pairs to produce a picture using language.
step 1
Read the original text carefully.
step 2
Figure out the character’s emotion.
step 3
Design an action chain based on the emotion.
There goes the bell! It’s time for lunch. Students’ urgent footsteps thunder down the hallway. Smelling the delicious aroma of food, Tim sprints as fast as his legs could carry him.
Sound
Smell
Taste