内容正文:
第三编
主题写作指导
主题写作(八)
环境保护
话题超链接
写作角度
教材单元链接
课标主题链接
人与社会:
生态环境介绍 八下
Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world?
1.志愿服务与公共服务
2.家乡和社会的变迁
人与自然:
创建文明城市、
八下
Unit 2 I'll help to clean up the city parks.
文明出游
3.世界主要国家的地理位置,不同地区的
生态特征与自然景观
4.热爱与敬畏自然,与自然和谐共生
保护的措
九全
Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth.
5.环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
施及建议
五步成文法
佳/作/构/建
Step1
审--审清题意
假如你是李华,你们班将于本周六去社区开展“保护环境,人人有
文体:
责”的志愿服务活动。你想邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语
人称:
写一封电子邮件,告诉他集合的时间和地点,活动内容,以及需要做什
时态:
么准备。
:
要求:1.包含全部要点,可适当发挥;
要点:
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数80~100。文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter.
3.
There will be a volunteer activity about protecting the environment
适当发挥.....
If there is anything that I can do, please let me know
Yours.
Li Hua
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复习指南·英语
Step2
Step3
搭--列提纲,搭框架
连--连词成句
Topie: the voluntcer aetivity
1.开篇点题:
开篇点题 protecting the envirenment:
①There will be
invile you
②'d like to
meet at our school gate at 7:00 this
to attend it.
Saturday morning, a community by
hus
2.主体内容:
①We
pul up the posters: pick up rubbish
meet at our school gate at
主体内容
An invitalion
take some drinks and a paper bag.
7: oo this Saturday morning.
wear a hat and a pair of comfortable
②We will go to a community
together.
shoes
③We'll
the posters to call on more
people to join us.
Ihope you can have a guod tine.
④After that, we'll
总结收尾
rubbish there and
put it into different bins.
You'd better
some drinks and a paper
bag. Don't forget
a hat and a pair of
comfortable shoes.
3.总结收尾:
1 hope you can have a good time.
Step4
Step5
组--组句成篇
修--修饰美化
Dear lPeter.
①添加主题句,引出活动内容
There will be a volunteer activity about protecting the
the information for it
environment. I'd like to invite you to attend it.
②广写句子,添加目的状语totakeaction..突出活动的意义:
①We are going lo meet al our school gate at 7:oo this
We'll pnt np the posters to call on more people
Saturday morning, Then we will go to a community by bus together.
for the environmental protcction with us
② We'll put up the posters to eall on more people to join us. After
③条件状语从句改写本句,使语气更委婉
that, we'll pic